if you can make an episode

[lostpimp123]

if you were able to write, produce, and direct an episode of sga what would it be be about and what will it be like?

in my episode while carter was visiting atlantis rodney and carter start having tesions running between them while at the same time some new enemy have breached the city and now the city is at a full scale war rodney and carter have to find a way to defeat them as tensions run even higher while shep and teyla fight them off they get trapped and hehe they get a bit romantic too........ at the end the enemy eventually got destroyed and atlantis was at peace again for now and kavanaugh dies trying to save the city and well carter goes back to base leaving rodney staring at her go across the gate and teyla and shep well....... they're just friends, for now

itll also be a dramatic 3 part episode

[freyr's mother]

if you were able to write, produce, and direct an episode of sga what would it be be about and what will it be like?

in my episode while carter was visiting atlantis rodney and carter start having tesions running between them while at the same time some new enemy have breached the city and now the city is at a full scale war rodney and carter have to find a way to defeat them as tensions run even higher while shep and teyla fight them off they get trapped and hehe they get a bit romantic too........ at the end the enemy eventually got destroyed and atlantis was at peace again for now and kavanaugh dies trying to save the city and well carter goes back to base leaving rodney staring at her go across the gate and teyla and shep well....... they're just friends, for now

itll also be a dramatic 3 part episode

Wow, long sentence.


Mine would be a costly episode that TPTB would pay through the rear for this in terms of Special Effects, and CGI. It would not involve:

A.) Kirking
B.) Deus Ex Machina
or
C.) Little crappy weapons on earth ships


But would involve:
A.) PuddleJumper dogfights with some alien fighters
B.) Earth ships holding their own
C.) Ground battle
D.) Funny Lines

Oooh, I have an idea. Hey let's play some Mad Libs.

The plotline would go something like this: (7,45) ____ (Wraith, Ori) _____ ships have made their way into our galaxy. The (Ori, Wraith) _____ invade the off-world bases of earth. The (Ori, Wraith) _____ warriors have gotten hold of the (Base mainframe, New Daedalus class ship being build) _______ and threaten to (extrapolate gate coordinates in our galaxy, threaten to destroy Earth). That's all I've got so far.

[ShadowMaat]

Idea 1:

Starts off with a typical offworld mission. Shep has discovered some interesting Ancient trinket and is trying to figure what it does and turns to Zelenka for help. Through the course of the ep (and in flashbacks) we discover that McKay has been killed during an experiment. Zelenka is now the lead scientist on Atlantis and it's a position that makes him extremely uncomfortable. He's good- maybe even better in some ways, and his teammates have no complaints, but Radek is starting to buckle from the pressure and realizes how vastly he underestimated McKay. He's been recording all of his thoughts in his journal (written in Czech, of course) and continues to do so as he experiments with the trinket, eventually figuring out that it's an experimental temporal device, but it can only work on small objects. Radek writes that he has an idea about how to "make things right again." We see him close the journal as McKay walks into the lab, asking if Radek is finished translating "that jibberish" because unless he thinks the "mystery book" is too important, he's ready to begin such-and-such experiment. Radek stands, offering to help. Surprised, McKay accepts.

Idea 2:

Another experiment gone awry and once again dealing with time. There's an explosion that destabilizes the temporal infrastructure (or something fancy like that). Random "windows" are opening all over Atlantis- some into the past and some into the future. People are appearing and disappearing, there's a displaced Wraith or three running loose, something awful from the future is wreaking havoc, and McKay is forced to team up with an Ancient scientist (the one who created the device that went boom) to try and repair the timeline before Atlantis itself collapses. The scientist is, of course, female, and she's even more arrogantly McKay-like than McKay. Rodney finally gets a dose of his own medicine and discovers that he doesn't like the taste. This would be a great chance to bring back some missing characters (Bates, Grodin, un-Wraithed Ford, Sumner, etc), to give us some more background on the ancients, some insight into what makes McKay tick and introduce a hint of something truly horrific in Atlantis's future. Maybe we'll even get to meet future versions of characters (Col. Lorne who took command of Atlantis after Weir and Shep were killed by the Evil Thing? Badass Vigilante Teyla? Evil Carson? Shep Junior? ) Could be a two-parter.

Idea 3:

Teyla must undergo a rite of passage and become the true leader of her people. It's something she's been putting off for a while, but can no longer avoid. She leaves Atlantis to once again live among her people and follow in her father's footsteps to be the best leader she can be. ...Only her time in Atlantis has changed her in ways she hadn't even realized and the adjustment back to Athosian ways is harder than she imagined. Meanwhile, Shep's team (and to a lesser extent Atlantis itself) discovers just how vital a role Teyla played. Negotiations fall apart, bickering between teammates increases, and life is generally just a little bit harder. When danger threatens the whole planet, Teyla is only too happy to rejoin her former teammates to combat the issue and in the end she realizes that her place is with them. Her trusted second, who was doing most of the running around for her in the village, is tapped to take her place and Teyla (and her people) are happy with the knowledge that he (or she) will be just as good as Teyla and that there won't be an issue of divided loyalties.

