Plot Bunny Adoption

[fems]

Thus, the nick name is only used in dialog with the characters, who call each other by nick names.

Personally I find this one of the things that is overdone in fanfiction, because really, how often do you call your friends/family by their name while talking to them? You usually just turn towards the person you're talking to and probably would only resort to calling them by name when you're speaking to a group (or handing out orders). These days it's hardly even necessary to greet someone by name on the phone because most people have number recognition and know who's calling before they even pick up and it's kind of odd to answer your cell phone with your name considering the person who called you usually knows who they're calling.

So I really think you should be careful with that, especially when using nicknames, and only use it sparingly and perhaps over the radio.

[Jackie]

Personally I find this one of the things that is overdone in fanfiction, because really, how often do you call your friends/family by their name while talking to them? You usually just turn towards the person you're talking to and probably would only resort to calling them by name when you're speaking to a group (or handing out orders). These days it's hardly even necessary to greet someone by name on the phone because most people have number recognition and know who's calling before they even pick up and it's kind of odd to answer your cell phone with your name considering the person who called you usually knows who they're calling.

So I really think you should be careful with that, especially when using nicknames, and only use it sparingly and perhaps over the radio.

If my friends has a nick name, that they go by, I use it...we all do.

I have three friends who use nick names:

Moondog, Buddy and Flowbee - and yes, people call them by that.

So, yes I do have friends who constantly use unusual nick names, only time they are called by thier actual name is for formal events, ect.

Granted, most people do not use odd nick names, but those who do - get mad when you call them by thier given name. Some people do not like to be called by thier real name.

My friend Buddy his other nick name is "Ugly buddy" and he will tell you not to call him his real name, Byron. he doesn't like his name and goes by buddy or ugly buddy.

So, from my own experience, I would have to say that some people prefer thier nick names.

[fems]

If my friends has a nick name, that they go by, I use it...we all do.

I have three friends who use nick names:

Moondog, Buddy and Flowbee - and yes, people call them by that.

So, yes I do have friends who constantly use unusual nick names, only time they are called by thier actual name is for formal events, ect.

Granted, most people do not use odd nick names, but those who do - get mad when you call them by thier given name. Some people do not like to be called by thier real name.

My friend Buddy his other nick name is "Ugly buddy" and he will tell you not to call him his real name, Byron. he doesn't like his name and goes by buddy or ugly buddy.

So, from my own experience, I would have to say that some people prefer thier nick names.

I'm not saying people don't use nicknames, I'm just pointing out that in normal conversation people often don't call others by any name (be that their given name or a nickname). Can you honestly say that if you're in a room with your friend buddy you call him by his name? That your conversations go something like this:

Jackie: hey Buddy, how are you?
Buddy: Jackie! I'm fine, how are you?
Jackie: Cool, great to hear Buddy. So what have you been up to?
Buddy: Oh, you know, this and that, Jackie.
Jackie: So I was thinking maybe we could do [something] with Moondog, Buddy and Flowbee.
Buddy: Oh, that's an awesome idea, Jackie.
Jackie: I thought so too, Buddy.

In my experience no names (with the exception of people who aren't present) would be mentioned in a conversation like this. Overall, I hardly call anyone by their name and vice versa when I'm talking with/to them, no matter how long. The only time a name is used is when talking about non-present people or when they're trying to get your attention and vice versa.

[Jackie]

You're just pointing out the obvious. I think what you were trying to say is to write in a natural flow, but without seeing the story, and only going by a "top-off-my head" synopsis, you have no clue how I am writing the story or the flow, sentence structure, ect.

People talk naturally and when I write, I do so naturally. In the story, I write they are assigned nick names as part of the project, like a cover. The team is an experiment, I can't drop the nick names, it's weaved into the story.

Using names, any name constantly, would be awfully repetitive and annoying for the reader.

[SF_and_Coffee]

Well, regardless of whether I'll read a story filled with nicknames (perhaps you should think of them as call signs or code names instead and refer to them as such?) if by "de Vinci" you mean to make a reference to the famous artist, at least spell it right: da Vinci.

[Seaboe Muffinchucker]

Guys, don't you think this conversation belongs in one of the writing discussion threads? There don't seem to be any orphaned bunnies involved.

Seaboe

[SF_and_Coffee]

I agree... if the original poster of this tangent wants to take it there.

[Jackie]

I've decided to just delete the story and not bother to finish it. After seeing the responses to the story and not one person even helped with the plot bunny issue, i don't feel like bothering it anymore...And the readers would probably flame it just as bad.

Can't see putting that much work and effort into something that will just be flamed.

[fems]

I've decided to just delete the story and not bother to finish it. After seeing the responses to the story and not one person even helped with the plot bunny issue, i don't feel like bothering it anymore...And the readers would probably flame it just as bad.

Can't see putting that much work and effort into something that will just be flamed.

