Originally posted by Jper
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I like it more as an extra element. It's more central about Rodney getting into trouble and getting whumped... I like it more when Jennifer is heavily involved or the whole team and the plot is more about Ancient mysteries and such. Like PJM is more whump than let's say Timeless. had great side elements. And I already know Touch of Chaos will too!
But over that, I of course prefer "Romancing Rodney" or "An night under the stars". Especially the latter!
But over that, I of course prefer "Romancing Rodney" or "An night under the stars". Especially the latter!
I use Puddle Jumper Mayhem to blow off steam after a bad day (I seem to have a lot of those )
Touch of Chaos had no whump at all in it for a long time... but I couldn't resist! Timeless was the opposite, it had far more whump. I transferred the whump I had envisioned into Veil of Dreams
However I must admit (Sorry I hope you appreciate my honest opinion.) That I thought Veil of Dreams wasn't that great in the beginning. The end was unbelievable. But I don't know about the beginning and the start-setting... At first I did not like the combination whump/smut in such a contrast. Also, I thought the setting/situation was weird, them immediately jumping each other. Anyway, it's not that I want to bash your or that is was awful, no absolutely not, it was probably not my cup of tea in the beginning. But Oh boy, the end... Plus, it was great writing and the chapter on itself were great. Just the combination, and a little bit the begin plot...
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