[Lt. Colonel Ryu Gaia]

Hmmm... the episode I would do. Good question.

TEASER: Atlantis-1 (Sheppard's team) comes to a planet whose civilization greatly resembles ancient Rome, and they are hailed as a sign from the gods that the Emperor will live forever. As such, they are asked to join the emperor in watching a gladiator fight - although the fighters are captured Wraith.

ACT I: We begin with a briefing room type scene, back at Atlantis. Teyla wonders why the captured wraith haven't tried to attract Hiveships, or why they aren't fighting back at all. McKay is vocal that they don't even need to interact with these people at all - they're just another primitive society with no new technology to offer. Weir says that she doesn't really like how those Wraith are being treated, and that although she knows what they are, she poses the question of whether or not the Wraith really are evil, as they really just want to eat. She mentions that she regrets having violated the Geneva convention in having performed a biological experiment on a Wraith (back in "Poisoning the Well"). Ronan says that he really doesn't care. Wraith are Wraith, and for all they've done, they deserve it. With that, they all turn to Sheppard to see what his opinion on the matter is. While Sheppard agrees with Ronan, he also can see where Weir is coming from and wants to look into it himself. Besides, there's obviously something funky with Wraith that allow themselves to be subjugated like that, espescially by such primitive people, and he wants to know what.
The team return to the planet, and they have a discussion with the Emperor in his throneroom. He tells them that they didn't capture the Wraith, but that they were given to him. When Sheppard asks who would give people Wraith, a Wraith Queen steps into the room. "I did."

ACT II: (You know... right now, I'm actually getting pretty interested in this idea of mine, so instead of spoiling the rest, I think I'll get to work on writing it into a virtual episode. )

[knowsfords]

Ideas

All three very good solid ideas (I especially liked number two)... have some green.

[Allestian]

This one I have actually written and includes S.F.X shots etc.

While offworld Sheppard, Zelenka, McKay and Dr Beckett discover a small lake. At the centre of the lake ubbles of gas can be seen reaching the surface which means that something with in air is at the bottom of the lake. Carson decides to take a look and swims down to the bottom of the lake (It isn't too deep) He discovers that there is a crashed puddle jumper at the bottom (No it isn't like GUP) Sheppard and Zelenka head back to their puddlejumper while McKay swims down to investigate the jumper with Carson. They realise that there is a person inside but they can't get in. The puddlejumper is slowly filling up with water so Carson and McKay break the glass and swim in...

Okay let's cut it short...

They find a teenage girl.
They find out she's an Ancient. She was acaptured by the Wraith and was kept in stasis for 10,000 years.
Wraith attacks start occurring in Atlantis.
That means there's a spy that must have been on teh sunken puddlejumper.
The Wraith are cloaked (Minimized the cloaking technology on the teenager's puddlejumper)
They realise that the cloaks are still part of Ancient technology and is therefore still linked to the control chair.
Atlantis goes into lockdown as Sheppard's team and the teenager make their way to the control chair room.
By using the control chair they deactivate the shields making all of the Wraith visable. There's quite a few.
Wraith get killed.
Teenager is appreciated and is grateful that she has finally made it home.

Questions for future episodes.

Why did the jumper crash?
Why did the Wraith keep her alive? Besides piloting the jumper home.
How is she going to fit in now?
Can she be trusted?
Do all of the Wraith have the ability to use cloaks now?

[Ancient 1]

Discover in the Ancient database the address to another galaxy and another Atlantis-like city, complete with unascended ancients. Convince them of their need to ascend in order to help defeat the Ori. (Yes...a crossover episode. One that might work).

[FoolishPleasure]

Episode XXX

Beckett and Cadman have an argument and Laura runs into the arms of John Sheppard for comfort, only to be told to take a number – he’s booked for the next 4 seasons. Ronon and Teyla honeymoon at the local medieval village where they discover a Wraith has been mingling with the population for years disguised as a tax collector who confiscates his pound of flesh when the locals fail to pay up. An Ori prior makes a surprise appearance to preach “Origin” and the Wraith tries to feed but finds him a bit to sulfuric for his tastes. Ronon invites the prior to have dinner in Atlantis. Ronon and Teyla return to Atlantis with the prior and a crate of new belly barring tank tops for both of them, and two new wigs for Teyla, and discover Dr. Weir has now downloaded more games onto her laptop and is now addicted to MahJong and Weebl toons. Col. Caldwell fears that intervention and rehabilitation may be necessary. McKay and Zelenka engage in a marathon debate on how to discipline children. Beckett announces he has discovered a new retrovirus to turn the Ori into Wraith. The team feels it’s a step in the right direction and they give him permission to experiment on their Ori guest. After a nightmarish day of screams and seizures, the Ori emerges as a Ba’al clone and is promptly shipped off to the SGC.

