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Originally posted by neverendingimaginationView Post
It depends how much you want to focus on the pregnancies I guess, it sounds like you're maybe 6 to 8 weeks into Cassie's by the end of the last one. I don't think you want to leave it too long, the strange cravings and morning sickness issues start in early pregnancy. So considering Helen is around 6 weeks ahead, a month maybe?
As I've already shown, Cassie's already having problems of the morning sickness variety. A month it is. It works.
When it comes to what the focus is on, its mostly going to be on the team as a whole. But with special focus on Helen and Cassie.
I meant in terms of the story as a whole, if a lot happens after the pregnancies you needn't spend too long on them if you don't want to and skip several months at a time. If most of the story happens during the pregnancies you could skip a month or several weeks. It also depends if you want to gradually build up the blood cravings or have it develop suddenly.
If I've worked it out correctly, you've got maybe 6/7 months until the first birth, and another month and a half on top of that until the next. You could do that all in as little as three chapters, one mid pregnancy, then Helen's labour, then Cassie's, or you add in a few more chapters and look at skipping time to every month and a half or two months.
I'd have at least two or three chapters before the first birth, it gives time to build up everyone's fears and the blood cravings - I assume they're both going to go wild then require blood on a regular basis?
Please Don't Say you Love Me - by Gabrielle Aplin, I think it sounds very much like Helen's thoughts to/about Nikola, may need to add it my 'to be made' vids list. I'm currently working on two at the moment, both on the comedy side, one is a Nikola/Will/Henry from Helen's perspective vid and the other is Tesslen comedy Doris Day mashup. I hope to get at least the first one done tonight.
She's waking up, and the whole room seems to move with her stomach. Cassie has to make a mad dash to the bathroom. She pukes up various items of food (you decide), along with blood for about 15 minutes. Lots of internal thinking on Cassie's part. Henry comes and helps her.
She's waking up, and the whole room seems to move with her stomach. Cassie has to make a mad dash to the bathroom. She pukes up various items of food (you decide), along with blood for about 15 minutes. Lots of internal thinking on Cassie's part. Henry comes and helps her.
Okay, cool, got distracted with the video making again. I'll see what I can come up with.
Sorry I forgot to post this last week, but these last few days I've been having so much internet trouble that I forgot to do this (After I reminded myself to do just this )
Hope you like It was made from a tutorial but Ladygris and can be found in the AFA thread (Let me know if you wish the link )
Just posted a new video on youtube, its a kind of Tesslen vid, 'Don't Impress Me Much' there's Will and Henry too, It's not my best work, I'm not sure about it.
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