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    13x03 "The Oracle"
    Synopsis: An offworld team encounters a world boasting an extraordinary woman claiming to have known the Der'kal were coming all her life, and brings her back to Stargate Command for investigation.
    Spoiler:
    A pastoral looking farming community can be seen in the distance a camera pulls back to reveal SG-5 walking steadily in its direction. The foursome (two of which are soldiers and two of which are scientists) are discussing their past three trips offworld, and how each planet recommended this one, P8X-011, as a reliable trading partner specializing in exotic spices and nutrient-rich food. Scattered cities dot the surface, but apparently 60% of the landmass is covered by sprawling farms, and this planet supplies some seventeen others with an source of quality foodstuffs. Earth's hope is that they can also establish relations, as the extra supplies could help offset the growing problem of hunger back home.

    SG-5's leader, a Major Gregory Travis, stops at the top of a high hill, looking down on the closest farm. He turns to his teammates and asks which way the town center is (the nearby settlement is apparently a sort of "welcome center" for the planet), but they don't seem to know either. Luckily, a farmhand spots them and waves them down, offering to guide them to the small township lying about four miles to the southeast. Maj. Travis accepts the offer and, after the farmhand recieves an okay from his supervisor, they depart.

    They arrive on the outskirts of a bustling community appearing to be slightly ahead of mainstream Earth technology-wise, no doubt due to the massive revenue generated by supplying so many planets with food. SG-5's guide brings them into the square, where a large crowd has gathered for some event. The farmhand says that he must return to his work, but before he leaves he gives them brief directions to the governor's office, where they can arrange a meeting with the planet's leaders. Then he leaves.

    Major Travis holds on a moment before going on, though, pushing through the crowd to see what everyone is looking at. After a moment, he sees: an elderly woman standing on a raised dias, speaking to the assembled crowd. She cries out that she knows of the "pall of darkness swallowing our brother words one by one," and a terrible "army of destruction" that will soon descend upon them all. Travis calls out to her to explain what she means, and she looks at him with a slight smile. She says, quite calmly, "The ones known as Der'kal, of course." When asked how she knows about the invasion (seeing as the incursion only began a week before), she claims to have known about it for a very, very long time... her entire life, in fact.

    Some time later, Col. Cameron Mitchell is waiting at the foot of the gate at the ISGC, watching the puddle shimmer before him. After a moment, Samantha Carter jogs in, apologizing for being late. Cameron just shrugs at that, saying that nothing has really happened yet... at least, that was the case until now. SG-5 comes walking through the portal, one of the scientists helping an elderly woman (the same one from P8X-011) along, although she seems annoyed at being treated like a fragile doll.

    Mitchell walks forward and extends a hand to their guest, introducing himself and welcoming her to Earth. The woman quickly yanks her hand free of the SG-5 member's and thanks the Colonel, introducing herself as Junaea To'nil. She takes a quick glance around the gate room, noting with satisfaction that this place seems clean enough. Carter smiles, shaking her head, and offers to take her to her temporary quarters. As the two leave, Dr. Talbot appears in the control room's window and calls Mitchell up to speak with him.

    The Colonel quickly makes his way into the room, where he finds Talbot standing there holding a folder. When asked what's up, she hands over the packet of papers, saying that she just recieved a set of orders from the Pentagon; they want her to interrogate their guest immediately. Mitchell is shocked, especially considering they just met this woman and she doesn't seem to pose any threat. But the military is convinced that anyone claiming to have known about this invasion for years could be a tangible threat, and they want assurances that this Junaea To'nil isn't.

    Meanwhile, Daniel is working on translating some comm. chatter they picked up from the Der'kal fleet over Hebridan ("Inroads, Part 2"). Vala waltzes in, twirling a Wraith stunner around her trigger finger, and plops down on the desk, asking what Dr. Jackson is upto. When asked about the stunner, she merely shrugs and says it was in the armory along with a dozen like it, no doubt having been sent back from Atlantis. Daniel then explains that he's attempting to figure out the Der'kal's strange language, which doesn't seem to have any roots in any Earth culture, unlike most other alien races. Vala, experimentally firing her stunner into the concrete walls of his officer, mutters something about the fact that they can speak the galactic language, though.

    That's when Daniel sits bolt upright, his eyes wide. Of course! They can speak the language of the Jaffa, the humans, the Serrakin... they can speak the galaxy's standard language, which would imply that they were able to learn it from somewhere, right? Vala doesn't seem to understand where he's going with this, but Daniel grabs his notes and rushes off, telling her to gather up SG-1 and Dr. Talbot in the briefing room.

