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    As said in the past here on GateWorld, I would come again with my works.

    Our story begins at the end of a fictional Season 6, our usual heroes are still in Atlantis, after returning to Pegasus via its hyperdrive.

    I will make my statement on the controversial "Wormhole drive" as described and employed in "Enemy at the Gate". It is not without merit; currently as we are, it is without concept. We may see genuine concept of such a plot device in Stargate: Extinction.

    When I began my fan fiction, it was before "First Strike" originally aired. My concepts were different, having Weir in command of Atlantis, with Carter visiting from time to time on SGC business. The Wraith were again becoming a dangerous threat once again, this time far more directly, and with more motives than before.

    I wanted to keep Kolya alive in my vision, since I always found him to be the perfect adversary opposite to Sheppard. Todd's Wraith faction is a perfect element to place in an ongoing fight. I saw greater things in Michael's faction, especially as played out in "The Last Man". In my vision, he's still around, and he's been busy!

    Janus is the most intriguing Ancient I have ever seen. Are there more like him? I would say, "You could say that."

    How did the original war progress toward the end? What happened after the Lantean exodus?

    You will find out.

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    6x20 "Komaris" Ch1, Ch2, Ch3, Ch4, Ch5, Ch6, Ch6-2, Ch7, Ch8, Ch9, Ch10, Ch10-2, Ch11, Ch12,
    Ch13, Ch14, Ch 14-2, Ch15

    On it's second trip to Atlantis, the Odyssey ends up triggering a station sending a signal to it in the Asgard language. Major Lorne is sent with a team aboard the Odyssey to investigate.

    7x01 "The Road" Ch1,Ch2,Ch3, Ch4-1, Ch4-2, Ch5-1, Ch5-2

    Business in the city is picking up, with the newest arrival bringing a renewed effort in the ongoing fight against the Wraith.

    7x02 "The Road, Part II" Ch1, Ch2, Ch3

    A Coalition summit is taking place, and Teyla pushes for a new solution to the refugee crisis.
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    Cool, I am looking forward to it.

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    More than that, I also look to input from others when I throw up a concept.

    Why would a station set up by Janus be sending a message in the Asgard language, and why now?

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    hurry up and post ep! your killing me here
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    Maybe cause there is something is the Asgard computer core that triggered it.

    Janus was a timetraveling alot, so he would know about them giving us the computer core, so when the Odyssey comes within a certain distance of the station is started broadcasting the signal.

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    We need the episode!!!

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    hurry ! im diengggggggggggggggggggg
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    Guys please claim down.

    Let him write the episode first.


    Ive been waiting more than you guys have.

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    Yes, you have...

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    Let us begin.

    I will write this out in chapters, rather than whole stories at once, to give me more breathing room. Now I shall say that my stories will be rather intense at times, as I have intended them to be for some parts.

    Spoiler:
    6x20 "Komaris" - (Updated version)

    We begin 10,000 years ago, about eight months after the Lantean exodus. A cloaked gateship is witnessing a hive-ship attacking an alien ship looking somewhat familiar. From the cockpit, we see Janus and two other Atlanteans monitoring the battle. The systems aboard this jumper are rather different, running a distinct shade of black, green, and orange.

    "I want to help them.", said one Atlantean.

    "Move us closer, Janus", said a voice from the back. Janus looked to the other two Atlanteans. The voice from the back spoke again. "You will know why, and who they actually are."

    We see the ship move closer, as the hive ship continues to fire at the ship, with the other ship firing back, It's lateral cannons cease firing, leaving only the forward weapons still operational. The shields on the ship are weakening. As Janus' ship comes across the alien ship, he comes to astonishment at the identity of the other beings, the Asgard!

    "The Asgard! Long lost allies of our kind." said Janus.

    "How are they in this galaxy? Have they expanded their empire outward from Ida?"

    "They're not here to wage war against the Wraith. They are here to save themselves from eventual extinction. Most of their kind will be gone in 10,000 years."

    "Another premonition, Telnoris?"

    The man from the back steps forward. He appears to be an Ancient as well, but his clothing is radically different.

    "Yet, right am I." His cadence shifts, and his gaze appears piercing unlike anything before. He seemed so calm, yet in a way far more frightening than a Wraith could ever be.

    Aboard the Asgard ship, alarms are going off aboard the ship. The Asgard on the main bridge is monitoring weapons control as another messages him from the engineering section.

    "I am unable to restore hyperdrive function. We must retreat."

    "Agreed. Our main engines are of no use as well. I am readying a transport. Four Asgard enter a small transport ship and ready the systems.

    "The neutrino shockwave should keep their sensor systems from detecting our hyperspace window. Proceed to the coordinates."

    As the Asgard ship explodes, at the same moment, the small transport makes a hyperspace jump. From the gateship, Janus and the others witness with awe, as Telnoris shows only a simple expression of conclusion.

    "They will survive. More than you know."

    "Janus, we agreed to join forces because we had the same goals, including our distaste of Moros' leading our once great civilization to ruin. You know you should have supported my position for leadership of our main fleets, rather than letting the rest of the council force doctrine on how to fight. I am having these strange feelings about Telnoris." He gestures to Telnoris.

    "And if I were you I would, expecially when that one is further away yet closer to your kind than you could imagine."

    "You are speaking to us freely, so are you not ascended?"

    Telnoris hands Janus a data crystal.

    "This will be all you need to know."

    "Thank you."

