Stargate: Golden Dawn 2.0

[StargateWatcher]

Two items.

Firstly, I was addressing an issue of plagiarism when I found out about it with a certain story that I won't mention. As I was doing that, I started to assess whether I'd ever done anything I would consider plagiarism. And while I can't say I've really even come close to doing so teechnically, I still like to give credit when one deserves it even in the slightest. So I wanna acknowledge here that I got inspired to develop a Furling military rank for my Tauri-Furling series, Phylae commanding a Phylang of slightly over 6000 soldiers, when I read your Golden Dawn quite a while ago and noticed you had the rank of Legate who commands a Legion. I know that you didn't invent the rank, but you did standardize the command strucure of always 5000 legionnaires to a legion always. Anyways, I wouldn't have thought of making the semi-general-officer rank if you hadn't done that, so I credit you with that. Here is its relative rank below.

Furling Unified Republic Terrestrial Enagagement Service (TES) General and Semi-General Officer Lowest to Highest:

Phylae
Quarternary General
Tertiary General
Secondary General
Primary General
Marshal
High Marshal

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Secondly, I wanted to write a scene in which Il'ras, the Furling Republic's High Consul (got the name Consul from my imagined older Alterran politcal position) is meeting with Amann to resolve a dispute and they're practicing some really hardball politik. Il'ras used to be the Supreme Warfare Officer (equiv of US Chairman of Joint Chiefs) and he's considered one of the greatest of the great Furling warriors, so he's got a very courageous personality too and can be equally abrasive in respone to Amann being abrasive. I just wanted to share this and will not ever even publish of course unless you approve. Will share in next post.

[StargateWatcher]

He had a strong sense of loyalty to the Council, even if he actually did agree with Amann on certain things. He felt rotten betraying him, but he thought that Amann's way wasn't the right one. So while he disagreed with how the Council did things, he still believed in the entity and couldn't condone Amann's actions.

Makese sense. :-)

[Amann]

Two items.

Firstly, I was addressing an issue of plagiarism when I found out about it with a certain story that I won't mention. As I was doing that, I started to assess whether I'd ever done anything I would consider plagiarism. And while I can't say I've really even come close to doing so teechnically, I still like to give credit when one deserves it even in the slightest. So I wanna acknowledge here that I got inspired to develop a Furling military rank for my Tauri-Furling series, Phylae commanding a Phylang of slightly over 6000 soldiers, when I read your Golden Dawn quite a while ago and noticed you had the rank of Legate who commands a Legion. I know that you didn't invent the rank, but you did standardize the command strucure of always 5000 legionnaires to a legion always. Anyways, I wouldn't have thought of making the semi-general-officer rank if you hadn't done that, so I credit you with that. Here is its relative rank below.

Furling Unified Republic Terrestrial Enagagement Service (TES) General and Semi-General Officer Lowest to Highest:

Phylae
Quarternary General
Tertiary General
Secondary General
Primary General
Marshal
High Marshal

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Secondly, I wanted to write a scene in which Il'ras, the Furling Republic's High Consul (got the name Consul from my imagined older Alterran politcal position) is meeting with Amann to resolve a dispute and they're practicing some really hardball politik. Il'ras used to be the Supreme Warfare Officer (equiv of US Chairman of Joint Chiefs) and he's considered one of the greatest of the great Furling warriors, so he's got a very courageous personality too and can be equally abrasive in respone to Amann being abrasive. I just wanted to share this and will not ever even publish of course unless you approve. Will share in next post.

I'd be happy to co-write a scene with you. With my school nearly over and all that is left are a few exams, ill be able to devote much more time to writing. The last few weeks been hectic and prevented an update.

[StargateWatcher]

I'd be happy to co-write a scene with you. With my school nearly over and all that is left are a few exams, ill be able to devote much more time to writing. The last few weeks been hectic and prevented an update.

Cool, man! That would be really awesome! Yeah--ironically, when sessions are almost over at this time of , students tend to face much more rigorous work needing to do such as final exams and final papers. Yeah that'll do it--fans of GD 2.0 and your other stories who know you're cuirrently trying to complete your last work for this portion of the semester should take it easy with their expecations for another update and they probably will. Fanfic fans tend to be patient, reasonable people lol.

