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    Okay, going to need another Ancient name. This one will apply to one of Janus' associates.

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    I will try and think of one

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    All readers: What do you think is going to happen at this point?

    Janus is going to Atlantis! What do you think will occur? Speculate all you can at this point.

    Post your responses here.


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    Quote Originally Posted by ussrelativity View Post
    All readers: What do you think is going to happen at this point?

    Janus is going to Atlantis! What do you think will occur? Speculate all you can at this point.

    Post your responses here.


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    I think He will show them where Atlantis can make the ZPMs and give them enough help to get started. Then the Wraith will come.

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    Well, the next installment should be up soon. Likely by tonight.

    Janus and Kelzio do make it to Atlantis, and things really floor some people.
    A few odd questions do begin to emerge regarding Janus, Kelzio, and the others and what is really going on.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ussrelativity View Post
    Well, the next installment should be up soon. Likely by tonight.

    Janus and Kelzio do make it to Atlantis, and things really floor some people.
    A few odd questions do begin to emerge regarding Janus, Kelzio, and the others and what is really going on.
    ok cool

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    All right! I can keep up my writing!

    Here is another installment. I hope you all enjoy reading as much as I have writing this so far.

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    “You want to go to Atlantis?!” said the Colonel.

    “I will need to hear this directly from the words of John Sheppard. Why you are static in eliminating the Wraith permanently. You have become capable of securing total victory several times, only to fail.”

    “Our people were captured once by a coalition of human worlds, and put on a mock trial for their actions in Pegasus.” The Colonel said, defensively.

    “We know of this as well. And what have you done since then?” Kelzio inquired.

    The Colonel couldn’t think of a response.

    “We know what has occurred since then. However, I wish to hear this from the mouth of John Sheppard.”

    Outside of the Odyssey, a metal ring appears, the size of a Stargate, but it has no chevrons.

    “We have created a gateway to allow you to send a gateship through to Atlantis. I and Kelzio will go there and confront your leaders there.”

    “Confront? Are you threatening our people?” inquired the Colonel.

    “No, not at all. We simply want to hear it in their own words why they are remaining static. Why you have not established self-sufficiency for the city of Atlantis as it was meant to be.”

    “I want to send some of my people back as well.” The Colonel said.

    “That is your right as commander of your crew.” Janus replied.

    The gateship leaves the 302 bay on the Odyssey and heads for the gate. The gate cannot be seen well, due to their being complete darkness around them and the only light coming from the Odyssey, the gateship, and the gate markers ahead.

    Inside the gateship, are three Odyssey personnel, plus Janus and Kelzio.

    “How do I dial Atlantis from here?” said one crewman.

    “That will be my doing.” Janus said as he raised his hand forward.

    The stargate automatically activated, but instead of a “kawoosh”, it was similar to the effect from an auto-dialer used by the Asgard and Nox.

    “Why are there no chevrons on the gate?” asked another crewman.

    “We have no need for them.” said Kelzio.

    The jumper heads towards the gate.

    “Wait! The gate shield is probably still up.”

    “That is no problem for us.”

    Back in Atlantis, the gate shield is up and the people in the control room are working at their stations.

    “Incoming wormhole.” Chuck stated.

    Woolsey steps forward. “The next team isn’t due back until tomorrow.”

    The gate shield shuts down.

    “Why is the gate shield down? Get it back up, immediately!”

    The remaining staff clear the gate’s immediate area. A second later, a jumper comes through. The gate shuts off immediately.

    “A puddle jumper? None of our off-world teams left with a jumper. Security teams, secure that jumper. Find out who that is!”

    The jumper door lowers as several Atlantis security personnel have their weapons drawn. Janus steps forward.

    “Those won’t be needed.” Janus said.

    Woolsey and Chuck are in shock when Janus steps out from the back of the jumper. Some of the other technicians stand up from their tasks to simply look at Janus and Kelzio.

    Janus walks forward, up the steps and locks sight directly on Woolsey.

    “I am Janus.”

    There is complete silence in the control room.

