Part four!
Originally posted by Hope24
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Okay here is my part for June RR...guys I think I will post in two parts.
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John stood still for a moment, frowning, too stun. Too stun to move, his heart stopping, then to an increasing pounding in his chest. Teyla’s familiar form and face was no where to be seen in the crowd around him. John began to franticly scan the moving crowd of people around him for any sign of Teyla as he fought to keep his fears at bay. John started to back track from their path, from the area that their car was located to where they were previously, searching, uncaring, that he may have been slightly shoving some of the people out of his way as he called out Teyla’s name repeatedly.
Something in the near distance drew his attention. It was the color of clothing. It reminded him of the outfit Teyla was wearing today. So he tried to get a better look. John hurriedly tried to make his way through the crowd of people. From his position, what he could see was that the person wasn’t alone. They were being accompanied by two men. The two men formed a wall around the person. The two were on both sides of the person, shielding them. And the men’s clothing may have seemed in tune with their surrounding, looking as if they were regular shoppers, but his instincts told him these weren’t civilians. His heart told him it was Teyla and she was in trouble.
So John hastened his pace, moving through the crowds, scaling steps, two or three at a time. He now had visual confirmation by his proximity that the person who was with the two men was indeed Teyla.
The men were just entering the near by parking lot and he was on their heel. They hadn’t notice his progress on them yet.
John saw a large black SUV making its way toward the two men who had Teyla, her body almost seemed lifeless now, being held up, and carried along by the two men. The SUV stopping, as one of men grabbed one of the doors to open it. That’s when the man saw John and notified the other man who turned toward John’s approaching form. John was now in a full out sprint to the parking lot and the waiting SUV.
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John stood still for a moment, frowning, too stun. Too stun to move, his heart stopping, then to an increasing pounding in his chest. Teyla’s familiar form and face was no where to be seen in the crowd around him. John began to franticly scan the moving crowd of people around him for any sign of Teyla as he fought to keep his fears at bay. John started to back track from their path, from the area that their car was located to where they were previously, searching, uncaring, that he may have been slightly shoving some of the people out of his way as he called out Teyla’s name repeatedly.
Something in the near distance drew his attention. It was the color of clothing. It reminded him of the outfit Teyla was wearing today. So he tried to get a better look. John hurriedly tried to make his way through the crowd of people. From his position, what he could see was that the person wasn’t alone. They were being accompanied by two men. The two men formed a wall around the person. The two were on both sides of the person, shielding them. And the men’s clothing may have seemed in tune with their surrounding, looking as if they were regular shoppers, but his instincts told him these weren’t civilians. His heart told him it was Teyla and she was in trouble.
So John hastened his pace, moving through the crowds, scaling steps, two or three at a time. He now had visual confirmation by his proximity that the person who was with the two men was indeed Teyla.
The men were just entering the near by parking lot and he was on their heel. They hadn’t notice his progress on them yet.
John saw a large black SUV making its way toward the two men who had Teyla, her body almost seemed lifeless now, being held up, and carried along by the two men. The SUV stopping, as one of men grabbed one of the doors to open it. That’s when the man saw John and notified the other man who turned toward John’s approaching form. John was now in a full out sprint to the parking lot and the waiting SUV.
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