    About an hour later, the requested people are sitting in the briefing room, bored (Teal'c is not present, but a passing comment of Carter's inplies that he is recovering from his wounds on Dakara). Everyone looks slightly bored. Then Dr. Jackson runs in, apologizing for being late and pulling out his notebook. He goes on to explain what he's figured out; the Der'kal have been watching this galaxy for a very, very long time. Vala's comment about their speaking galactic standard made him think of more galactic languages, not just Earthen ones. He ran their unrecognizable comm. chatter through a language analysis alongside every encountered alien dialect, and he got a 71% match with a very specific one; the Furling language as recorded at Heliopolis ("The Torment of Tantalus") and on the "paradise planet" ("Paradise Lost").

    Dr. Talbot holds up a hand then, frowning. She asks how in the world the Der'kal were able to build their language around Furling when the Furlings themselves left the galaxy in a mass exodus millions of years before (Season 12: "Requiem, Part 2"). Daniel explains that, too; what if the Furlings didn't just head out into open space when they left? What if they went to another galaxy to find refuge, much like the Ancients? And what if, along the way, they ran into the Der'kal? So far, they know that the alien invaders are coming from a certain direction, and there are 3 galaxies in that area that could have offered a chance at a new begining for the Furling people. If the two races met, it would explain the similarities in language and how the Der'kal knew to find the Milky Way.

    Daniel is about to launch into more explanation when an SF suddenly runs into the room, breathing hard. He says that there's a problem with their guest, and that they need to get down to her quarters immediately. At once, SG-1 and Dr. Talbot head out, leaving everything behind. When they arrive, they find a very disturbing sight: Junaea is writhing violently on the floor, her body contorted in pain. Talbot immediately radios for a medical team while Vala rushes forward, bending down to try and stabilize the old woman. Daniel shouts that if they don't get her to stop soon, she could seriously injure herself, and Vala takes matters into her own hands by pulling out the stunner she was toying with and firing a few blasts into Junaea's body. A moment later, she lies still.

    The medical team arrives and gets her onto a cart, preparing to wheel her away to the infirmary. But as they pass through the doorway, Junaea's eyes shoot open and she grabs Daniel's jacket sleeve, shouting that "the past has returned!" before fainting.

    Later on, Dr. Lam exits the infirmary to see SG-1 waiting outside. She explains that the ran a scan on Junaea's body and found something that SG-5 missed when they did a glance-over offworld; a small device of some kind is lodged near her brain. Lam says she has a surgical team working on removing it now, but the growth around it makes it appear that the device, whatever it is, has been there for some time now. Carter suggests talking to her once she wakes up, but Mitchell reminds her that the Pentagon still wants her interrogated for information. Lam quickly points out that Junaea is in no condition to speak to anyone right now, let alone be subjected to an IOA-esque interrogation process. She says she'll bog the Pentagon down in medical blocks as long as she can, then head back inside the infirmary.

    While the rest of the team returns to their duties, Vala eases the door open and walks to the bed where the elderly woman lies asleep. She leans down and asks why she is such a mystery, but also apologizes for having to stun her. Then, very slowly, the woman opens her eyes. Vala stands, about to call for Dr. Lam, but Junaea asks her to wait. Perplexed, she sits back down.

    Back in the briefing room, Daniel is finishing what he started earlier. He put forth that the Der'kal must have encountered the Furling exodus fleet and obtained the location of the Milky Way from them. But, as Mitchell points out, they could have invaded the galaxy millions of years ago were that tha case. Jackson doesn't really have a response to that, merely saying that perhaps they were waiting for things to be at their weakest; fighting the Alliance of old would have been suicide, and the System Lords may also have provided a tough foe, as would have the Ori. But now the galaxy is fairly weak, still recovering from two major wars, and they could concievably conquer them in a short time (he mentions that five outlying Jaffa worlds near Hebridan have suddenly blacked out, as well, suggesting the Der'kal are working on establishing a firm beachhead). Dr. Talbot acknowledges and says she'll forward his ideas to both Heliopolis and New York, then dismisses the team.

    In the infirmary, Vala is asking Junaea what happened to her, and why she claims she knew about the Der'kal invasion. The old woman explains that, many years before, she was part of the crew of an al'kesh transporting cargo between two of Heru'ur's planets on the edge of the galaxy. One day, a hyperspace window opened near their ship (in deep space) and a massive cruiser emerged (from her description, this ship is recognized as a Der'kal warship). The alien vessel disabled their al'kesh and ringed aboard, killing the rest of the crew with ease. She remembered the alien soldiers well enough to know that they are the same as these "Der'kal," of which rumors are apparently spreading. One such soldier spared her alone, telling her to take her ship back to her world and tell her people that their end of days was approaching, and then they left. They ringed back abaord their ship, waited a moment, and then the vessel jumped into hyperspace.