*and that’s why I don’t write for these shows*

[Wraith Scientist]

Sanctum

The team find an abandoned Ancient facility on a desolate, far-off planet. While exploring the facility some of the members of the other team start to go missing. The team is split up by increasingly strange events and start to break down under the pressure. The characters have flashbacks from earlier times in their lives, giving some backstory to the characters. McKay starts hearing voices and begins to loose it completely, but discovers that an ancient AI, which has gone insane from thousands of years of loneliness and abandonment waiting for it's masters' return, is playing mind games with them. He tells the AI that the Ancients are gone - defeated by the Wraith. The AI resolves to do what the Ancients could not: defeat the Wraith - but by starving them into defeat after wiping out their food source. The AI uses the Stargate to transfer itself to another facility, promising that they will meet again.

This ep introduces a new enemy: an insane, philosophical AI which will stop an nothing to complete his objective: to defeat the Wraith, even if that means the destruction of all life in Pegasus

ALTERNATE ENDING: They outwit and deactivate the AI, and McKay and Zelenka create their own, which Zelenka gives to Weir to help run the city

ALTERNATE ENDING: The team find that the Wraith have also discovered the world, and are attempting to convince the AI to join them. The insane AI treats it as a game and pits the humans and Wraith against each other. A Wraith AI (like the one from Intruder) manages to infiltrate the facility's systems and merges with the Ancient AI. Rather than allying with the Wraith, the AI founds a new Wraith faction with itself as its leader, and convinces the Wraith to follow.

Which ending do you prefer?

Do you even like it at all?

[Blitz]

Ok, I actually started writing this idea up as a script, but never finished due to me working on a different story (woop! I finished it )

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The basic idea is a follow up to 'The Tower' called 'Sister City' (which was under construction in my decision)

Lorne and his team, with a bunch of scientists would be working on the second city, salvaging, studying - their thing ya know? Anyway they make two discoveries:
1) Two unidentified Wraith ships headed towards the city.
2) A LARGE underground complex thats attached to the triangular section of the city, but also through vertical tunnels to the arms of the city.
Two options remain for Atlantis: Either defend or destroy the city, while also destroying the unexplored, but possibly still structure intact complex.

Deciding to defend, the Daedalus heads to the planet. What ensures is a battle with the team leading a group of F-302s and Jumpers to help. Discovering that, when they used the last of the ZPM power the city sent out a signal for help, they switch this off. While this settles that, the battle overhead rages. Deciding they cant defend the city, they take as much of the database, which is slightly different and retreat, beaming nukes down into the city, as well as the complex. Leaving a cloaked Jumper with Shep and Tey on board, they watch the explosions from the planet. The Wraith leave, and Shep returns to Atlantis, upset at retreating (again).


AFTERMATH - Character

1) Feelings between Wier and Caldwell - Caldwell was purely set against defending the city, and the fact he chose to retreat angers Wier who was pro-defence and believes he didnt put his all into the battle.

2) Sheppard depression from retreating again and again.

3) Mckay/Zelenka/Scientiests joy as they study more of the Database that gives details on Oleria.

AFTERMATH -

1) Wraith have a ship not previously seen before. More of a Warship than a hive/cruiser.

2) Destroyed city ship. (obviously)

3) Oleria: (Second script/own idea I was working on) A city ship that left the same time as Atlantis from Earth bound for Andromeda...the new city ship being built was to go to Andromeda in search of their missing friends.

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Ok: I know it needed alot of work but it was my first attempt at using other peoples characters/series.

[wolverine_nl]

Not written as a script, but more like a draft of an idea...here goes:

Shep and Lorne's units discover a ancient ruine on a distant planet in the Pegasus Galaxy, on it there is ancient writing.
Weir arrives to translate bits and pieces from a few tablets. Apperantly it holds a key to a new gatenetwork, ...in another galaxy.

The teams go back to Atlantis to discuss the matter and do some more research on the footage they took from the ruines. After some translations they discover that the secrets of that new galaxy are hidden in the second cityship that is on the planet they discovered in season2 (The Tower). Apperantly this cityship was build to go and inhabit this new galaxy and seed life there as well. But the project was never finished by the Ancients, probably the Wraith interupted this plan. The gatenetwork was already spread out in this new galaxy, but their flagship never came.

Weir decides to go and try to find a way to get to that galaxy, and hope that maybe a few Ancient explorers still live there.

Mckay's researching the powerrequirements for the Atlantisgate, while Radek is trying to figure out how to enter new starconstellations into the dailingcomputer that he hooked up to the DHD.