Well, to be fair your original post would have probably been better suited in the Fic Help thread. At least it's my understanding that people can orphan plot bunnies in this one so others with more writing skills/spare time/motivation/whatever can adopt the plot bunny and use it for a fic. It seems like you just wanted help to help mature your plot bunnies and not dump 'em here. Frankly I only look at this thread whenever I'm bored, simply because I'm not interested in other people's plot bunnies while I have so many of my own (nor do I want to orphan mine). The Fic Help thread on the other hand is one I'm subscribed to and seems to be visited by other people more often as well.

As for not helping, well the plot wasn't really my thing. The all girl team and super powers etc is just too far removed from what I enjoy. However, you shouldn't abandon a story you want to write simply because help here hasn't been forthcoming or because you're afraid people will flame it. You should write whatever the hell you like and write it because you want to tell a story; if it turns out people enjoy your stories then that's just an added bonus. Or at least that's how I feel about it.

[Jackie]

Perhaps, I mis-understood the thread. I thought the thread was to get help for plots and not list plots you will not use. I thought this was a thread for help with a plot. I stated I needed help with plot in the first line. Sorry, if i made a mistake.

That being said, I found the replies to my post very condescending rather than helpful. You argued with me over if I should have nick names in a story and not address the question I asked. If the post was on the wrong thread, simply say so, rather than argue over that sort of detail.

[SF_and_Coffee]

Jackie, a few things:

First off, NO ONE here is out to flame you. Okay?

Now, sure, you did put your request in the wrong thread. But isn't a big deal, especially when someone is new to this particular subforum. In fact, that's why some of us actually did try to offer you advice here, even though the discussion would have been better suited to the "Fic Help" thread. So don't worry about it. This wasn't the first time something like that has happened, and I'm sure it won't be the last. No worries.

However, because this is a forum for fanfic writers to help out other fanfic writers, most of us generally will offer suggestions and even critiques/criticism. Constructive criticism is NOT flaming! I honestly think that every piece of criticism you were given was intended to be constructive; I know for a fact that mine was. When you ask another writer or a group of them for advice and input, you run the risk that they might NOT just gush and say, "Oh, what a wonderful idea! I love it!" They might, in fact, point out things you could change to make a good idea even better, or things that might make a mediocre idea good.

I would venture to say that every one of us here has written something that was mediocre at best, at some point in our lives. I've been writing original science fiction for longer than some of my fellow writers here have even been alive, and some of my early work makes me cringe. It has honestly taken me until the past small handful of years to finally feel as though I were writing material that other people might think was good enough to read and enjoy. But that feeling came about because I took classes and participated in critique groups and writers' workshops where we were all freely encouraged to give completely honest feedback to one another, in the hope that all of us would thereby improve our craft. Praise is a wonderful thing and it feels really good both to give and to receive, but it won't do one-tenth as much to improve a writer's work as constructive criticism will.

The trick is to abandon the mindset that sees all criticism as a negative thing or as an attack, because it isn't. My suggestions to you were not intended to tear you down, nor to 'flame' you (trust me, I've seen flames before, and you haven't been flamed on this thread), nor were those offered by Fems or anyone else. We were all trying to help. I do tend to revert to "writers' workshop" mode when I'm offering advice to other writers, and I do realize that it can seem a bit much, for which I hereby apologize to anyone who's ever been on the receiving end of it without adequate advance notice from me. (Fems and Starfist might both have something to say about that, by the way -- and they are welcome to.)

Sincerely, though, it looked like you didn't really have much of a story to ask for help with. It felt more like you were walking in and saying, "Hi, I have this group of characters unlike anyone else we've seen in Stargate, and they all have superpowers and nicknames. They have to have the superpowers and nicknames to make the story work, but I don't actually know how I want to write the story. Can someone tell me how to write it?" That's a little bit like asking other writers to take your characters and almost write the plot for you. Problem is, we're all pretty busy writing our own stories, so while we don't mind helping another writer to overcome an obstacle that has her stuck somewhere on her own project, I think most of us really expect our fellow writers to come up with their own essential plots and frameworks, with which we will then gladly help to tweak or improve if we can. A cast of characters, no matter how quirky and different they may be, is no substitute for a basic plot, and throwing in, "This canon character is mad at this original character, this other OC is dating this other CC, and by the way Jack doesn't even like the idea of these people except for one of them," doesn't really go very far toward being a plot, either.

Having said all that, if you want to write a story and are open to sincere suggestions and constructive criticism, then by all means we are here to help you. If you really just want praise and pats on the back, then you might want to write the story on your own or with the help of a personal friend, and once you've written it, put it up online someplace and start a thread for it here in the Fanfic subforum with a link to wherever you've published it. People who like the story will probably say so on that thread, and/or by whatever review options your publication site offers. Others will likely ignore it, rather than taking the time to actually criticize anything about it.

It's up to you to do whatever it is you feel will be most likely to get you what you're looking for.

[fems]

I agree with most of what SF_and_Coffee said above.