    Junaea asks then what the people here plan to do with her, and Vala sadly mentions the problem with the Pentagon, to which the other woman says she'd rather die than be subjected. Vala is about to ask what else she knows when she suddenly convulses again. Dr. Lam rushes in with a med team and says they need to get her into surgery immediately, and they push her away. Vala watches, a look of fright on her face, then runs off to find the others.

    (See next post for more)
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      (More of "The Oracle," see previous post for first bit)
      Spoiler:
      She finds Daniel and Carter still in the briefing room, chatting, and tells them she has news. Quickly, she explains what Junaea told her about her run-in with the Der'kal years ago. This shocks the two others, of course, but Daniel says it is to be expected. If his hypothesis is right, the Der'kal would have had to check the galactic state of things every so often, and that could be achieved by jumping in a ship, scanning around, then leaving.

      Suddenly, shouting can be heard from Dr. Talbot's office, and the trio glances over; a man in a suit can be seen inside, arguing with the base's new commander. A moment later, the door is slammed open, and the man marches out, muttering something about how Talbot is even "more stubborn than Landry." Carter walks into the office and asks what that was all about, to which Talbot replies that the man was a UN representative dispatched as soon as word reached New York about Junaea. Apparently, they also support the woman's interrogation, and given her convulsings, they think something is seriously dangerous about her. When Vala mentions her run-in with the Der'kal, Talbot's mood only darkens. With that knowledge, the Pentagon could claim that she was exposed to the enemy and therefore a threat to national security, and have her taken out of the ISGC.

      Downstairs, the UN rep is walking towards the infirmary when two SFs step in his way. He demands they move, but they claim that the informary has been placed into quarantine in case their offworld guest is dangerous, as he suggested, and he is not allowed in. But finally the man pulls rank and credentials and forces the SFs to move aside, marching into the medical bay. Dr. Lam demands to know what he wants, and he says that he's here to take their "guest" back to New York to be properly cared for. Thankfully, though, Lam is able to stonewall him with the fact that Junaea is still in surgery, and therefore he must wait at least an hour until the procedure is complete. The man radiates anger and annoyance, but he agrees and leaves the room.

      About 45 minutes later, Dr. Lam meets in secret with Dr. Talbot in a supply closet, hoping that the UN representative will not be able to see them talking here, of all places. Lam says the operation was a success and the device was removed, and it was sent to Col. Carter's lab for a look. Sam has determined that it is Der'kal in origin, given the design, and says that they no doubt implanted it in Junaea when they found her out on the edge of the galaxy. But there's a problem; the device seems to have a two-fold purpose. One is to cause convulsions whenever she attempts to reveal certain information, but the second is by far more interesting--the device has a small hologram-generator in it, capable of emitting a one-inch high hologram, and Sam thinks she can get it to work. Talbot says she'll look into it right away, and asks Lam to hold off the UN and the Pentagon just a little while longer.

      In Carter's lab, SG-1 is gathered and waiting for Talbot to arrive. When she does enter, looking behind her to make sure the UN representative is not watching, she asks Sam to try and make this quick. At once, the Colonal activates the device, and a small bluish holographic projection of a Der'kal head appears. The warrior seen there bows his head, and greets whomever is watching this recording. He says that the person this device was found in has been made a harbinger of doom, a witness to the awesome might of his people, and that there is nothing anyone can do to stop the destruction that will soon visit them. Then it winks out. Mitchell is annoyed, asking if that's all they got from it, but Daniel notes that they did learn something; the Der'kal have a strain of vanity to capture someone for no other purpose than to do this... and they can use that against them.

      A short time later, Vala is walking in the hallway towards the infirmary, intending to visit Junaea and see how she is... and possible learn more about her encounter. Suddenly, though, she hears shouting, and she runs in to find the UN representative screaming at Dr. Lam. A short distance away, Junaea lies unmoving on her bed. Finally, the UN rep storms out, declaring that he'll have Lam's head.

      Vala asks what's going on, and Caroline explains: Junaea didn't survive the surgery. One of the surgeons slipped, and the knife sliced into her brain, killing her instantly. But Lam's face betrays a sign of guilt, and Vala asks what's going on. But the Doctor merely holds out and takes Vala's hand, clasping it tightly. Slowly nodding, Vala stiffly mentions that it's too bad about the accident, then turns and leaves. Dr. Lam turns back to her station, preparing to fill out her report.

      On P8X-011, SG-1 (still minus Teal'c) arrives to return Janaea's body to her people. A great many begin crying when they lower the bodybag to the ground on the town square, but Vala suddenly kneels beside it and rips it open, revealing the corpse. Carter demands to know what she's doing, and Vala explains that Dr. Lam pressed a syringe and a note into her hand in the infirmary, telling her to inject the body with it once they were offworld. She pressed down on the syringe and the liquid inside is successfully injected... and a moment later, Junaea opens her eyes; Vala reveals that Dr. Lam simply induced an experimental medical coma that severely slows down bodily functions (she said she saw a description in the Asgard medical database), and synthesized a small amount of chemical to bring someone out of it. This way, Junaea could be taken back to her people without the Pentagon or UN getting their hands on her.