I'll post my imagined scene in the next post and you can feel free to edit it as much as you want, especially the Amann diaologue lool b/c you defintiely know best how Amann would react; I definitely doin't wanna portray Amann at all to be more abrasive than he actually is. And if you feel that posting it here is bad timing now, please let me know and I'll erase my post immediately lol, while PMing you any later revised content on my part. Please do take your time and not ffel rushed to work on this as I know yopu're still trying to put out GD 2.0 chapter 2 .

[StargateWatcher]

I'd be happy to co-write a scene with you. With my school nearly over and all that is left are a few exams, ill be able to devote much more time to writing. The last few weeks been hectic and prevented an update.

Best of luck to you with taking your final exams and publishing your final papers. You seem like a really intelligent guy so you won't really need it that much.

[Princess Awinita]

for cowriting scenes I recommend using Titanpad.com or write.roleplaygateway.com for real time writing with a group

[StargateWatcher]

for cowriting scenes I recommend using Titanpad.com or write.roleplaygateway.com for real time writing with a group

Helpful sites to know, Awinita! I'll check it out. Thank you!

[Princess Awinita]

Helpful sites to know, Awinita! I'll check it out. Thank you!

Sometimes you can write a story in real time with people watching you every step of the way, or in this case every letter and space of the way

[StargateWatcher]

Sometimes you can write a story in real time with people watching you every step of the way, or in this case every letter and space of the way

Thanks for describing these processes further, Awinita. Every letter and space of the way hehe.

[StargateWatcher]

Hello folks. I'm back.

Been thinking more abouta possible crossover between Golden Dawn and Tauri-Furling series. I'd actually written out a very tentative scene in which Amann and co are negotiating with Il'ras and co. However, I pressed submit and didn't succeed at actually posting the content b/c of a timeout. No big loss; I restarted, and I couldn't get Amann in character so well lol.

Anways, I'm listing adn describing major T-F Series characters we can work with in the future.

Il'rahnd Aravansel: first leader of a united Furling people; lived during the pre-'Furling' era, when the elves comprising the Furling were divided into ideologically tribes whose leaders were either shunning each other or waging war on each other, all the while their common enemy was trying to exterminate them all; son of a frowned-upon marriage and 'illegal' marriage between one tribal noble and another; led highly successful peaceful resistance against harmful tribal divisions and armed resistance against Oruckses, Tch'rahlls, Oaeg'kirs enemies; founder of the nation of Furliya in its first incarnation, laid the foundations for Furliya as a Triangulum galaxy highly benevolent superpower for the next hundreds of millions of years; ancestor of Il'ras Aravansel, Nerilis Aravansel, and Elryn Aravansel

Than'ruil Aelerothi: confidant and friend to last Aravansel line monarch ; last King of Furling Unified Kingdom/ later founder and first High Consul of the Furling Unified Republic; ancestor of Tran'duil and Lekilis Aelerothi; saved the Furling Nation from forty major Erri takeover attempts

Il'ras Aravansel: current High Consul of the Furling Unified Republic (democratically elected non-hereditary position); direct descendant of Il'rahnd Aravansel, which along with his own outstanding accomplishments in the Furling Armed Warfare Services (FAWS) and the Furling Consulery and previously Furling Executory allows him to draw great respect from the Furlings and their allies

Tran'duil Aelerothi: current Deputy High Consul of the Furling Unified Republic; direct descendant of Thran'uil Aelerothi, which along with his achievements as a soldier and statesman commands great respect from th eFurlings and their allies

Ettrian Duirsar: current Furling Executor For National Military Defense/ Supreme Warfare Officer; close friend and comrade-in-arms of both; formerly Supreme Craft Officer of the Aerial-Spacial Fightborne Combat Craft Service (aka ASFCS; similar position to an Air Force chief of staff) very kindly and down-to-Earth elfman but despite these qualities he severely scares the heck out of his peoples' numerous powerful Triangulum Galaxy enemies b/c he's scored a lot of incomparable victories against them on the battlefield

