Now who's he been babysitting? And I wouldn't wonder if the poor dear is asleep in a corner somewhere after babysitting...he got pretty beat up just from one day watching Torren for Teyla...
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1 teenager, and 2 pre teens.....they will mainly sleep!
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They don't care, he is just some other man to them....I get more hell from them about Keanu hanging around!
I get lots of rolling of eyes when he ever comes up.Comment
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...Ahh I get some hell about my Carson obsession. Mostly from my Mum and Dad. My Dad saw me put my Cuddly Carson in my purse once to take him with me somewhere and he says to me "Don't bring the doll with you. You're 20 years old." Like...really Dad? *trying to resist the urge to face-palm*Originally posted by Dellruby View PostComment
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*Shep comes through the hole*
Hi Aang, Carson. Dell?
Hi Shep, have fun this morning?
Ah, what? um yeah, they slept till about 10.30am, took no notice of me, I wasn't a computer or tv.
Told you they wouldn't care.
Wow, your hair looks good, what did they do?
Cut, colour, straighten.
*runs his fingers through my hair*
I like it.
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*whispers to Dell* Told you he'd like it Hiya Shep 
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Hello Shep *is only half paying attention to Shep because I'm standing in front of him and staring into his eyes*
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Yeah, hi guys. Still running his fingers through my hair
Shell we sit down?
Um, yeah sounds nice
Are you listening to me?
Good yeah, what?
Ok, I can live with this for a while.
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*I finally snap out of it* What? Oh right. *pulls Carson over to the couch and we sit down, with me on his lap, now facing Dell* Carson needs to stop using his eyes on me...
A- It's amusin' to watch ye when ye get distracted with ma' eyes...*chuckles*
Anyway I'm working on another fanfiction. It's about how Crysta Donovan came to Atlantis and everything...but I want to tell so many parts and I think it's going to be hard to follow the way it's going now. But I don't know. Because it's confusing the ever living crap out of me trying to write it. GAH.Comment
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Just start at the beginning and work your way through.Comment
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Problem with that, is that it has 3 beginnings in a way.
-The opening scene which was snurched from an episode, must work out which one though.
-Crysta's 'beginning', where she's in a memory while waiting for 'The Call' about whether she's going to Atlantis or not
-Carson's 'beginning' where he's in a memory of seeing her name on the list of personnel he had to pick from
...Which all sort of twines together after a bit, but I feel like if I do what I originally planned, it's going to be too much scene skipping and confuse the scheissa (Lol German) out of everyone who tries to read it...Comment
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Just try, and see how it turns out.....if there are flash backs then maybe they could be done later if you get my meaning.....Comment
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Yes but well Crysta's came out so well and it fits beautifully. It's when I try to do Carson's that I feel like it's all out of order.
Crap. Thank you Dell. I dunno what you did but I know exactly how to do this now. *runs to fix it so it flows better*
See, after we both were supposed to go last night (Yes I saw you at 1am your time with your coffee, big Sis) I was up for another hour writing and I think writing while dead exhausted might be what confused me with this fiction.Comment
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yes it usually helps if the brain is fully awake!
What coffee, I didn't have coffee last night!
You kinda did you know!
Who's side are you on anyway?
Yours, but, it kinda shows when you over do the coffee when you are tired.
I was really tired last night, and my eyes are really sore today.
I can tell.
How?
You're wearing your glasses, and you almost never wear them.
Oh
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I really freaking love how that blushy/sideways smiling emote came out...*is proud*
Oh um, yes, done staring at Dell's emotes now.
Um ok. So where was I? Oh yes, near done with smoothing out the rough spot in the fiction.Comment
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