      The old woman sits up and thanks SG-1, apologizing for not being able to offer them anything more. But the team is just happy that things turns out alright, and they say their good-byes and head for the gate.
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        Originally posted by s09119 View Post
        (More of "The Oracle," see previous post for first bit)
        Spoiler:
        She finds Daniel and Carter still in the briefing room, chatting, and tells them she has news. Quickly, she explains what Junaea told her about her run-in with the Der'kal years ago. This shocks the two others, of course, but Daniel says it is to be expected. If his hypothesis is right, the Der'kal would have had to check the galactic state of things every so often, and that could be achieved by jumping in a ship, scanning around, then leaving.

        Suddenly, shouting can be heard from Dr. Talbot's office, and the trio glances over; a man in a suit can be seen inside, arguing with the base's new commander. A moment later, the door is slammed open, and the man marches out, muttering something about how Talbot is even "more stubborn than Landry." Carter walks into the office and asks what that was all about, to which Talbot replies that the man was a UN representative dispatched as soon as word reached New York about Junaea. Apparently, they also support the woman's interrogation, and given her convulsings, they think something is seriously dangerous about her. When Vala mentions her run-in with the Der'kal, Talbot's mood only darkens. With that knowledge, the Pentagon could claim that she was exposed to the enemy and therefore a threat to national security, and have her taken out of the ISGC.

        Downstairs, the UN rep is walking towards the infirmary when two SFs step in his way. He demands they move, but they claim that the informary has been placed into quarantine in case their offworld guest is dangerous, as he suggested, and he is not allowed in. But finally the man pulls rank and credentials and forces the SFs to move aside, marching into the medical bay. Dr. Lam demands to know what he wants, and he says that he's here to take their "guest" back to New York to be properly cared for. Thankfully, though, Lam is able to stonewall him with the fact that Junaea is still in surgery, and therefore he must wait at least an hour until the procedure is complete. The man radiates anger and annoyance, but he agrees and leaves the room.

        About 45 minutes later, Dr. Lam meets in secret with Dr. Talbot in a supply closet, hoping that the UN representative will not be able to see them talking here, of all places. Lam says the operation was a success and the device was removed, and it was sent to Col. Carter's lab for a look. Sam has determined that it is Der'kal in origin, given the design, and says that they no doubt implanted it in Junaea when they found her out on the edge of the galaxy. But there's a problem; the device seems to have a two-fold purpose. One is to cause convulsions whenever she attempts to reveal certain information, but the second is by far more interesting--the device has a small hologram-generator in it, capable of emitting a one-inch high hologram, and Sam thinks she can get it to work. Talbot says she'll look into it right away, and asks Lam to hold off the UN and the Pentagon just a little while longer.

        In Carter's lab, SG-1 is gathered and waiting for Talbot to arrive. When she does enter, looking behind her to make sure the UN representative is not watching, she asks Sam to try and make this quick. At once, the Colonal activates the device, and a small bluish holographic projection of a Der'kal head appears. The warrior seen there bows his head, and greets whomever is watching this recording. He says that the person this device was found in has been made a harbinger of doom, a witness to the awesome might of his people, and that there is nothing anyone can do to stop the destruction that will soon visit them. Then it winks out. Mitchell is annoyed, asking if that's all they got from it, but Daniel notes that they did learn something; the Der'kal have a strain of vanity to capture someone for no other purpose than to do this... and they can use that against them.

        A short time later, Vala is walking in the hallway towards the infirmary, intending to visit Junaea and see how she is... and possible learn more about her encounter. Suddenly, though, she hears shouting, and she runs in to find the UN representative screaming at Dr. Lam. A short distance away, Junaea lies unmoving on her bed. Finally, the UN rep storms out, declaring that he'll have Lam's head.

        Vala asks what's going on, and Caroline explains: Junaea didn't survive the surgery. One of the surgeons slipped, and the knife sliced into her brain, killing her instantly. But Lam's face betrays a sign of guilt, and Vala asks what's going on. But the Doctor merely holds out and takes Vala's hand, clasping it tightly. Slowly nodding, Vala stiffly mentions that it's too bad about the accident, then turns and leaves. Dr. Lam turns back to her station, preparing to fill out her report.

