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GbaGuy
April 2nd, 2005, 06:24 PM
I choose to do my story in a script format, inspired by StarGate Horizon and
the book "The Essential Scripts". Turned out to be a good choice, seems to
be somewhat easier than a prose/novel story, and more fun at that (for me
at least).

The story is fairly far along, although it's a work in progress. It's also short
as far as I can tell. How many minutes long do you think this would translate
to? I really have no idea. Anyway, anyone who wouldn't mind reading it and
give the forementioned (fun word) comments and criticism would be greatly
appreciated.

There are likely spoilers for Season 8+, as it's set in Season 9. Hard to write
for characters that haven been defined yet.

It deals with the effects of the Replicator attack and the Jaffa Rebellion.
http://k2pts.home.comcast.net/gbaguy/script.htm

Thanks,
- GbaGuy