    McKay is seen exiting a transporter carrying a laptop computer in a shoulder bag, and pulling behind him a piece of his equipment, including a ZPM adapter. He is moving as quickly as he can towards the control room.

    “Where is he?! Where is he?!” McKay could be heard by half the room as he ran up.

    “Rodney, calm down.” Sheppard said as he joined him, carrying both a P90 and an ARG.

    “What’s with the ARG?” Rodney asked Sheppard.

    “He believes we may be Asuran.” Kelzio replied.

    Sheppard turned and looked at Kelzio.

    “What if we were?” Kelzio asked, looking eye to eye with Sheppard. “What would you try and do?”

    Sheppard looked defensive at Kelzio’s statement.

    Woolsey stepped forward to show more assertiveness.

    “I am Richard Woolsey, the commander of our expedition. What I would like to know is how you breached our gate shield and simply, who you are.”

    Janus turned to Woolsey again.

    “I already told you who we are. What I want to know is why you have been repeating the same mistakes we have made before. You have operated yourselves, trying to be like we once were. We are here to tell you to stop trying to emulate the Lanteans, and in essence, the Alterra.”

    Woolsey is puzzled at Janus’ words.

    Sometime later, Woolsey, Sheppard, the McKays, Dr. Zelenka, Teyla and Ronon are in the conference room, with Janus and Kelzio.

    “Since you arrived here from Earth six years ago, the Wraith have lost 31 of their hive ships. Their main fighting capacity has been nearly cut in half. Yet, they have lost no more in the past year and a half. And now they are headed for Atlantis again in force. You have had numerous opportunities to eliminate the Wraith that we did not use and yet here you all are just trying to barricade yourself against them. We did the same thing and we tried to fight them. We did not have the abilities of our ancestors, but even if we did, our council was so arrogant and weak-willed.”

    Sheppard spoke up. “Yeah, I get where you’re going with this. You don’t want us to fight with one arm tied behind our back.”

    “That is not what we are entirely referring to.” Kelzio, to no one’s notice but Janus and Sheppard spoke to Sheppard through his mind.

    “I want to talk to you alone afterwards. Don’t make any sudden moves.”

    Sheppard looked around with his eyes slightly as Woolsey talks to Janus.

    “Yes, you can here me. We need to talk about that Wraith you continue to deal with. You know what he has gained from your kind and what you have paid with in the process. You’ve got to put an end to it! You know I speak truth as does Janus.”

    “I am in agreement with Kelzio.” Janus said to Sheppard.

    Sheppard couldn’t believe it that Janus was addressing Woolsey and the others through his words, but able to speak directly to him through his mind on something else entirely and with complete accuracy to his words. Something felt really off about Janus and Kelzio.

    His train of thought was interrupted when Rodney McKay spoke up.

    “Yeah, we’ve been running the city on only one, so we can only operate so many systems at once.”

    He could see the look that Zelenka was giving him out of the corner of his eye.

    “Yeah, I know my experiments are the greatest power draw, which is why I would like to be able to….”

    “Be able to have the endorsement of our resident Ancients now—no offense to you.” Zelenka gestured towards Janus.

    “Anyway, at one point after we were able to have three Zed P.M.s in the city after we brought it back to Pegasus, and so we sent one back to Earth for use in the SGC until we can one day reverse engineer our own version of a chair-type interface so that we can use the Antarctic defense outpost again. I mean—right now, we’ve got to keep at least two ships for effective defense. That and the 302 squads we’ve got in various spots. What I’m trying to say here is that we could really use a few more Zed P.M.s both here and on our ships. If there is a way we could finally get to making them, we could send some 304s out and start knocking out the hive ships before they can even get here.”

    “You already have the means to engage the Wraith directly. You already proved that when you destroyed seven of the Asurans battleships.” Janus said.

    McKay tried to explain their actions again.

    “Well, the Wraith don’t operate like the Replicators so we’re kind of just—“

    Kelzio interrupted. “You already have the means to locate Wraith ships. And theirs are not as resilient as Asuran ships, so you have a sharp advantage now that you won’t exploit.”

