Glad you like it! You have stargate and startrek on your dvr? Nice!
Should of put this at the start of my story:
My story starts out from Stargate: Atlantis Season 3 episode 5: PROGENY
Ch 11 has been posted!
I have updated it up to chapter 14!
Would like reviews of the newest chapters. 13 +14
The Q thing will probably be done in 2-3 chapters. Which I think the crew of AMP would be relieved.
Thanks for the review!
And we have chapter 15 up!
@Burns: I think you will like this one a lot more.
As always please review!
I am glad you commented on it!!! I need to finish some real life stuff so it may be a week or two before I get the next chapter up. Sometimes I wish I could skip real life to focus on this.
ughm tried reading the story, but after chapter 5 I did not follow the story at all anymore, it was just weird
But I should of put that I was shooting forward in time. If that is what you meant by weird then my fault on that. Thanks for being honest! Please reply if this is what you meant by weird or if it isn't could you clarify weird for me?
it was not that, I lost track of the ENTIRE story, it ended up with me asking what the hell am I reading about.
Ah so it was confusing? Any suggestions for making it better?
I have been working off and on with re-writing the story. Fixing grammar errors, fixing stuff that doesn't make sense, and trying to make the story flow smoother. This is my first fan fiction so I haven't made one before. But I have been improving in the later chapters which is why I want to rewrite the earlier chapters so they are as good as the later better chapters.
So any ideas would help a lot! You only get better if someone critiques your work.
Chapter 16 is up!
Chapter 17 probably will be up a week from now.
@Burns: You most likely wont like the end of the chapter, but Junior will disappear again next chapter. But I hope to see what you think of the chapter still! And I may change it depending on the reviews of the end of the chapter.
Chapter 17 has been added to the story, just waiting for Fanfiction.net to finish adding the story!
Also Burns is betaing for Stargate: The Legend of Arcturus Maximus Primus! So expect a lot less grammar errors! The plan is to have Ch 18 up within a week from now. Maybe faster if my writing reaches a hyper point.
Your getting better, keep it up. Can't wait to read the next chapter
I am almost 3k words in the next chapter so far. Hope to finish the first draft on friday, and do a revised draft before I send it to you.
Chapter 18 is up!
Chapter 18 Title: Chapter 18
Rating: Rated: M
Story Summary: Alternate universe of Stargate Atlantis. This is a story about my 3d
ship I made based on the Ancients! Its going to be a cross over and will
eventually get to the Star Wars Universe, where the mod I made takes place.
Hope you enjoy it!
Credit to me and Burns who betas for me!
Updated Chapter 1 with a rewrite of chapter one of AMP. It includes more information of the universe, and a better prologue. It also fixes a ton of grammar mistakes. Burns and I are working to rewrite the first chapters, and we are still working on chapter 19. It is supposed to be the chapter that sets up the rest of the story, and the finish of the first arc and start of the second. I want it to be awesome, and sorry it has taken so long! RL has been bad for both Burns and I.
Don't spend too much time on the rewrites, it'll eat away at your SOUL!
Just the first few chapters should be fine. after that focus on more story
I'll drop a better comment on the story itself once i'm not dead tired
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