        On P8X-011, SG-1 (still minus Teal'c) arrives to return Janaea's body to her people. A great many begin crying when they lower the bodybag to the ground on the town square, but Vala suddenly kneels beside it and rips it open, revealing the corpse. Carter demands to know what she's doing, and Vala explains that Dr. Lam pressed a syringe and a note into her hand in the infirmary, telling her to inject the body with it once they were offworld. She pressed down on the syringe and the liquid inside is successfully injected... and a moment later, Junaea opens her eyes; Vala reveals that Dr. Lam simply induced an experimental medical coma that severely slows down bodily functions (she said she saw a description in the Asgard medical database), and synthesized a small amount of chemical to bring someone out of it. This way, Junaea could be taken back to her people without the Pentagon or UN getting their hands on her.

        The old woman sits up and thanks SG-1, apologizing for not being able to offer them anything more. But the team is just happy that things turns out alright, and they say their good-byes and head for the gate.
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          The ending of that episode was awesome! I just read all of Season 11 and 12, you made a great start on S13! This is awesome, I can't wait for the next one!

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            Awesome. I just finished reading Season 12, already read 11. "Inroads" is great but I feel that the Garrin plot was ended too fast, really rushed at the end and that the Der'kal were brought in a bit too fast as well. Other than that I really love this and can't wait for the rest. Guess its time to go read "The Oracle".

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              Originally posted by Zar_wolf View Post
              Awesome. I just finished reading Season 12, already read 11. "Inroads" is great but I feel that the Garrin plot was ended too fast, really rushed at the end and that the Der'kal were brought in a bit too fast as well. Other than that I really love this and can't wait for the rest. Guess its time to go read "The Oracle".
              Well, Garrin never was anything more than a set-up for the Der'kal arc, so I don't really know what to say there... I never intended for him to make it to Season 12, and his entire storyline was built around him amassing enough force to keep the Alliance off-balance. He was supposed to be the kind of baddie that, at the time, seemed like a powerful new threat but in retrospect is only a minor thing.

              And what do you mean the Der'kal were brought in to fast, just out of curiosity? I don't quite understand your meaning.
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                it's going well.
                So, basically the Fate of the Furlings is similar to the ancients. The Der'kal were the waith to them, at least that's what it looks like.

                I'm still wonder why they've waited so long to invade the MW. They could have done that when the system lord still was forming cause the goul'd wasn't that powerful. I supose that more background history of them is coming up.

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                  Originally posted by KikeGate View Post
                  it's going well.
                  So, basically the Fate of the Furlings is similar to the ancients. The Der'kal were the waith to them, at least that's what it looks like.

                  I'm still wonder why they've waited so long to invade the MW. They could have done that when the system lord still was forming cause the goul'd wasn't that powerful. I supose that more background history of them is coming up.
                  Looks can be decieving sometimes, though, can't they? The Furlings play a larger role in things than is clear right now... but what that role is, exactly, remains to be seen.

                  And yes, there will be a more in-depth explanation of that coming up. Remember, insofar Daniel only has a theory as to what happened between the Der'kal and Furlings; in reality, we don't know yet.
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                    Originally posted by s09119 View Post
                    Looks can be decieving sometimes, though, can't they? The Furlings play a larger role in things than is clear right now... but what that role is, exactly, remains to be seen.

                    And yes, there will be a more in-depth explanation of that coming up. Remember, insofar Daniel only has a theory as to what happened between the Der'kal and Furlings; in reality, we don't know yet.
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                      13x04 "Routed"
                      Synopsis: A Jaffa refugee fleet is ambushed in deep space with SG-1 aboard, and the team must work alongside their allies to survive long enough to get word back to Earth.

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                      The Aurora can be seen cruising through hyperspace, heading to some far-off location. Onboard and standing near the bridge's largest window, SG-1 is conversing about recent events. Teal'c is back and looking fully recovered from his brief capture by the Der'kal, though he now sports a subtle slash scar along his jawline.

                      Colonel Carter is bringing up the subject of the Der'kal invasion, actually; the aliens have established a firm grip on a group of two dozen star systems bordering the galactic void, with all of the Hebridanian's former posessions under their control as well. A recent Nox attempt to liberate one such planet went badly, with the enemy outnumbering the allied vessels almost five to one. Since then, there have been no attempts to slow the Der'kal's slow but steady advance... the Alliance simply cannot afford to send another massive fleet out so soon after the devastating loss in "Shatterpoint."

                      But at least Teal'c has some good news to offer; Bra'tac spoke to him while he was on Dakara, and it seems that this new threat has rallied the Jaffa Nation towards a common goal. The scattered political and philisophical groups have agreed to (mostly) put aside their differences until this conflict has been resolved, and the Nation Congress recently passed a measure opening all sectors of Jaffa space to inter-Alliance trade, a major breakthrough against the Traditionalists.

