Well I have to say that I’m glad I get your fic a chance, and I like it.
Totally could see Helen mentoring little Henry and him been the kind of guy he is but small, the way you reason through Helen’s mind about things as mundane as been there for someone or very important things as motherhood for the impact she has had an young Henry were really good.
At the end when she makes up her mind and walks resolute to her lab to do what she had waited so long to do; I couldn’t but think about recent events in the show and got a little sad, but I have to assume that the time she had with her daughter were good, just as the time Ashley had with Henry her “big brother”
Very good.
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This make me smile, big guy doesn’t get it, why she wants a piece of paper stuck on the fridge? and her answer shows how proud and fond of her pupil she really is.
In this paragraph I can see the loneliness she has live on, how she has guarded her heart and even pushing those how could have fill it with warm and loveSpoiler:




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