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    #46
    Originally posted by RickWesten View Post
    Here is your amaizing script !

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    You actually printed out all 52 pages, title page included?

    Sorry about the MASSIVE delay with ''Code of Honor'', never done a character centric thing before so still trying to work out the bugs in the script before I upload it. I can promise you this, this episode will feature some big reveals and revolations, character moments coensiding with previous plotlines (Shippers be warned!) and the introduction to a new character
    Last edited by Bagpuss; 23 May 2013, 07:47 AM.

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      #47
      In the meantime, here is a short sneak peek since the delay in releasing the episode was larger than I thought it was going to be:
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      INT. DESTINY’S COMPUTER CORE

      We are inside Destiny’s computer core mainframe, a vast area filled with large pillars stacked with information written in the Ancient language that goes on as far as the eye can see. We zoom down and see Eli wandering this vast computer realm.

      NICHOLAS RUSH (O.S.)
      Eli, found anything yet?

      Rush’s voice booms throughout the room like a drum beating ever few seconds, Eli looks around.

      ELI WALLACE
      Do you have any idea how big it is in here?! It’s like freaking Tron in here!

      NICHOLAS RUSH (O.S.)
      Touchy, touchy. Let me know if you find anything useful.

      Eli looks ahead and sees a striking black haried woman across the way from him.

      ELI WALLACE
      Ahhh gotta go! BRB!

      He chases after the woman who turns and runs away from him.

      CUT TO:

      INT. DESTINY - VR ROOM

      We are back in the VR room with Rush, Adam, Dale and Lisa. Rush has a confused expression as he looks at the three.

      NICHOLAS RUSH
      BRB?

      Adam, Dale and Lisa look at each other for a moment, then back at Rush.

      ADAM, DALE & LISA
      Be Right Back.
      Last edited by Homer 120; 03 May 2012, 11:44 PM.

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        #48
        nice trailer i gotta do my homework been off in fairyland what are you up to now?
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          #49
          Originally posted by LT. COL. John Sheppard View Post
          nice trailer i gotta do my homework been off in fairyland what are you up to now?
          About a quarter of the way through Act Four, big TJ/Young scene.

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            #50
            Act Four = COMPLETED! Starting work on the fifth and final act of the episode, I hope to have this released later today (UK time)

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              #51
              UPDATE:
              My computer was infected with a virus called Win32/FakeSysdef, got a random black screen after startup. Long story short I had to restore the computer to find that it had wiped EVERYTHING including my progress on ''Code of Honor''! So have to start from scratch!

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                #52
                Originally posted by Homer 120 View Post
                UPDATE:
                My computer was infected with a virus called Win32/FakeSysdef, got a random black screen after startup. Long story short I had to restore the computer to find that it had wiped EVERYTHING including my progress on ''Code of Honor''! So have to start from scratch!
                That sucks. Fraggin Hackers! you can do it tho.

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                  #53
                  Found a backup copy! Crisis averted

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                    #54
                    phew!

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                      #55
                      Sadly I had to completely restore my OS system, it was a random Black Screen that would appear when I'd logon to the computer. So had to reinstall EVERYTHING and start from the beginning, wasn't too happy with the way some of the episode was heading so was considering writing a 2nd draft anyway.

                      UPDATE:
                      LOTS OF RE-WRITES ARE COMING! Yes folks, looking over what I had done I wasn too happy with the pace and the story seemed to be too all over the place. Starting from the beginning with a completely new storyline for Varro.
                      Last edited by Homer 120; 08 May 2012, 04:15 AM.

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                        #56
                        ''Code of Honor'' version 2.0 - Sneak Peek:
                        ================================
                        INT. DESTINY - BRIDGE

                        MATTHEW SCOTT, ADAM BRODY, DALE VOLKER, ELI WALLACE, LISA PARK and Varro are present as Everett enters.

                        MATTHEW SCOTT
                        We’ve got three planets in range sir, two of which appear to have Stargates.

                        Everett walks towards the back of the main chair and looks down

                        EVERETT YOUNG
                        Anything note worthy?

                        VARRO
                        One of the planets in range appears to have a sizeable quantity of medicinals that Lieutenant Johansen is in need of.

                        EVERETT YOUNG
                        Such us?

                        LISA PARK
                        It doesn’t specify sir, but they are a good match for the stuff she’s lookin’ for.