Nerilis Aravansel: son of Il'ras Aravansel; current high-ranking Terrestrial Engagment Service (TES) general; has an abrasive, cocky personality; fights and achieves like Earth general George S. Patton

Elryn Aravansel : daughter of Il'ras Aravansel; one of Furliya's greatest physicians; mutual love intert of Lekilis Aelerothi; once decade-long hostage of their mortal Erri elf enemies

Lekilis Aelerothi: son of Tran'duil Aelerothi; high-ranking TES general; very down-to-Earth personality; fights and achieves like Earth generals Omar N. Bradley, Maxwell D. Taylor, and James Gavin

[Amann]

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7985274/...te_Golden_Dawn

Updated the fic. I was going to make this a big longer, but I decided to post this now and make the part I wanted to put up as part of chapter 3

[Princess Awinita]

Oi, Amann, check bookface soon will ya ? Hope I found the right guy to send a friend req

[StargateWatcher]

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7985274/...te_Golden_Dawn

Updated the fic. I was going to make this a big longer, but I decided to post this now and make the part I wanted to put up as part of chapter 3

works for me!

[Amann]

Oi, Amann, check bookface soon will ya ? Hope I found the right guy to send a friend req

Yes, I accepted.

works for me!

Good to hear. I hope to at least get started on chapter 3 tonight. We'll see how the day goes.

[Princess Awinita]

Yes, I accepted.

I noticed, Chapter two is grea,t chapter three I await! Also, remember my offer from YIM If we can do a collab writing on a pad together we might be able to get a LOT done for Black Wolf and Silver Wolf, even more for Galadriel and Amann interaction too!

Maybe even add in another ally to the mix perhaps.....

[StargateWatcher]

Hello folks. I'm back.

Been thinking more abouta possible crossover between Golden Dawn and Tauri-Furling series. I'd actually written out a very tentative scene in which Amann and co are negotiating with Il'ras and co. However, I pressed submit and didn't succeed at actually posting the content b/c of a timeout. No big loss; I restarted, and I couldn't get Amann in character so well lol.

Anways, I'm listing adn describing major T-F Series characters we can work with in the future.

Il'rahnd Aravansel: first leader of a united Furling people; lived during the pre-'Furling' era, when the elves comprising the Furling were divided into ideologically tribes whose leaders were either shunning each other or waging war on each other, all the while their common enemy was trying to exterminate them all; son of a frowned-upon marriage and 'illegal' marriage between one tribal noble and another; led highly successful peaceful resistance against harmful tribal divisions and armed resistance against Oruckses, Tch'rahlls, Oaeg'kirs enemies; founder of the nation of Furliya in its first incarnation, laid the foundations for Furliya as a Triangulum galaxy highly benevolent superpower for the next hundreds of millions of years; ancestor of Il'ras Aravansel, Nerilis Aravansel, and Elryn Aravansel

Than'ruil Aelerothi: confidant and friend to last Aravansel line monarch ; last King of Furling Unified Kingdom/ later founder and first High Consul of the Furling Unified Republic; ancestor of Tran'duil and Lekilis Aelerothi; saved the Furling Nation from forty major Erri takeover attempts

Il'ras Aravansel: current High Consul of the Furling Unified Republic (democratically elected non-hereditary position); direct descendant of Il'rahnd Aravansel, which along with his own outstanding accomplishments in the Furling Armed Warfare Services (FAWS) and the Furling Consulery and previously Furling Executory allows him to draw great respect from the Furlings and their allies

Tran'duil Aelerothi: current Deputy High Consul of the Furling Unified Republic; direct descendant of Thran'uil Aelerothi, which along with his achievements as a soldier and statesman commands great respect from th eFurlings and their allies

Ettrian Duirsar: current Furling Executor For National Military Defense/ Supreme Warfare Officer; close friend and comrade-in-arms of both; formerly Supreme Craft Officer of the Aerial-Spacial Fightborne Combat Craft Service (aka ASFCS; similar position to an Air Force chief of staff) very kindly and down-to-Earth elfman but despite these qualities he severely scares the heck out of his peoples' numerous powerful Triangulum Galaxy enemies b/c he's scored a lot of incomparable victories against them on the battlefield

