Nikola Tesla/Helen Magnus Shipper Thread

[Martina Magnus]

Here is part of Helen and Nickola fic mild version full version will be on sanctuaryforall fic site soon
Tangled Love

Spoiler:

Helen wokeup she slowly satup she felt her hands and feet were bound she tried to move but they were tied tight just then Nickola came into the room he closed and locked the door Helen reconised the smile on his face the very same he had given her in 1943 sparks filled the air Nickola went over to her he knelt infront of her she could feel his breath on her skin his pull was magnetic there lips came together electrisity filled the air Helen moaned into his mouth the kiss grew hungyier Nickola's hands moved over her body he bit her lip her blood filled his mouth they fell to the floor outside Will and Kate herd moans and things falling over .

Oh C'mon ... I want more ....
You start very good ... Tied up Helen .... MORE PLEASE !!! xD

[stargatelover4ever]

Tina you mush have more trust in yourself

Here is part of Helen and Nickola fic mild version full version will be on sanctuaryforall fic site soon
Tangled Love

Spoiler:

Helen wokeup she slowly satup she felt her hands and feet were bound she tried to move but they were tied tight just then Nickola came into the room he closed and locked the door Helen reconised the smile on his face the very same he had given her in 1943 sparks filled the air Nickola went over to her he knelt infront of her she could feel his breath on her skin his pull was magnetic there lips came together electrisity filled the air Helen moaned into his mouth the kiss grew hungyier Nickola's hands moved over her body he bit her lip her blood filled his mouth they fell to the floor outside Will and Kate herd moans and things falling over .

woohooo this sounds interesting
a few things though...

Spoiler:

I'm pretty sure Nikola is spelled without a "c". I don't remember seeing his name spelled "Nickola" anywhere
and you writing is a bit confusing. I could barely tell where a phrase's end.
hope you don't mind I took the liberty to tell you these

[helenmagnus23]

Tina you mush have more trust in yourself



woohooo this sounds interesting
a few things though...

Spoiler:

I'm pretty sure Nikola is spelled without a "c". I don't remember seeing his name spelled "Nickola" anywhere
and you writing is a bit confusing. I could barely tell where a phrase's end.
hope you don't mind I took the liberty to tell you these

Thats cool it's good you pointed it out it'll be more detailed on the sanctuary ff site

[Martina Magnus]

Tina you mush have more trust in yourself

I promise I will try

[stargatelover4ever]

Thats cool it's good you pointed it out it'll be more detailed on the sanctuary ff site

oh okay I'm glad I could help
and don't forget to post the link here when it's up

[helenmagnus23]

oh okay I'm glad I could help
and don't forget to post the link here when it's up

I wont forget

[Martina Magnus]

I wont forget

Yop Can't wait

[lastrequest]

Here is part of Helen and Nickola fic mild version full version will be on sanctuaryforall fic site soon
Tangled Love

Spoiler:

Helen wokeup she slowly satup she felt her hands and feet were bound she tried to move but they were tied tight just then Nickola came into the room he closed and locked the door Helen reconised the smile on his face the very same he had given her in 1943 sparks filled the air Nickola went over to her he knelt infront of her she could feel his breath on her skin his pull was magnetic there lips came together electrisity filled the air Helen moaned into his mouth the kiss grew hungyier Nickola's hands moved over her body he bit her lip her blood filled his mouth they fell to the floor outside Will and Kate herd moans and things falling over .

OOoo nice little teaser for your story there I want to read more!
I would recommend that...

Spoiler:

you try to split your writing up more into sentences to make it easier to read - just a suggestion though it's still readable your way

[helenmagnus23]

well the sanctuarry has a waterfall so chances are we could get both Helen and Nikola wet

Can you imagine that ? Nikola and Helen in waterfall ? ...

I'm so gonna write a fic for that i can see it know very hot

[lastrequest]

I'm so gonna write a fic for that i can see it know very hot

Yay for another fic

I always think when reading / writing Teslen fics how fun it would be with a few pictures in it *ponders* actual or manipulated hehe does anyone know if you can upload pics on fanfic net into a story

[helenmagnus23]

well the sanctuarry has a waterfall so chances are we could get both Helen and Nikola wet

Can you imagine that ? Nikola and Helen in waterfall ? ...

Yay for another fic

I always think when reading / writing Teslen fics how fun it would be with a few pictures in it *ponders* actual or manipulated hehe does anyone know if you can upload pics on fanfic net into a story

I think you can
That would be so cool to have pics with it

[Martina Magnus]

I'm so gonna write a fic for that i can see it know very hot

Can't wait That's hot idea
I'm trying to do banner right now but no idea in my head right now ... maybe later

lastrequest IDK if we already know each other I can't remember ... bad memory ... so I just wanted to say Hi

[stargatelover4ever]

Yay for another fic

I always think when reading / writing Teslen fics how fun it would be with a few pictures in it *ponders* actual or manipulated hehe does anyone know if you can upload pics on fanfic net into a story

I have no idea but I thought about the same things many times!

[helenmagnus23]

I'll have the teaser up tommorow night

[lastrequest]

lastrequest IDK if we already know each other I can't remember ... bad memory ... so I just wanted to say Hi

Hehe *waves hello to you* I think we've vaguely said hi in passing LOL but I don't get on the forum as much as I'd like to so I have troubling remembering everyone I have and haven't greeted

you can call me Amy though

I think you can
That would be so cool to have pics with it

OOoo going to have to give that a try then