Radek Zelenka/David Nykl Appreciation, Thunk, Translation Thread

[Reefgirl]

I have a problem with that too, the odd word or phrase but whole sentances are a bit much IMO

[Pajus]

I have a problem with that too, the odd word or phrase but whole sentances are a bit much IMO

I couldn't help myself and in doing so I have condemned the entire story to be unsuccessful

[Shesmetet]

If you think this about yourself, you should take a look at me...

Oooooh nice

I know, I have issues LOL *sighs* but there are lot more important things to worry about! Love your gaia avatar by the way, cute!!

And here's one from me



My hair is darker tho

Awwww Reefgirl, that's really cute too!!

I couldn't help myself and in doing so I have condemned the entire story to be unsuccessful

Hmmm maybe I'm biased, but I love the Czech lines

[Reefgirl]

I couldn't help myself and in doing so I have condemned the entire story to be unsuccessful

Don't be so hard on yourself, it's only natural you should want to write dialogue between your character and Zelenka in Czech but you have to realise you're posting your story in the English section and having lots of Czech dialogue, even tho there is translations, is hard for us english speakers to digest. Think of it this way, If I posted a story in the Czech part of ff.net and 30 or 40% of the dialogue was in English, would you carry on reading knowing you couldn't understand any of what was being said?

It is a good story and you write M rated fic very well, the only concern I have is the acres of Czech dialogue is putting people off reading, that's all

[Rosehawk]

All I can do is stop by tonight and say hi and bye.

Damn I need a good Zelenka *thunk*. Oh well there is always tomorrow.

[Pajus]

Don't be so hard on yourself, it's only natural you should want to write dialogue between your character and Zelenka in Czech but you have to realise you're posting your story in the English section and having lots of Czech dialogue, even tho there is translations, is hard for us english speakers to digest. Think of it this way, If I posted a story in the Czech part of ff.net and 30 or 40% of the dialogue was in English, would you carry on reading knowing you couldn't understand any of what was being said?

It is a good story and you write M rated fic very well, the only concern I have is the acres of Czech dialogue is putting people off reading, that's all

Thank you, Master Reef. Your words are kinder than those I deserve

[Reefgirl]

I never leave a bad review, I'll offer advice if I feel it's warrented, if I don't like the story I don't leave a review, I've been flamed and critisised and it's not nice so I don't do it as I know how upsetting it can be

[Pajus]

I never leave a bad review, I'll offer advice if I feel it's warrented, if I don't like the story I don't leave a review, I've been flamed and critisised and it's not nice so I don't do it as I know how upsetting it can be

Will you give me the names of those, who did left bad reviews to you. I feel i need to excercise my skills in... 'Lightsaber surgery'

[Reefgirl]

They're not on this site but you're more than welcome to have a look at the site I write my factual stuff for *Evilgrin*

[Pajus]

They're not on this site but you're more than welcome to have a look at the site I write my factual stuff for *Evilgrin*

Post the link, Master Reef

[Reefgirl]

this is my personal space http://www.bbc.co.uk/dna/h2g2/brunel/U190551 click on the link that says Guide entries and read the ones that say Edited (the piece on Sg-1 I didn't write I updated) and read the peer review comments and you will see what the words 'Get a Life' really mean

[Rosehawk]

I know, but sadly these two attacking styles form the cornerstone of other defensive styles (Shien and Niiman)

I discussed this with my clone and he quite agrees, we have a bit of a problem here. I don't want to learn anything that turns me into a vicious evil killing machine - even in fun.

*THUNK*

Spoiler:

I couldn't help myself and in doing so I have condemned the entire story to be unsuccessful

Pajus, don't be so hard on yourself. You are only unsuccessful if you have an idea and don't try it. One of the hardest part about writing is taking out the things that you love or like to make a story work for the intended audience. Your story idea is really good, I should know I have read most of the other chapters already. Reefgirl gives good advice, take it to heart and don't beat yourself up over it. Just learn from it.

[Rosehawk]

Wow, it's getting quiet here at night again.

[Pajus]

I discussed this with my clone and he quite agrees, we have a bit of a problem here. I don't want to learn anything that turns me into a vicious evil killing machine - even in fun.

*THUNK*

Spoiler:

Let us make one thing clear, young padawan. I said I'll have to teach you something, but I have never said you have to use it in any way. Besides - You can always adapt the techniques you learn to your personality. One example:

Shien is a combat style designed to defend ones self from multiple opponents with guns. Anakin Skywalker adapted this style to become one of the most aggressive fighting styles ever, useful in fighting a single opponent armed with a lightsaber.

I already have a few ideas that could adapt Ataru and Juyo to be less offensive

Pajus, don't be so hard on yourself. You are only unsuccessful if you have an idea and don't try it. One of the hardest part about writing is taking out the things that you love or like to make a story work for the intended audience. Your story idea is really good, I should know I have read most of the other chapters already. Reefgirl gives good advice, take it to heart and don't beat yourself up over it. Just learn from it.

Thank you. Sometimes it is hard to see who is the master and who is the apprentice here.

[Pajus]

Wow, it's getting quiet here at night again.

Radek: I don't think Elizabeth will go out with you, Rodney.

Radney: Why not? I'm smart, funny and handsome.

Radek: She's already with me.

Rodney: *Gasping for air* WHAT???