Teyla and Ronon are on the mainland with the other Athosions. Some of them are afraid that if Teyla decides to go to this new galaxy, that she might not return.

Teyla returns to Atlantis and talks with Weir about this, at the same time McKay walks into Weir's office and says that the only problem is getting back to Atlantis after the explorationteam arrives at the new location.

Sheppard enters the office and says to Mckay that the Ancients must have had the same problem, but probably solved this by bringing along a zpm, and maybe not just one, but probably more than 1.

Weir agrees on this and assembles a team; Lorne, Teyla, Radek and doctor Heightmeyer.

McKay installs the necessary power and gives the guys behind the DHD the go code to dail the gatecoordinate that they found on the tablet....the gate connects, the team says goodbye, and Weir wishes them good luck.
The team steps through the gate and we get to see yet another version of gatetravel

------End of episode 1 of this new arc -------
And maybe the opening for a new spin off lol

[lostpimp123]

ok if you want to know where i got some of the ideas for this episode http://xfacts.com

anyway it begins back on earth, in iraq while a unit was patrolling a area that may be an insurgent hideout the unit comes under attack by insurgents while shooting and ducking the soldiers fought back with full force as they ran one of them diasspeared the leitenent screamed out were walters go?!!!!! (as the insurgents just retreated) they saw a hole and walters creamed out right here!!!! they got a rope lowered it down and he said hey theres some intersting stuff down here!!! lietenent jonhson called down hey are you crazy?
and then as more soldiers came down there they saw on the walls some inscriptions and some handles and stuff like that they see a puddle jumper and said hey when saddam was ruling 4 years ago did he build something like this? also they found another craft that didnt look like a jumper at all as they walked on lights lit on and they went like whoa?

then eventually there was a whole line of the unidentified craft along with a couple other jumpers. there was a room with even more stuff.

3 weeks later
the room had been emptied out and everything got sent to area 51 area s4 dulce and other topsecret cases and the russians. anyway daniel jackson was down there translating some of the ruins. he said "i dont reconize any of these writing much but they seem to be a mixture of early gouald and late ancient writing and a third one i dont know..........
back at cheyene he said to everyone..... i think i have found nibiru
niburu? everone replied...... the ancient lost sity of the sumerians the 12th planet from the sun but its even further than we might even think about i think they ment galaxy...... even further away than pegasus........
as they dialed to atlantis the team that discovered the ruins came along with characters from sg1 discussing using the gate on pegausus used to dial the new gate.

basred on wolverine nls story ill go that they gate system might be that discovered in wolverine nl' story but there might be another one that was part of it that was barely even built probaly built by another race..... the annunaki on atlantis they plan out everything while the suddenly the city is attacked......

so then..... ill continue the story but it leads to a new series.....

stargate niburu or
stargate ac1

you think of a name

[wolverine_nl]

ok if you want to know where i got some of the ideas for this episode http://xfacts.com


back at cheyene he said to everyone..... i think i have found nibiru
niburu? everone replied...... the ancient lost sity of the sumerians the 12th planet from the sun but its even further than we might even think about i think they ment galaxy...... even further away than pegasus........
as they dialed to atlantis the team that discovered the ruins came along with characters from sg1 discussing using the gate on pegausus used to dial the new gate.

basred on wolverine nls story ill go that they gate system might be that discovered in wolverine nl' story but there might be another one that was part of it that was barely even built probaly built by another race..... the annunaki on atlantis they plan out everything while the suddenly the city is attacked......

so then..... ill continue the story but it leads to a new series.....

stargate niburu or
stargate ac1

you think of a name

Haha you read some Sitchin? 12th Planet is a book based on real translation of ancient tablets, found in the area where Mesopotamia used to be. Real good stuff, you can also read stuff about it at : http://www.sitchin.com/
After reading stuff like this, you'd wish there was a real stargate on earth somewhere

[Celtic Wizard]

Episode XXX

Teyla learns that two of her hunters have gone missing. Sheppard convinces Weir that they should explore the whole of the 'continent'. Just to lern what is there and whilst doing so investigate what happened to Teylas' people.

The continental land is massive, so various teams go out, including Sheppard's team.

Emma J

[ShadowMaat]

Teyla learns that two of her hunters have gone missing. Sheppard convinces Weir that they should explore the whole of the 'continent'. Just to lern what is there and whilst doing so investigate what happened to Teylas' people.

If I might make a suggestion, how about a Roanoke-type situation where the whole village has disappeared? Or maybe a random selection of the population. Aerial scans show no trace of anyone on the continent, but there aren't any bodies and no signs of a struggle, either. And if there are "survivors" no one heard or saw anything. What happened? And where did everyone go? Maybe there's more to the planet than anyone has suspected...