                      As the ship prepares to drop out of hyperspace, though, Vala reminds them that their very mission is proof that things aren't going so great overall; the Aurora emerges to be faced by a fleet of over 100 ships, ranging from one or two ha'tak to various Goa'uld-esque ships we've never seen. This is a Jaffa refugee fleet, one of dozens according to Teal'c. Ever since the Replicator invasion of the galaxy (and continuing through the Ori and Der'kal attacks), Jaffa have been forced from their homeworlds. When that happens, they resettle on these groups of ships traveling the galaxy, never staying in once place too long, to stay safe. It's certainly not the best system, but it works.

                      This fleet in particular is a lucky one, though. Thanks to the abundance of space on now-rebuilt Dakara, there is plenty of room for at least two million refugees around the Temple; this fleet is carrying about 300,000 people, all cramped aboard these ships, so it will be good to settle them somewhere well-protected like the heart of the Jaffa Nation. SG-1 is here to help facilitate the move, at the request of Bra'tac himself.

                      The Aurora pulls up alongside one of the ha'tak and rings SG-1 abaord... after Col. Sanders reminds them to behave. Then the 304 departs, jumping back into hyperspace (the ship is apparently needed to transport SGs 4, 6, and 7 for an offworld mission). Once on the Jaffa ship, the team makes their way to the pel'tak. Along the way, they are given a glimpse at life here; quarters are cramped, and several dozen people sleep in crevices in the hallways. But it's not as if the soldiers have it any better, as they and the officers also share very cramped spaces.

                      Arriving on the bridge, SG-1 meets Menak, First Prime of this vessel ("First Prime" now refers to the Jaffa rank roughly equating "Commander." It can also refer to a General). He gladly welcomes the team, especially Teal'c, seeming to be free of the anti-Earth sentiment expressed by some Jaffa. When Mitchell inquires as to why, he explains that his father served with the detail that guarded Samantha Carter when she activated the Dakara device five years before to destroy the Replicators, and so he was taught to have great respect for the Tau'ri.

                      But now is not the time to talk; the fleet is about to make a hyperspace jump to a small Jaffa trading outpost to pick up needed supplies. Menak estimates the jump will only take an hour or so, and he suggests SG-1 take a tour of his ship while they wait to arrive. The team agrees, and, after watching the jump, head down out of the pel'tak.

                      Meanwhile, on Earth, a crisis is brewing... of sorts. Two officers (one SG team leader and one commander of a squad of ISGC guards) are quarelling in the mess hall when Dr. Talbot arrives for a bite to eat. She quickly intervenes and breaks up the fight, demanding to know what's going on. Apparently, as the SG leader explains, there's been somewhat of a rivalry going on for years between those that go offworld and those that don't over who serves the planet best, and it's coming to a head. The guard commander is demanding a way to settle the dispute at last, and he suggested that he and his squad join a mission with the SG team in question to see who performs better.

                      Of course, Talbot knows she can't have this sort of thing going on, but decides to try a little experiment. She asks the two leaders to meet her in a few hours in her office to settle this debate, then, picking up a tray of pasta, heads back to work.

                      Back in space, Daniel and Vala are talking to a small family of Jaffa that were uprooted from Kalana when the Ori took over ("Beachhead"). They left the planet a mere day before the world was attacked, and are very greatfull that they survived the ordeal... they pray to the Ancients nightly in thanks. Dr. Jackson, confused, quickly points out that the Ancients aren't gods, just powerful beings, using the Ori as an example. The Jaffa father nods, saying he knows this, but they are as close to gods as they're likely to find, and have several times changed things for the better, so why not thank them?

                      After that, Vala and Daniel leave to head back to the bridge (the hour is almost up), and begin discussing that conversation. Daniel just can't believe that people are still praying to beings they percieve as gods, even after the Ori and the Goa'uld. But Vala reminds him that these people need some hope to cling to, and if the Ancients provide that hope... then so be it. Let them have their beliefs.

                      When they re-enter the pel'tak, they find Cameron and Sam walking in, too, just having come from the engine room. Teal'c is already there, talking with several Jaffa soldiers. As the team gathers together, Menak approaches them and smiles, welcoming them back. He then turns to his helmsman and orders the ship brought out of hyperspace. They watch as the hyperspace window collapses and they emerge from the tunnel, the hundred-or-so vessels of the refugee fleet coming out with them. Before them now is a forested world with three moons, surrounded by al'kesh and death gliders. This is Telin, a planet that was already an established trading site before the fall of the System Lords.

                      Menak immediately orders supplies to be ringed aboard the fleet's ships so they can head back into space as soon as possible. Officers rush to and fro at once, operating dozens of ring transmissions from the surface. But suddenly Teal'c frowns, muttering that something seems wrong. He motions at the long-range sensor display, which should be reporting all the Jaffa al'kesh patrolling this system... but nothing is onscreen. And yet just outside the ships can be seen.

