The Cylon Strike (BSG/SG1 crossover)

[Dutch_Razor]

As promised, here's my sequel of The Attack of the Ori.

Please let me know what you think of it!

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3348054/1/

Edit: New link.

[gavo2o]

It seems ok I like it

[Dutch_Razor]

Thx!

I'll upload the next chapter as soon as I can

[jesserella]

I really like it, and i don't even know much about Battlestar Galactica, the only thing i could say is to pad it out a bit more, things seem to move quite fast, maybe have more dialogue or description, but i'm really looking forward to the next chapter

[gavo2o]

Thx!

I'll upload the next chapter as soon as I can

I'll keep an eye out for it, I am a fan of your fan fics

[Dutch_Razor]

I'll keep an eye out for it, I am a fan of your fan fics

Woot I got fans

I really like it, and i don't even know much about Battlestar Galactica, the only thing i could say is to pad it out a bit more, things seem to move quite fast, maybe have more dialogue or description, but i'm really looking forward to the next chapter

I'll try to, I tend to type things out to fast, so I try plot devices like impending nuclear strikes to have an excuse for the lack of dialogue, but I'm gonna make more dialogue in the future

[jesserella]

don't worry about it too much, it's still very good

[Dutch_Razor]

Updated, and paced out (the 2nd chapter that is)

Took 3 pages for something that'd previously take me one lol, but it reads better this way I think.