Virtual fleet 1.0

[guppy338]

you no my story line im try to get a meeting between the jaffa lushen alince and the earth do you think ashen can be part of the meeting or not

[Experiment 442]

no.

The story was rather hard to get your head around. Are you using word? Because i so, check your grammer and spelling never use the window text box and/or notepad. So, they stole three hat'aks then? why? We have ships that can destroy hat'aks with one shot. Why would we use them?

[locutes]

also, a block of text I will not add to the site. It is unreadable.

[guppy338]

So, they stole three hat'aks then? why? We have ships that can destroy hat'aks with one shot. Why would we use them?

well i no the ship are weak but the fact that they use them is we are gunna use them to infiltrate the orgnisation

also, a block of text I will not add to the site. It is unreadable

where is it so i can change it

[Experiment 442]

he means the whole thing i think. and it is rather unreadable. I read through it three or four times before i understood it properly, at least i think

[guppy338]

not all the mistake come up i will try to fix it

[guppy338]

see if that makes more seance if not i can send you them to change

[Experiment 442]

The thing is: you wrote an ark that was this long:

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when it could have been:

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that long.

take a look at part IV of 'lines in space' i could have just pointed out the main things that happen and be done with it, but if you descibe the actions that happen in more detail it becomes better for the reader.

[ha'tak_]

is it okey that I make a like a new race but it is int more like the vanaheim and the Asgard?

[locutes]

why should you not be allowed

[thekillman]

oh pitches can be added anytime.


i'm interested. though remember there are already quite some ancient races and now we have 2 asgard races, so dont make it too much of a branchoff.

[thekillman]

i was thinking of incorporating Troy into this fleet. if you remember, the ancients are essentially the romans, yet the romans imitated the Greek. so what if the greek were the altera and the ancients were the romans, and the greek travelled to troy. this might sound stupid, but Ida is a mountain near troy (meaning troy is in a different galaxy).

though it might be destroyed, i'd love to see how things go there.

[locutes]

Troy could be the capital of the Ancients in Andromeda

[thekillman]

could be. maybe they're a new race or so?

[locutes]

we must be a bit careful with new races, SG's got so much of them already