                      Glancing over herself, Carter is about to dismiss it as a technical glitch when she suddenly remembers something; during the battle over Garrin's stronghold, the sensors continually flickered in and out just before the Der'kal arrived insystem. But before she can open her mouth to say this (a flashback scene was used to convey that information to the audience), a hyperspace window can be seen opening outside. The sensors still pick nothing up, even when a Der'kal warship emerges from hyperspace and quickly approaches the refugee fleet.

                      Now noticing the threat as well, Merak radios the refugees to make an immediate jump to their rondevous point, halting all cargo transfer at once. The al'kesh around Telin turn to engage the enemy, but they are blown apart within seconds. Mitchell shouts out a question; how did the Der'kal know they were here? Vala replies that they probably didn't, considering this world is close to the No-Go zone between the conquered planets and the Jaffa Nation. This was most likely a lucky strike, intended to attack Telin but not the refugees.

                      The fleet turns as one, preparing to jump away, but some of the smaller ships cross right into the line of fire and are destroyed. The two ha'tak take potshots at the Der'kal ship as they open their hyperspace windows, but it's clear they aren't doing much damage. Before the alien cruiser can do anything else, the fleet retreats, successfully evading the attack and leaving the certain destruction of Telin behind.

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                        (Last bit of "Routed," see previous post for first half)
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                        On the Jaffa ship, the team is understandably shaken. Merak reports that they lost five smaller ships in the surprise of the attack, totalling about five-hundred lives. It's not much in the grand scheme of things, but in this tight-knit community of people, every death hits hard. Carter asks where they're going to head next, an answer Merak doesn't really have. Where do you hide a couple hundred thousand beings? Luckily, Mitchell has a suggestion; Dakara's on the other side of the galaxy, but there's a communications relay station only three hours away via hyperspace. If they can get the fleet there, they can use its long-range comm to contact Earth and request assistance. Unfortunately, several of the largest refugee ships were damaged in the attack, and most of the smaller ones lack hyperdrives fast enough to make it there ahead of the others... so they'll have to travel as one, they can't simply send a ship ahead.

                        With their next course of action decided upon, Merak departs to inform his crew. In the meantime, SG-1 tries to figure out how safe they'll probably be. Carter assumes the Der'kal will be able to track and follow them, and Mitchell thinks they should just make a straight shot through hyperspace to the relay station. But Daniel points out that the smaller ships need rests for their outdated drives to recharge, and if the Der'kal follow, they'll find and destroy them. They can't let that happen, and there is strength in numbers.

                        Back on Earth, Dr. Talbot is meeting with the two fueding leaders of ISGC's respective military presences; the SG team leader and the guardsman from earlier. She suggests a simple answer to their problems... whichever one of them can take her down in a sparring match will be declared the winner. The two military personnel exchange confused glances; Talbot is a diplomat, not a soldier. But, guessing that they both can defeat her, they agree to meet her in the gym in a half hour.

                        Meanwhile, the refugee fleet has just exited hyperspace in the middle of, literally, nowhere. Several ring transmissions can be seen between ships as various people move amongst the fleet trying to find friends and loved ones. Now in command of one of the al'kesh, Mitchell and Vala are patrolling the edge of the fleet, keeping careful watch for the Der'kal now that they can't trust sensors. Mitchell is commenting on how lonely life must be here, never being in contact with any other people, but Vala reminds him that the refugees here are constantly surrounded by others... all people who share the same sorrow they do.

                        Their chat is cut short, though, as a hyperspace window forms in the distance. A moment later, Carter's fears are confirmed as a Der'kal warship exists, already moving to attck the second ha'tak. Mitchell radios the others to let them know what's up, then brings his al'kesh in for a strafing run, determined to try and buy the fleet some time to escape. He fires the ship's belly turret into the enemy shields, scoring a dozen direct hits, but it does even less than the motherships did over Telin. He's about to come around for another go when the cruiser suddenly releases a swarm of fighters (first seen in "Inroads, Part 2"), which immediately head his way. Knowing they have to get out of here (the fleet is ready to jump), Mitchell puts the ship through a gutwrenching series of maneuvers, avoiding enemy fire and getting in formation just in time to escape.

                        On the ha'tak, Merak has some bad news. The Der'kal ship was able to volley a few shots through to the second mothership, and its shields are completely gone. And most of the smaller ships in the fleet didn't get to fully recharge their hyperdrives. When they next drop out, the relay should be nearby... but they won't have enough juice to jump away should they fall under attack again. Daniel points out that it took an hour for the Der'kal to arrive last time... maybe they can hold on that long this time, too.

                        At last, the refugee fleet emerges from hyperspace, a small space station hovering in the void just ahead. Carter radios them and identifies herself, immediately requesting a call be put through to Earth for aid. The technician onboard confirms her request, and says it will be dispatched to ISGC at once. Then she calls Mitchell, telling him and Vala to ring back to the ha'tak and meet them on the pel'tak. They have planning to do.

