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Major Gambit
May 20th, 2006, 09:06 PM
This is the second part of 3 to the series.

PART ONE:
http://forum.gateworld.net/showthread.php?t=28816


PART TWO:
http://www.gateworld.net/fanfic/archive/48/thearrival2.html

Major Gambit
May 21st, 2006, 01:45 PM
thoughts? gripes? complaints? anyone?

Elitenova
May 21st, 2006, 02:24 PM
What did I say about rushing with the story.

Major Gambit
May 21st, 2006, 03:44 PM
It just fast paced.

Darkstar
May 24th, 2006, 03:28 AM
and then flew off into yet another part that will not be rushed perhaps???

The Ori
May 24th, 2006, 06:46 AM
Fast but I like it.

Major Gambit
May 24th, 2006, 02:44 PM
ok, i get it, its fast. thats jsut how a write. i dont like to babble

Elitenova
May 24th, 2006, 07:42 PM
ok, i get it, its fast. thats jsut how a write. i dont like to babble

Just how fast can a write?