    “I would strongly caution you to take the fight back to them before they are able to start sending more new ships towards this city. Your ships are powerful, and much faster than your Wraith opponents. You must strike them first and maintain your momentum against them.” Janus stated.

    “Doctor McKay, I am willing to assist you today in your laboratories and address a few issues that you are facing.” Janus added. McKay was very happy with that statement.

    “Colonel Sheppard, I would like to address yourself, Ronon, and your Lieutenant Ford.” Kelzio stated.

    “I still have questions that we need to resolve with you.” Woolsey stated.

    “You will not have to concern yourself with the two of us trying to commandeer this city as Helia did. She was misguided, arrogant, even foolish.”

    “I wonder what she thought of herself after the Asuran commander killed her and the rest of her crew. I believe Telnoris’ son would have been the one to come to her and show her and all of them for what they became. Komaris is rather odd even for pre-historic beings.”

    (Kelzio is communicating with Janus through their minds to the unknowing of the Atlantis team as they get up.)

    “Something your saying that I can’t hear? Hello? This thing on?” Sheppard said out loud in his thoughts hoping that Kelzio and Janus would hear him.

    “We can hear you still, but we choose to respect your privacy, Colonel.” Kelzio stated.

    “Nice.” Sheppard thought.

    The rest of them all exit the conference room. Janus joins Rodney and Zelenka towards his lab, and Kelzio leads Sheppard, Ronon, Teyla, and Ford towards the hologram room.

    --End of Chapter 9


    Now let's hear feedback and speculations so far.

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    That is very good. I love it so far.

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    Glad you like it.

    Now that I've gotten back to Atlantis for a little while, I can really get the character movements better and more fluid.

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    I cant wait.

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    Just made an update to the first post, with individual links to go directly to the chapters of the first episode. It still isn't complete yet, but will be eventually.

    http://forum.gateworld.net/showthread.php?t=67317

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    Great episodes! Everything is just great!

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    Great chapter, is there going to be a update soon?
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    The next installment should be up within a day.

    Great to have more responses here.

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    well i did read this one before aer'ki one and liked it, then it stopped then I found aer'ki one.
    Cannot wait until next chapter
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    Well, here we go. The next installment is here.

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    As Janus, McKay, and Zelenka enter the lab, McKay goes right to work, giving a “tour” of his lab and experiments.

    “Okay, let’s begin the fun. Here, Janus, is my adapter I designed for studying and operating a Zero Point Module. I first built one about six years ago so I could make a proper interface to allow us to dial Atlantis the first time. It was already nearly depleted so we only got one use from it there.”

    McKay leads Janus through his lab and shows him some other projects he worked on. Zelenka tries to interrupt McKay but is not very successful. As far as McKay is concerned there’s no one else there but himself and his Ancient counterpart until Zelenka raises his voice.

    “Okay, he understands it! What we really need here is more Z.P.M.s in the city. Every time we finally get one or more, they end up being redistributed, and I’d really like to be able to manufacture them ourselves so we don’t handicap the city anymore.”

    He looks at McKay.

    “Is it really that hard for me to say something over you? Everytime I just….”

    (He mutters to himself in Czech.)

    “I know. I know. We really desperately need more Zed.P.M.s, especially now. All the Wraith know where we are now and we’ve taken in several thousand people into the city, and well, we really can’t hold anymore and do our work on just one Zed.P.M. We need more and we have to be able to make them ourselves. We know where one may be, but the people there just wanted us to find it for them to hide again. We got nothing out of it.”

    Zelenka adds to the conversation.

    “The last time the Ancients were here in the city was when we rescued about a hundred of them in the middle of the galactic void between our galaxies. You see, there was this ship, the Tria, and the captain’s first order was to expel us from the city. Sometime later, the Replicators attacked and they—“

    “The Asurans.” Janus firmly stated towards McKay and Zelenka.

    “Well, we call them Replicators since that’s what they are in essence.”

