Originally posted by ShipperWriter
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Went and read Chapter 2. SQUEEEEEEEEEE!!! It was great!
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I like the line you put in there, where Mayel reminds Teyla of Elizabeth. Hmm, I wonder who else she will remind ... 
And I can totally see Teyla and Ronan and Kanaan setting off on their journey. For some reason, that mental image steered me to "The Goonies". Wow, do I have issues. LOL

And I can totally see Teyla and Ronan and Kanaan setting off on their journey. For some reason, that mental image steered me to "The Goonies". Wow, do I have issues. LOL
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"The Goonies"?!? LMAO! However, I'm sorry to say that there will be no water slide in this episode.

Originally posted by Southern Red
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So, I had this little plot bunny while on the treadmill this morning. A snippet from my Ronon the Empath story, which we are tentatively calling "Feelings". If anyone comes up with a better title, I'm all ears. Anyway, I can see this little scene happening early in the episode.
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John scrunched up his face, squared his shoulders and reached out to ring the chime on Ronon's door. He thought he heard a familiar growl, so he opened the door and stepped inside. Ronon, who was standing with his back to the door, took a quick swipe at his eyes with the sleeve of his shirt but didn't turn around.
“How's it going, buddy?†John asked, taking another cautious step forward.
Ronon shrugged.
John looked around at the usual disarray, hoping for inspiration. “Look, ah...Woolsey wanted me to let you know that Rodney and the rest of the geeks are working on your problem, but...uh...so far...â€
“Nothing.†Ronon finished for him and took another dab at his face with the tail of his shirt.
John felt encouraged that at least the big man hadn't ordered him to go away, so he came further into the room and circled around to come face to face with his friend.
“Is there, you know, anything I can...â€
John was never able to complete his sentence because in a blink he found himself lifted by a handful of his shirtfront and slammed, none too gently, against the wall. Left with his toes dangling, John wasn't sure whether to try gripping the wall behind him or to risk grabbing onto Ronon's heaving shoulders to steady himself.
“You can leave me the hell alone. And don't call Rodney a geek. He thinks you are a real friend of his.†Ronon said and dropped John in a tumbled heap on the floor.
John wasted no time scrambling to his feet and back-peddling toward the door, tripping over his feet in the process.
“How's it going, buddy?†John asked, taking another cautious step forward.
Ronon shrugged.
John looked around at the usual disarray, hoping for inspiration. “Look, ah...Woolsey wanted me to let you know that Rodney and the rest of the geeks are working on your problem, but...uh...so far...â€
“Nothing.†Ronon finished for him and took another dab at his face with the tail of his shirt.
John felt encouraged that at least the big man hadn't ordered him to go away, so he came further into the room and circled around to come face to face with his friend.
“Is there, you know, anything I can...â€
John was never able to complete his sentence because in a blink he found himself lifted by a handful of his shirtfront and slammed, none too gently, against the wall. Left with his toes dangling, John wasn't sure whether to try gripping the wall behind him or to risk grabbing onto Ronon's heaving shoulders to steady himself.
“You can leave me the hell alone. And don't call Rodney a geek. He thinks you are a real friend of his.†Ronon said and dropped John in a tumbled heap on the floor.
John wasted no time scrambling to his feet and back-peddling toward the door, tripping over his feet in the process.

Originally posted by Southern Red
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Thanks. If it's canon, we can't ignore it.
Everyone should also go read the comments I've gotten on the writers' blog. Our fans appreciate us for sticking to canon and keeping the characters true to the show. Someone even thinks we are TPTB in disguise. LOL
Everyone should also go read the comments I've gotten on the writers' blog. Our fans appreciate us for sticking to canon and keeping the characters true to the show. Someone even thinks we are TPTB in disguise. LOL

Originally posted by Southern Red
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Thanks, but it's going to be a long wait. So far that's all I have written. I'm picturing Ronon having emotional moments with everybody of one sort or another. And maybe there might be someone who's afraid to be around him in case he knows what they are feeling. LOL
Originally posted by TheLadyMore
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Just finished Chapter 2 and heres my opinion
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I think Mayel is going to be the female version of Kolya, or Ladon is following his masters old tricks. Tsk Tsk Tsk
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