                        On Earth, the time has come. A large crowd has gathered in the gym, watching Dr. Talbot (dressed in athletic track pants and a halter-top) do some stretches. Then the door opens, and the SG team leader and the commander of the base guard walk in, each in workout clothing themselves. Danielle smiles at them, asking for just a minute more to finish stretching... then asks who wants to go first. The two bicker for a moment, but ultimately it's decided that the SG leader will go. He steps into the sparring ring and faces Talbot, ready to fight, but the diplomat merely circles him, her arms raised in a weak defensive stance.

                        The SG team leader charges, confident she has no idea what she's doing. But in an instant, her stance shifts to a strong and rooted one, and she lashes out with a vicious thrust kick that catches the soldier in the ribs. He is thrown back a few feet and gasps in pained surprise. He attacks again, this time going higher, but Talbot ducks under his arm, twists it around, and delivers a hard puch to his chest, knocking him against a wall. The major rolls away at once as another series of kicks are thrown his way, then backs off, claiming that she never told them she could fight.

                        Talbot merely shrugs, smiling, and replies that they never asked if she was well-versed in martial arts (she goes on to reveal she holds black belts in several Asian styles, including Tae Kwan Do and Okinawan karate). When the guard commander asks how she knows so many forms... she smiles wider, asking what he thought diplomats did when there was actually peace in the world? She continues with a decree that this fued must end, and she hopes this has proven that no one faction is any better than another, a point which the SG team leader immediately agrees to. The meeting is then broken up when Walter Harriman can be heard calling for Dr. Talbot in the control room; SG-1 has just reported in some news she'll want to hear.

                        Some time later, the Jaffa refugee fleet is bracing for the worst. Carter and Merak have ordered all the ships into a defensive position around the smallest and weakest ones, with the al'kesh out front followed by the two ha'tak. After a moment of reative peace, the tranquility is broken and the Der'kal warship reappears. At once, Merak orders the fleet to open fire with everything they've got, and a barrage of plasma blasts begins. The alien cruiser fires back, its rapid-fire emeral bursts chewing through the outer al'kesh and clawing into the second, un-shielded ha'tak.

                        Merak asks Sam how much longer they can keep this up, but she honestly doesn't know. Thankfully, though, sensor scans are picking up the enemy shields, which seem to be dropping. Hopefully, they'll be able to do enough damage that--wait! The second ha'tak is finally blown apart when a stary blast hits is reactor. The resulting explosion takes out two refugee ships and sends sharapnel in all directions. Der'kal fightercraft also pour into the battle, engaging the dozens of death gliders dispatched to meet them.

                        As enemy fire begins to seriously hammer the ha'tak's shields, Carter radios the relay station and orders them to do "it" now. On the station, Mitchell and Teal'c can be seen in the control room, watching the battle, as a technician taps in a command on his keyboard... and behind him, a nuke disappears in an Asgard transport beam (Mitchell explains that, after the attack on Midway a few years before, Earth has been equipping all their stations with beaming technology and a few missile tubes). Outside, they watch as the nuke explodes on the Der'kal shields, flashing them bright whitish-green.

                        At once, Carter shouts that it was a success. The enemy shields have dropped to thirty percent, and Mitchell prepares to beam over another warhead. But before they can do anything, the Der'kal ship turns and, after recalling its fighters, jumps into hyperspace. They retreated. They retreated. A cheer of victory goes up from within the refugee fleet, as hundreds of weary Jaffa embrance one another in joy.

                        On the pel'tak, Carter and Merak shake hands, both impressed and amazed with the work of the other. And through the window, they can see five ships exiting hyperspace; the Aurora and four BC-303s coming to "save" them. The two soldiers share a laugh as Sam prepares to radio them that they're not needed after all, and prepare to get this fleet back to a safe haven.
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                          Nice stuff just read it all over the past few days and i must say , you are good at this
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                            Originally posted by Dark lord me View Post
                            Nice stuff just read it all over the past few days and i must say , you are good at this
                            Thank you I do try to plan out these things before I decide on episode ideas.
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                              I read all this over last night, and I must say, it's quite brilliant.

                              Excellent Work!

                              Edit: A caution, though; don't fall into the common sci-fi trap of assuming that all religion is bad, and that only Eastern Religions can apply in space. That displays a poor understanding of the sentient psyche.
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                                Originally posted by Lt. Col. Mcoy View Post
                                I read all this over last night, and I must say, it's quite brilliant.

                                Excellent Work!

                                Edit: A caution, though; don't fall into the common sci-fi trap of assuming that all religion is bad, and that only Eastern Religions can apply in space. That displays a poor understanding of the sentient psyche.
                                Thank you, but I'm afraid I don't quite grasp the last part... are you warning me against doing it in the future, or have I dont it somewhere already?
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