    “I don’t operate with such generic references. Just because they aren’t organic doesn’t mean that they are of a lesser value than yourself. You continue to conduct your observations only towards a definition of organics being the only favorable life in the universe. Now, you wish to be able to restore the full power of this city on a permanent basis, don’t you?”

    “Well, yeah, that’s why we came to my lab right?” McKay said, with a slight grin.

    “If I help you manufacture new power modules, what will you do with them?” Janus asked.

    “Well, first things first, we get a full three Zed.P.M. complement in the city, and then make one to give to the Daedalus to help in our fight against the Wraith.”

    “That is something that you should talk to Kelzio about. Kelzio was a military commander and a member of the Lantean council. He resigned out of opposition to the bombardment of Asuras. He later disappeared altogether, leading the rest of us to believe he was killed in battle with the Wraith. Some time later, he appeared to me, and helped me hide my projects from the rest of the Lantean council.”

    In the hologram room, Kelzio enters, followed by Sheppard, Ford, Ronon, and Teyla.

    While the four were walking towards the hologram room, Kelzio had a look on unimpression on his face. He knew why Teyla was following them along as well, but he wanted to hear it of her own words.

    “Why are you here as well, Athosian?” Kelzio inquired.

    Teyla was offended by Kelzio’s question. Sheppard didn’t like that too well either, Ronon also. Ford kept a straight face, though for different reasons. He kept wondering if Kelzio and Janus knew. And he meant really knew. About how he really got off that hive four and a half years earlier.

    ”I am here because I am part of Colonel Sheppard’s team. I have a right to be here.”

    “I explicitly asked for Colonel Sheppard, the Satedan Ronon Dex, and Aiden Ford. I did not ask you to accompany us.”

    Sheppard spoke up.

    “Now hold on, Teyla’s got every right to be here. You just got here. I’m not letting the two of you order us around. We’ve already been down that road.”

    “Helia got what she has earned from her death. As may the rest of you. The Athosian is an impairment, a problem, and it must be corrected.”

    “What are you saying?” Teyla said, angry and defensive.

    “What I am stating is that there is something very wrong with you. You have within you something that is not natural. Your enemies attempted to add a form of their essence to a species that was never meant to have this. Much as their own origin is a repetition of the self-righteous doctrine of image on behalf of the Lanteans, and this includes the Alterra. Your being will be purged of it, and you all may improve your survival.”

    “Does this have something to do with Teyla being part-Wraith?” Ford asked.

    “Oh yes, and that will be dealt with soon.” Kelzio replied.

    “Who is this being?” Teyla thought to herself. “Why does he have such hostility to me?”

    As Ronon and Kelzio conversed, Kelzio said this to Teyla as well. “You were never meant to be like you are. The same is said of your mate and child.”

    Teyla couldn’t understand how Kelzio was speaking to her, while he was speaking towards Ronon out loud on something else.

    The lights dim in the room, and the doors shut. A hologram of Wraith ships appears.

    “The main key to the Wraith is their fleets and technology. You see the heart of a Wraith force, the hive ship. Within it can dwell thousands of the creatures, and thousands more beings like yourself can be kept in storage for the Wraith to consume again and again. Should this species conquer you, Avalon will fall soon thereafter. The Wraith will head outward and consume your galaxy, which is several times the size of this one, and has many, many times the amount of people they can consume. They will become a far greater threat not only to you, but to the universe.”

    As Kelzio speaks, a galactic map is displayed and it moves out to show the Milky Way as well as several other galaxies. Several indicators are shown moving toward the Milky Way.

    “I will tell you this. The Wraith are in the process of regathering their hives and realigning their allegiances. They are also working on making improvements to their ships using information taken from your computer systems and databases, as well as additional technology taken from leftover Asuran and Lantean installations. You have experienced some degree of this a year ago.”

    “You mean that Superhive we barely stopped?” Sheppard asked.