Nerilis Aravansel: son of Il'ras Aravansel; current high-ranking Terrestrial Engagment Service (TES) general; has an abrasive, cocky personality; fights and achieves like Earth general George S. Patton

Elryn Aravansel : daughter of Il'ras Aravansel; one of Furliya's greatest physicians; mutual love intert of Lekilis Aelerothi; once decade-long hostage of their mortal Erri elf enemies

Lekilis Aelerothi: son of Tran'duil Aelerothi; high-ranking TES general; very down-to-Earth personality; fights and achieves like Earth generals Omar N. Bradley, Maxwell D. Taylor, and James Gavin

So, any thoughts Amann on how to this crossover story? I do realize that you're may be in the midst of working on chapter 3 right now, and possibly also collaborating with Awinita on it, so we may hjave to wait some time to collaborate. But on your end, do you have any basic ideas opn hwo to use the T-F main characters?

[StargateWatcher]

So, any thoughts Amann on how to this crossover story? I do realize that you're may be in the midst of working on chapter 3 right now, and possibly also collaborating with Awinita on it, so we may hjave to wait some time to collaborate. But on your end, do you have any basic ideas opn hwo to use the T-F main characters?

You still on gateworld.net these days Amann lol?

[Amann]

You still on gateworld.net these days Amann lol?

Yeah I'm here. Sorry, forgot there was a reply to the thread.

So, any thoughts Amann on how to this crossover story? I do realize that you're may be in the midst of working on chapter 3 right now, and possibly also collaborating with Awinita on it, so we may hjave to wait some time to collaborate. But on your end, do you have any basic ideas opn hwo to use the T-F main characters?

There are always negative space wedgies to connect the universes. Stargate is alot like Star Trek in some of the ways that Tech of the Week is used. But more than likely, the galaxy is just a really big place and it would be easy to find races never mentioned in the show. Plenty of places the Goa'uld do not have influence over, it's just they are the major power with their numbers and vast resources.

[StargateWatcher]

Yeah I'm here. Sorry, forgot there was a reply to the thread.

Ah; it's cool. Does happen sometimes hehe.



There are always negative space wedgies to connect the universes. Stargate is alot like Star Trek in some of the ways that Tech of the Week is used. But more than likely, the galaxy is just a really big place and it would be easy to find races never mentioned in the show. Plenty of places the Goa'uld do not have influence over, it's just they are the major power with their numbers and vast resources.

True--altho I was wondering if we could bring about an xover by actually having the Alesians end up in this different universe, b/c my Furling are allied with Earth too like the Alesians are.

Have started writing a tentative draft which I'd like you to scrutinize in all fairness b/c it's 1/2 your story tho. First tho, I'd thought to include for Alesians: Amann, and maybe Galadriel and Demos for the other Alesian H.C. members as well as Ayen and some other Alesian generals and some legates in this scene. We'll definitely discuss the final Alesian characters present for this xover chapter one and also the Furling characters present for chapter one. I'm thinking Il'ras, Tran'duil. Ettrian and some other military officers, the Prime Executor and some Executory Grand Component (equivalent to Earth govt's Executive Branches) Department Executors.

[Princess Awinita]

I wonder how the Alesians would react to the Triumvir Republic......

Hurrin
Shangeili
Unggoy

Those three races, the Huriin are feline, they have High Elf type names, the Unggoy are Grunts from Halo yes, so they have typical Grunty names like Yingda and Yodin, and Duffen, and Bofafo and such their technology is pretty much right from halo, though enhanced with Ancient tech, though they regard that Atlantis was inspired by Forerunner arcitecture. So they meet the Ancients at what they call Installation First Meeting, which is actually the Ark from Halo 3. they know there are planets made by the Forerunners, {shield worlds} and also the Portal Device on Earth, which they may soon make their way to to use....

But I wonder though now, how would these Republic, which defend their space like nuts {The Unggoy have three planets and dozens of space stations to themselves given by the Ancients and such} the Huriin, the felines regard where Bastet once lived as holy ground, they are also looking for the remains of Lod Yu's holdings.

Meanwhile the republic also possess World Devestator technology in their CSO class ships. which are massive massive things