Stargate: The Legend of Arcturus Maximus Primus

[Alpha Omega Protocol]

Don't spend too much time on the rewrites, it'll eat away at your SOUL!

Just the first few chapters should be fine. after that focus on more story

I'll drop a better comment on the story itself once i'm not dead tired

Just major fixes in the chapters really, and I am focusing on new chapters. Burns is going through it first and then I go over what he sent me. I really need to finish chapter 20 and send that to burns and then start chapter 21 after I gather some star trek resources to finish finalizing the timeline AMP has arrived in.

Sleep is good, just wish it we didn't have too, I could wright for another 8 hours!

[Burns]

Rl is kicking my a.. right now hopefully be done 19 tonight

[Alpha Omega Protocol]

Well we have chapter 19 up! Working on 20 tonight, and 19 is a bit unpolished. So when I have time I will update it after its been beta'd.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5505302/19/

This ends the current story arc, and sets for the next arc.

[Alpha Omega Protocol]

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5505302/20/

We have an update! The start of a new arc of the story. We will begin to see AMP interacting with more of the Star Trek universe.

[Aragon101]

did i ever send you that beta?I recall talking about the insanity and such

[Alpha Omega Protocol]

Yep I haven't rewritten chapter 19 yet. Been trying to focus on getting the future plotted out, and written. Hey I have a Question does Hexalus Volaris sound like an Olim name?

[Aragon101]

Yep I haven't rewritten chapter 19 yet. Been trying to focus on getting the future plotted out, and written. Hey I have a Question does Hexalus Volaris sound like an Olim name?

Hmm sorta Olim language is a mix of Latin and Greek.

Dont' worry too much about rewriting just yet. I think if you implemented what i suggest in new chapters, you'll get practice doing it from scratch

[Burns]

New chapter is up

[Aragon101]

New chapter is up

Link? I'm on new computer and lost all my old bookmarks

[Burns]

here you go http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5505302/21/

[Alpha Omega Protocol]

I think this what a lot of people were waiting for with the story. Like Burns said its up!

[Aragon101]

I think this what a lot of people were waiting for with the story. Like Burns said its up!

Drake huh?

Raven haired makes me think he's got a bird on top of his head Or feathers. Just anything but black

Also, there's one geeky thing i'm SHOCKED you didn't mention. Geordi's Pardoxical Borg Destroyer.

http://memory-alpha.org/wiki/Topological_anomaly

[Alpha Omega Protocol]

Hmmm I didn't know about the topological anomaly. I think I missed that episode, and I haven't seen next generation in years. *failure as a geek*

"Raven haired makes me think he's got a bird on top of his head Or feathers. Just anything but black"

ha! maybe it should of been raven colored hair... all well.

Yep Seven/Drake is off causing trouble and playing games with ds9 haha. Drake not an Asuran enough name? Good because he changed his name to match a Tau'ri that died while protecting him back in the second year of the Alliance. His name before that was Sharoth. I should do a part in the next chapter to include a flashback or something... lol

[Alpha Omega Protocol]

Chapter 22 has been uploaded!
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5505302/22/

It may take a while for fan fic to post it but should be up soon if not already by the time you are reading this.

[Aragon101]

You messed up the punctuation. Everything is in Italics. Annoying! (just gave it a blazingly fast quick skim. will read in full tomorrow )

As far as what we talked about, i'll likely email you sometime tomorrow with something

[Burns]

Nice to see it's back, it been a slow couple of slow weeks in the world of Fanfics

[Alpha Omega Protocol]

You messed up the punctuation. Everything is in Italics. Annoying! (just gave it a blazingly fast quick skim. will read in full tomorrow )

As far as what we talked about, i'll likely email you sometime tomorrow with something

WTF?! In the document uploader there is only italics in the right areas... However somehow it is italics in the whole thing... *CONFUSED*

I may have to completely remove the chapter and re add it... I tried replacing the chapter contents lets hope that works if not then I will remove and re-add it!

Nice to see it's back, it been a slow couple of slow weeks in the world of Fanfics

Yeah it has, but I was only two days late on this chapter... I really don't know why everything is in italics...


P.S. Hey the italics issue is fixed! Odd that it happened at all but whatever lol.

[Aragon101]

WTF?! In the document uploader there is only italics in the right areas... However somehow it is italics in the whole thing... *CONFUSED*

I may have to completely remove the chapter and re add it... I tried replacing the chapter contents lets hope that works if not then I will remove and re-add it!



Yeah it has, but I was only two days late on this chapter... I really don't know why everything is in italics...


P.S. Hey the italics issue is fixed! Odd that it happened at all but whatever lol.

ff.net is ALWAYS screwing up.

[Alpha Omega Protocol]

As far as what we talked about, i'll likely email you sometime tomorrow with something

Cool, I would like to know about what you think of Drake Do'k as character overall. Is he good or too hollow?

Chapter 23 has been uploaded:
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5505302/23/

Sorry for the lateness, but real life sucked last week or so. But it is the longest chapter yet! Hopefully you guys enjoy it!

[Alpha Omega Protocol]

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5505302/24/

New chapter! Holy cow a month has passed since I last updated. O_O
Expect 1 to 2 week releases of new chapters.