    Telnoris voice shifts slightly, becoming resonant. "You know why you lost. You could have purged them if you had cut your losses and stopped playing with creation. You wanted to care about the native born on the worlds you experimented with. I don't condemn you for the feeling, but you will be judged over and over through your "children". Decadence was our apocalypse, as it yours now. You can only hope that you can preserve the distant futures of your "daughters" and "sons", for it is MY son that will judge all Lanteans. Shall you still reject one over another? Faith, as from the Ori? Scientific embracement as of the Alterans? You did ascend over time. When one returns to its counterpart in desperation, it is out of fear or embracement of virtue? Those of you ascended to flee the Wraith, did not only for spiritual completion, but out of fear. To once reject the fanaticism as you righteously did so, did you reject more than you thought? I reject neither, nor do I force conformity, for it is your own paths you muct choose."

    The third Ancient finally asks. "Who are you? I demand truth!"

    Telnoris replies, looking directly at him, eye to eye. "The young have much to learn from Lemuria."

    Janus spoke again. "We know of no such place."

    Telnoris raised out his arms. "Then I cannot help you further."

    No flash of light. No sound. He is simply gone.

    --End of Chapter 1

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    This is looking real good, its great as your older stories.



    And damm you still so good at this writing stuff.

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    That was great!!!

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    9thDoctorD.gif Fantastic!

    "There are two novels that can change a bookish fourteen-year old's life: The Lord of the Rings and Atlas Shrugged. One is a childish fantasy that often engenders a lifelong obsession with its unbelievable heroes, leading to an emotionally stunted, socially crippled adulthood, unable to deal with the real world. The other, of course, involves orcs."

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    That- is what a real Ancient should sound like.

    Oh, and here he is:
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    HE looks like an ancient...

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    Very nice. Great to hear the feedback.

    Let's continue with some preliminary backstory and follow-up.

    Spoiler:
    --Chapter 2

    The Hammond and the Odyssey are transporting industrial equipment to Atlantis. The Odyssey is making her second trip to Atlantis in nearly four years. While in the void between the two galaxies, a strange sequence triggers the Asgard core on the Odyssey, displaying a rather odd message in both the Ancient and Asgard languages. The Apollo does not recieve the message, since the Asgard upgrades are primarily the weapon systems, rather than a complete full-blown Asgard core, exclusive only to the Odyssey. With the Daedalus under repairs at Atlantis, she was unable to make a long-distance trip for now, and the Apollo, Sun Tzu, and Wellington are assigned to home-defense. The objectives are to set up a defensive minefield, and place a network of small, mobile satellites capable of working together with the 304s and jumper fleet. All put together would compose the city's defense.

    Over the past year, with Atlantis' return to Pegasus, Ford's miraculous return and ingenious recovery method proposed by Beckett, the city has had quite the share of surprises. The Atlantis team locates a Satedan company on a harsh planet, and Ronon pushes for them to move into the city. Ford and his gang seizing a Wraith cruiser and fighting the Wraith like cowboys, until they end up in a no-win situation, needing help from the Daedalus.

    Teyla's family obligations have forced her to redirect her priorities, however, she now stands as an ambassadorial figure for Atlantis and the various human settlements, particularly with the Coalition alongside Woolsey. The Genii have become more isolated, feeling threatened by Atlantis' influence in the Coalition, along with their sheer military capability. Things were smoothed over a bit, when Kolya resurfaced and attempted the coup he intended originally, but was defeated by Ladon with the help of Sheppard's team. He was imprisoned in an off-world facility under Coalition authority.

    The infighting with the Wraith has reached a turning point. Several of the weaker hives have joined together and have begun to reassert themselves against the alliance "controlled" by Teyla, via Todd. Todd came to Atlantis again and offered an opportunity to improve on Keller's treatment to enable Wraith to feed off the same sustenance as humans. Some significant gains are apparent since some food is sucessfully digested by some Wraith.

    As of more recent months, it has become wide knowledge amongst all Wraith hives of the existence of Atlantis' location. The hives are culling worlds at a faster pace, and now Atlantis is attempting to evacuate some refugees to Atlantis, then on to Midway 2, and then to the Milky Way.

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    Ford is in the infirmary getting a scan from Beckett. He still has a slight scar, though far less visible as before. Sheppard comes in asking how he's doing. He tells him he's feeling 100% again. Sheppard asks him about his friends.

    "They still need more time. We could last up to 2 months on the new formula, but you've had my records from Day One."

    "They'll make it."

    "Sooner or later."

    "I have a idea on getting you back on active duty, if you want it."

    Ford looks up. "Seriously?"

    "Teyla's the de facto ambassador for Atlantis now, so I'm short a team member. You've got more combat experience than even Ronon now."

    "I'd like to believe that."

    "See? I asked General O'Neill to talk to the I.O.A. I could get someone else from Lorne's detail to be put on my team, but I'd rather have you."

    "I'll do it. If the I.O.A.'s willing to go with it."

    "That's the spirit."

    Outward in the intergalactic void, the Odyssey and Hammond are communicating via subspace. Carter thinks this may be worth investigating. The Odyssey commander suggests that they may be able to use the Asgard core to triangulate the source of the signal. Carter theorizes that the reason why the Odyssey is receiving the signal, and no other 304 has, is because though the 304s have all been upgraded with Asgard weapons and additional control systems, but it is the Odyssey that has the actual Asgard core and thus is unique amongst the 304s. It may be the second trip the Odyssey has made toward Pegasus, but the first now carrying the Asgard core. Carter wants to come aboard and take the Odyssey towards the origin of the signal. The Odyssey commander says that they are just four hours from reaching Midway 2. From there, they would contact Atlantis and the SGC to figure out what to do.

    --End Of Chapter 2.

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    Nice, I look forward to reading the rest.

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    Nice start I cannot wait to read more.

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    Looking good!

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    When's the next one

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