My suggestions to you were not intended to tear you down, nor to 'flame' you (trust me, I've seen flames before, and you haven't been flamed on this thread), nor were those offered by Fems or anyone else. We were all trying to help. I do tend to revert to "writers' workshop" mode when I'm offering advice to other writers, and I do realize that it can seem a bit much, for which I hereby apologize to anyone who's ever been on the receiving end of it without adequate advance notice from me. (Fems and Starfist might both have something to say about that, by the way -- and they are welcome to.)

My original comment was actually more of a random thought and didn't have a lot to do with the fic itself, I just simply wanted to point out how irrelevant the use of (nick)names can be in a story because it's unrealistic to constantly refer to someone by (nick)name and that someone should therefore be careful with overusing them, especially nicknames since they would only be used in dialogue. There's nothing flame-y about it. Just a word of caution.

While SF_and_Coffee might revert to writers' workshop mode, that is just the way I am. Look around the forum and you'll see I'm usually quite direct and honest in my opinions when it comes to things like these. If you would rather I sugarcoat things and only give praise, then please to say so beforehand and I shall keep my opinion/advice to myself. That way I won't trample on your feelings and save myself the time and effort of actually writing a reply.

As for being on the receiving end of SF_and_Coffee's advice; I don't recall ever having had problems with it or how it was phrased. Or she would have certainly heard about it.

[Arya]

All right, so this is a SG thred, but I have a verry lonsom plot bunnie who would love a new home, would any one be willing to adopt him? Just in case your interested here it is-
What if Afina was a guy.
would turn out to be an Afina (male)/Helen
Sorry if I anger any of you for my sanctuary invasion.

[Twilord]

Ba'al wasn't killed when the symbiote was removed because the 'clone' of host also had a copy of his conciousness.

Ultimately he becomes a hok'tar and attempts to leave this universe through a version of the dimensional mirror which he built himself with help from Carter's, McKay's, Lee's and Miller's research into the topic. This however causes Carter to begin to notice something is up with "Aziru".

Eventually he travels through the mirror to another reality where the only Stargate on Earth was the one beneath the ice of Antartic, but Carter finally realises it and chases him through before he can change the settings on the other side.

Once on the other side Carter snags an Alkesh and manages to reach Earth; meanwhile Ba'al triggers the Jaffa rebellion with help from Teal'c, now claiming himself as 'one of the great and powerful beings that the pathetic Goa'uld derived their limited power from'.

Carter helps establish the new SGC to defend against Ba'al, but is kept a considerable distance (presenting a good reason for Earth's slow development, but allowing them access to her for when its useful).

The new SGC hires Charlie O'Neill as the new Daniel Jackson, Jack's death when he was young having affected him deeply and pushed him towards his academics interests rather than the millitary path he was headed down. Carter can't help but become attached to Charlie, as a reminder of home.

(Kinda want to suggest Charlie could be gay... but that is totally out there / just for fun.)

[Anto117]

Heres an SG1 plot bunny I've had since I got season 9 and 10 on DVD.

Bounty AU, what if Netan wasn't killed by Ventrell and as more bounty hunters go after SG1, Cameron and Vala have to go undercover as bounty hunters and team up with other mercs to take out Netan.

[Eldritch]

You know, I always thought it would be cool to have seen an episode where SG1 disappeared under mysterious circumstances, and after a reasonable length of time Hammond was ordered to give up the search and resume normal SG operations. So he takes a leave of absence, and gets with Jacob and Bratac to locate and rescue SG1. A one off story with just the three 'old guys'.

[selene0789]

You know, I always thought it would be cool to have seen an episode where SG1 disappeared under mysterious circumstances, and after a reasonable length of time Hammond was ordered to give up the search and resume normal SG operations. So he takes a leave of absence, and gets with Jacob and Bratac to locate and rescue SG1. A one off story with just the three 'old guys'.

This kind of happened in the show, didn't it? Okay, maybe not, but reading this immediately made me think of "Out of Mind"/"Into the Fire".

[SF_and_Coffee]

This kind of happened in the show, didn't it? Okay, maybe not, but reading this immediately made me think of "Out of Mind"/"Into the Fire".

I have a fanfic in the pipeline involving those two episodes, and while it isn't quite as Eldritch has described, it does involve a different sort of search for SG-1, conducted by none other than

Spoiler:

our own beloved (at least by fans of my story All That We Leave Behind) Colonel Frank Cromwell, along with a few trusted Tok'ra allies.

[tlw]

Here is a plot bunny.

What if Catherine was a friend of Daniel's parents and she became his foster mother when his parents were killed.

[iiradned]

Here is a plot bunny.

What if Catherine was a friend of Daniel's parents and she became his foster mother when his parents were killed.

Half of your bunny has been done.

Belonging by Nadie2 has Daniel being adopted by Catherine after the accident though she was not a friend to Daniel's parents she was there when the accident happened.