looking for a beta

[Greesha]

i just finished a fic about cassie and how she's getting over janet's death. well, that's part of it; the other part is about her boyfriend dominic having naquadah in his blood. it's not my first fic, but it's my first longer fic that i have actually finished. it's rated pg-13, and contains spoilers for "singularity," "rite of passage," and "heroes." also, it doesn't have a title yet, i'll need a little help with that too. it doesn't need help with grammar or spelling, i would just feel better if someone checked the continuity and plotting. i had my brother read it but his feedback consists mostly of "yeah, that was good", so it's not very helpful. i don't have it all typed up yet, so i will send it a little bit at a time as i type it. written out, it's about 30 pages long (a page being one side of a piece of paper).

thanx!

[Bagpuss]

Hi Greesha .
For all I know,you've already sorted out your Beta reader via pm or e-mail,but I'll put a link to this site, just in case .
Maybe it'll be useful for you, or other writers ?

http://betasite.hoodatlair.com/index.html

[Greesha]

thanx a bunch!