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[Rail'k]

I just posted my first Fan Fic Ever
What do you think?
http://www.gateworld.net/fanfic/arch...gerevised.html

[Rail'k]

i personally think that this may be an opinig to yet another stargate Saga

[Matt G]

Decent but I'm not sure how serious this is supposed to be.

[Rail'k]

I wrote a sequal and i need a BR if you want to email me at [email protected]

[NoDot]

You should know that I'm getting odd Courier New font in the middle of some sections. It also moves too fast. The section between the beginning and Jack getting beamed up should be an episode in itself, IMO. You just need to add more detail in that area.

BTW, could you make it Venus, not Mars, please?

[Rail'k]

thanks for the input i will get to changing that. it might take a while

[Rail'k]

By the way the change of font was an error on gatewold not mine it will be different wen i revise it again