He there. i'm writing a little fan fic mini series thing, and i have a system lord who rises to the top. he invents these things called death valkyries, which are advanced death gliders. except there's one problem. valkyries aren't greek, or roman, or egyptian, or even norse. would anyone happen to know what earth culture invented the valkyries? and if so, who would be their 'supreme' god? (eg. Norse and thor or egyptians and ra)
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You know, you could just call them something other than death valkyries, which is - aside from anything else - a crappy name. You could just lose the death, for starters: Valkyries are the choosers of the slain; the death is implied.
Mind you, 'death glider' isn't exactly the greatest name ever; sort of up there with 'gateship'.
But I digress. What's important is that the fic makes sense to you, obviously, but from Earth mythology it's clear that Odin was a major player in the Asgard intervention on Earth some two thousand years ago - 30,000 years after the Asgard last looked remotely human. Maybe it was a different Odin, but why would he be using the same iconography as an Odin who went bad millennia before?
I just think you should think carefully about whether the complication of a Goa'ulded Asgard suits your fic, or whether the Lammassu of Lady Inanna - for example - would work better.Behold the majesty that is...GERALD!
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Originally posted by ShadowMaatI'll second Prophet. Trying to cross the Asgard and Goa'uld pantheons doesn't sounds like a very good idea. Instead of convoluting your story to include Odin, why not change "Death Valkyrie" to something else?
Trying to cross one pantheon with another will only give you a headache as you try and iron out all the lumps, bumps, and wrinkles.
I'd chosen the Egyptian cat Goddess Bastet to be the principal villain for an SG-1 fic I'm in the process of writing, thinking she hadn't been used in the series and I could make the character up as I went along - big mistake - one of my (ahem) friends, helpfully pointed out that she's appeared in the fifth season two parter "Summit" and "Last Stand" -aarrgghh! Cue major headache and a rapid rethink of the story...
By the way - am I the only person who can't help singing "Kill the wabbit! Kill the wabbit!" every time I hear Ride of the Valkyries?sigpic
Long before you and I were born, others beat these benches with their empty cups,
To the night and its stars, to the here and now with who we are.
Another sunrise with my sad captains, with who I choose to lose my mind,
And if it's all we only pass this way but once, what a perfect waste of time.
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Originally posted by BruTakI'd chosen the Egyptian cat Goddess Bastet to be the principal villain for an SG-1 fic I'm in the process of writing, thinking she hadn't been used in the series and I could make the character up as I went along - big mistake - one of my (ahem) friends, helpfully pointed out that she's appeared in the fifth season two parter "Summit" and "Last Stand" -aarrgghh! Cue major headache and a rapid rethink of the story...Behold the majesty that is...GERALD!
- Read The Prophet's fan fiction at The Lost Vegas Public Library.
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