Wraiths:The Smallest Hive

[The Flyattractor]

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7387839/1/
My first attempt at a fan fic.

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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7404485/...lest_Hive_chp2

pt 2

[The Flyattractor]

Wow. 82 and still on the first page.
I am impressed.

[Stargate Atlantis Girl]

Not really a huge wraith fan but I find it interesting. Good writing style also

[The Flyattractor]

10-Q for the kind reply.
And I have always just liked it when "the bad guys" pov got told.
And I got the idea for this after reading Draco's hive 53.

So blame her.

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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7981822/...lest_Hive_pt_3
chp3 now added

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So any opinions or critisims so far?
This is my first reall attempt at a actual story project.

[Stargate Atlantis Girl]

I like it, it's cool to read in a different view because you never really think about what a Wraith's life would be like, I think it would be neat to learn about the stuff that we never found out about the wraiths in Atlantis that we all wanted to know-but that's just a suggestion More please

[The Flyattractor]

I like it, it's cool to read in a different view because you never really think about what a Wraith's life would be like, I think it would be neat to learn about the stuff that we never found out about the wraiths in Atlantis that we all wanted to know-but that's just a suggestion More please

Thanks for the pos view. And what kind of stuff are you thinking of about the Wraith?

I have the feeling I got a few wraith stories I could so so any padding...I MEAN SUGJESTIONS are welcome..

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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8576052/1/
pt 4 now up......i think.

[Stargate Atlantis Girl]

Thanks for the pos view. And what kind of stuff are you thinking of about the Wraith?

I have the feeling I got a few wraith stories I could so so any padding...I MEAN SUGJESTIONS are welcome..

hmmmm, haha I know it's very random but I've always wondered where they got their clothes from.....just a thought Also curious about how they decide when a drone is a drone (Wraith's with the masks I'm refering to, I think drone is what they're called...) and all the other ones as well. Also curious about runners more. Just the little stuff that was never mentioned.

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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/9679450/1/
Part 5. At long last. yay... Damn I am slow.

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wow that was bareley 3 pages.....(shouldn't post stuff when drunk...Oh well)

[Stargate Atlantis Girl]

I liked it

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