Originally posted by Southern Red
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It occured to me that that ep would have been an excellent one in which to introduce Keller. The tumour could still have exploded - when Carson was further away, and blowing a hole in the side of the tower - while she was finishing operating on the other guy. She'd then have to patch up Carson. Perhaps his arm is injured to the point where he can't operate again, meaning Keller has to be chief surgeon.
I see where he was going with the 'danger'. When you look a Echoes, another character ep, it has the same scenario - slow building tension over the course of an ep, with a 'bang' at the end. Except the bang in Echoes was the giant Deus Ex Machina of the Deadalus, and to me is the weakest part of the ep.
I liked the gunfight. It was just the setting that was a problem. I kept picturing the team wearing lederhosen.

Again, I think I remember a fanfic like this. Someone else may remember it. I think it's one where John realizes how much Elizabeth goes through when he's late.
Originally posted by Southern Red
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Originally posted by Anuna
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