Anyone actually write OCs? Maybe you have one but are nervous about using he/she/it? I happen to like OCs, if they're well written which is becoming more and more rare.
So, if you have one, mind putting the character's stats into an easy-read info block like this so I can see them? I like making critques on them, if you don't mind.
Original Character - SGA Universe
Name: Sheedra
Gender: Female
Age: 8 earth years
Race: Yunan (short humans of the desert/forest world Haldin)
Eyes: Hawk-like amber
Skin: Cuban-esque (think a mocha latte)
Hair: Waist-lenght, mahogany brown, normally in a ponytail and braided
Height: Short (barely 3'6")
History: Born into the service of her village's elder, Sheedra was an errand girl most of her life. Her people, explorers in their own right, used her to memorize various things, whether it the healing properties of a foreign plant or the Gate address to one of the Yunan's allied worlds. After several attempts to run away, she's found by AG1 (Atlantis Gate Team 1: My fabricated title for Sheppard's team) on one of their missions. . .
Due to her village's tradition, Sheedra was selected to be a human sacrifice on a ritual meant to ward off the Wraiths.
Personality: Sheedra is terminally curious, wanting to know everything about everything. While she often causes trouble, she's very apologetic, truly not liking being a bother to anyone. Jumpy and usually shy, she clings to those who she trusts and hides from everyone else.
If anyone would like to give me an opinion or post their own OC, I'd appreciate it. Thank you! ^.^
~Lucia
So, if you have one, mind putting the character's stats into an easy-read info block like this so I can see them? I like making critques on them, if you don't mind.
Original Character - SGA Universe
Name: Sheedra
Gender: Female
Age: 8 earth years
Race: Yunan (short humans of the desert/forest world Haldin)
Eyes: Hawk-like amber
Skin: Cuban-esque (think a mocha latte)
Hair: Waist-lenght, mahogany brown, normally in a ponytail and braided
Height: Short (barely 3'6")
History: Born into the service of her village's elder, Sheedra was an errand girl most of her life. Her people, explorers in their own right, used her to memorize various things, whether it the healing properties of a foreign plant or the Gate address to one of the Yunan's allied worlds. After several attempts to run away, she's found by AG1 (Atlantis Gate Team 1: My fabricated title for Sheppard's team) on one of their missions. . .
Due to her village's tradition, Sheedra was selected to be a human sacrifice on a ritual meant to ward off the Wraiths.
Personality: Sheedra is terminally curious, wanting to know everything about everything. While she often causes trouble, she's very apologetic, truly not liking being a bother to anyone. Jumpy and usually shy, she clings to those who she trusts and hides from everyone else.
If anyone would like to give me an opinion or post their own OC, I'd appreciate it. Thank you! ^.^
~Lucia
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