                        ADAM BRODY
                        There might also be some odds and ends laying about.

                        Everett smiles already convinced.

                        EVERETT YOUNG
                        Alright, looks like we have a mission. Eli I want you to be the first on that planet, check out the area and if it’s viable report back.

                        ELI WALLACE
                        There’s just one problem.

                        EVERETT YOUNG
                        What’s that?

                        DALE VOLKER
                        The planet’s been locked out.

                        EVERETT YOUNG
                        OK, so, unlock it.

                        ELI WALLACE
                        Are you so sure that that’s a good idea?

                        ADAM BRODY
                        We know that the Destiny only locks out a planet that it deems unsafe for exploration.

                        LISA PARK
                        And as we know stuff can hit the fan pretty quick.

                        ADAM BRODY
                        And go from bad to worser from there.

                        Dale looks at Adam.

                        DALE VOLKER
                        Worser?

                        Adam looks back at Dale.

                        ADAM BRODY
                        Its a word!

                        DALE VOLKER
                        The define it!

                        Adam struggles to come up with something.

                        ADAM BRODY
                        It means........

                        Everyone waits for him to finish.

                        ADAM BRODY (CONT’D)
                        I think the word is pretty self explanatory.

                        Eli leans in and whispers to Dale.

                        ELI WALLACE
                        He’s got nothing.

                        EVERETT YOUNG
                        You guys done?

                        Adam, Dale and Eli nod their heads. Everett looks over at Varro.

                        EVERETT YOUNG (CONT’D)
                        What do you think?

                        Varro looks over at Everett.

                        VARRO
                        From what we know Destiny is a pretty advanced piece of technology and that every time she has told us something it has been for a reason, but since the planet we’re talking about appears to be the only one in range with the supplies we need, I think it is worth the risk.

                        Everett nods.

                        EVERETT YOUNG
                        Unlock it, I don’t care how you do it just do it. Eli head on down to the gate room, I’ll meet you there. Lieutenant Scott will lead the away team.

                        Everett turns around and exits the bridge. Eli disappears, Varro walks up to Matt.

                        VARRO
                        Lieutenant can I talk to you for a second?

                        Matt nods as Varro walks up to him.

                        MATTHEW SCOTT
                        What’s up?

                        VARRO
                        I’d like to request permission to be part of the exploration team that goes down to the planet.

                        MATTHEW SCOTT
                        Fellin’ a little cooped up?

                        VARRO
                        That’s an understatement.

                        Matt nods.

                        MATTHEW SCOTT
                        Alright, gear up and head on down to the gate.

                        VARRO
                        Thank you!

                        Varro walks up the small flight of stairs and exits the bridge. Matt stands up and speaks into his radio.

                        MATTHEW SCOTT
                        Sargent Greer, Lieutenant James gear up and report to the gate room.

                        Matt then points at Adam and gestures him to follow him. Adam follows Matt out of the bridge leaving Lisa and Dale alone. Dale looks at Lisa with slight confusion.

                        DALE VOLKER
                        Did they say whose in charge here?

                        They both look at each other then at the Command Chair, Lisa runs catching Dale off guard and making it to the chair first. Dale shakes his head in annoyance and goes back to his station as Lisa sits down on the chair, nodding in approval.

                        DALE VOLKER (CONT’D)
                        You’re like a child you know that?
                        Last edited by Homer 120; 10 May 2012, 01:54 AM.

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                          #57
                          UPDATE:
                          Slight alteration in the synopsis for ''Code of Honor'' coenciding with the re-write

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                            #58
                            Hey guys!

                            http://forum.gateworld.net/threads/8...4#post13333264

                            Above is a link to a new thread I decided to go with given recent changes made to ''Code of Honor''s storyline and the new sneak peek, please direct all new posts to the topic posted above as this one will be closed shortly. This does not mean I am giving up, I do still plan on completing this project in due time. Just taking longer for 3x02 than expected.

                            Thank you all for your support and, hopfully, continued support!

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                              #59
                              H - little friendly advice ask the mods to close this thread and direct it to the V 2 thread
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                                #60
                                He'd already asked in advance ,so no worries,LT COL.


                                For 2.0 please follow this link everyone : SGU-Stargate Universe-The Continuation (2.0)

                                I'll edit that link into Post one here too.
                                The place to "Gate" to during Outages for updates and info:

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