Originally posted by CazzBlade
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I'm not confused, I'd just call it the writers making stuff up as they go along 









I'm sorry I was busy and couldn't participate in the chalenge

Originally posted by Teyilia
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Hokay This little scene here is for Linda
Thios is what I have so far at least, but sadly this scene is for Flooded With Blackness (the blackhole story)

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John arrived in the briefing room, the city as a who;le was rocking about with the waves, which was odd. "Am I still dreaming or are we on rough water again?" He asked those present.
"No actually the city is rocking, we just brough in the rest of the people from the settlement. the waters rising pretty quick." Rodney said.
"Any idea why?" Caldwell asked.
"If this is anything like P3W-42I it means we got trouble." Rodney said.
"What kind of trouble?" John asked.
"A blackhole" Radek said.
"We got us a big problem." Rodney said ignoring Radek. "a really big problem."
"It's a blackhole" Radek repated.
"What exactly is the problem Rodney?" Weir asked.
"We got us...." Rodney said going back to his computer, allowing Radek to finish.
"... A blackhole." Radek said, everyone stared at the pair of technogeeks as if they were drunk.
"What?" Caldwell asked.
"Where?" John asked.
"How much time do we have?" Weir asked.
"Can ya give us a moment to think please?" Rodney said pointing a thumb to Radek to let him do the talking as Rodney went over things.
"Considering the time the water begain to rise last night around midught Atlantis Centeral time, the planets sun didn't exactly expand on itself, it rather more or less fell in on itself, thus causing the flooding." Radek said.
"Why water though? it's only been 12 hours since the water started to go up." Caldwell said.
"Which goes to show we are screwed." Rodney said. "look, the sun that this planet has bene in orbit of is just like a ZedPM, when it reachs max it goes dead, menaing blackhole."
"So what do we do?" Weir asked, looking to everyone, and noticing the looks Sheppard was throwing towards one of his teammates.
Teyla spoke first, "Is there a way to leave this planet before things get toorough in terms of the water?"
"There is the city is flyable yes. But where do we go? A Blackhole sucks in anything." Rodney said.
"We take the city out to the farthest planet of the system and wait in really far orbit. At least untillwecan think of what to do at least." John said thoughtfully.
"What are you thinking Col Sheppard?" Caldwell asked.
"Nothing right now sir" John answered lying through his teeth as he was in fact thinking of a certain Athosian woman at the time.
To Be Continued.
"No actually the city is rocking, we just brough in the rest of the people from the settlement. the waters rising pretty quick." Rodney said.
"Any idea why?" Caldwell asked.
"If this is anything like P3W-42I it means we got trouble." Rodney said.
"What kind of trouble?" John asked.
"A blackhole" Radek said.
"We got us a big problem." Rodney said ignoring Radek. "a really big problem."
"It's a blackhole" Radek repated.
"What exactly is the problem Rodney?" Weir asked.
"We got us...." Rodney said going back to his computer, allowing Radek to finish.
"... A blackhole." Radek said, everyone stared at the pair of technogeeks as if they were drunk.
"What?" Caldwell asked.
"Where?" John asked.
"How much time do we have?" Weir asked.
"Can ya give us a moment to think please?" Rodney said pointing a thumb to Radek to let him do the talking as Rodney went over things.
"Considering the time the water begain to rise last night around midught Atlantis Centeral time, the planets sun didn't exactly expand on itself, it rather more or less fell in on itself, thus causing the flooding." Radek said.
"Why water though? it's only been 12 hours since the water started to go up." Caldwell said.
"Which goes to show we are screwed." Rodney said. "look, the sun that this planet has bene in orbit of is just like a ZedPM, when it reachs max it goes dead, menaing blackhole."
"So what do we do?" Weir asked, looking to everyone, and noticing the looks Sheppard was throwing towards one of his teammates.
Teyla spoke first, "Is there a way to leave this planet before things get toorough in terms of the water?"
"There is the city is flyable yes. But where do we go? A Blackhole sucks in anything." Rodney said.
"We take the city out to the farthest planet of the system and wait in really far orbit. At least untillwecan think of what to do at least." John said thoughtfully.
"What are you thinking Col Sheppard?" Caldwell asked.
"Nothing right now sir" John answered lying through his teeth as he was in fact thinking of a certain Athosian woman at the time.
To Be Continued.
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