    “Yes. The Wraith are trying to reinforce their existing ships with some technological improvements that they have gained from both you and the Asurans. You had an immense advantage with your intergalactic ships and their Asgard weaponry. You should have been eliminating the Wraith hive ships long ago, and they would have been nearly eliminated by now. There are some that ask themselves why you refrain from it. Since you refuse to fight them with your full force, they will do it themselves.”

    Kelzio spoke to Ford secretly as he spoke to the whole group.

    “You know exactly who I am referring to, Lieutenant.” Kelzio said. The feeling was just creepy to Ford. It was obvious that Kelzio knew how Ford actually escaped the hive.

    Kelzio knew about the Starfighter League. Ford on the inside was a bit tenser at that moment.

    “I won’t tell them, Lieutenant. You have my promise.”

    “You’re talking about the Pegasus Asgard?” Sheppard asked Kelzio.

    “Yes.” Kelzio stated, though he was actually admitting a half-truth. There was no way that knowledge of the existence of the Starfighter League would end up in Atlantis’ hands soon.

    Ford could feel that too many things were hitting him in the face too quickly. Sure, only Kelzio and Janus, and likely the other Ancients they were with knew about them, but as long as Atlantis was unaware of them could he be okay with. Only he and the rest of his people that he fought with when he was away from Atlantis knew about them.

    Kelzio continued to explain the operations of the Wraith.

    “Didn’t you say that when you left Pegasus the first time, there were a lot more than 70 hives?”

    “Yes. There were 362 hive ships, 1,181 cruisers, as well as numerous scout ships, supply ships, and their installations.”

    “Over three hundred?!” Teyla said, shocked.

    “Yes, over three hundred of the massive ships at the very end. After the Lantean exodus, the Wraith sent a number of ships out and began searching for any remaining advanced civilizations. Some were able to escape them. Five years later, the Wraith were under attack again. They immediately believed that the Lanteans returned in greater force, so they began reorganizing their various alliances of hives. They soon realized that the forces they were fighting were not Lantean, or even “alive” in that matter.”

    “You mean the Replicators.” Sheppard said.

    “The Asurans.” Kelzio stated. “I must be clear on that.”

    “Fair enough.” Sheppard replied.

    The hologram changes again, showing Asuras, with a considerable amount of rendered ships around the planet. The rendered ships up close appeared to be Lantean in design.

    The hologram changes to show a number of Asuran ships engaged in battle with a large Wraith fleet. The Asuran ships appear to be fighting quite well against the Wraith, destroying three hive ships and shredding a number of cruisers rather quickly.

    “Is this real?” Ronon wondered.

    “This occurred five years after the Lantean exodus. The Asurans attacked the Wraith in full force. The Wraith were taking such severe casualties, that partway through the conflict, their cloning facility went offline.

    “They ended up depleting their ZPMs, didn’t they?” Sheppard said.

    “Yes, and without their cloning facility, they could no longer fully crew their ships, and ground battles ended much quicker. Even though the Wraith could build new ships, the Asurans could build them much, much faster, and keep using their greater firepower to win decisive victories. Even though the Wraith were able to destroy many of their ships as well, the Asurans could keep rebuilding them at a greater rate. This is the first time the Wraith knew real fear of an enemy. Even when Janus’ Subspace Disruptor array was online, the Wraith never took these kinds of losses.”

    “Yeah, and then they stopped attacking the Wraith.” Sheppard pointed out.

    “The Wraith were eventually able to disable the attack directives in the Asurans, and then they simply returned to Asuras. Unfortunately for them, the damage was done.”


    Yeah, there's a second post to this one.

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    Here's the second part. I ended up with over 2500 words on the last one. Hope the wait was worth it. Most of it was written in the last two days.

    EDIT: First post updated with direct links.

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    A flashback occurs.

    “After the rest of the Asurans disengaged from their fight with the Wraith, the Wraith began to reassert their control over the worlds in Pegasus. Most of the human civilizations were decimated during the mass cullings. There was a period when there was relative calm. The Wraith went into hibernation to conserve themselves and restore some of their fleet over time. Their plan was to leave enough humans around to rebuild their populations over generations, and when there would be enough, the Wraith would arise to descend upon them again and again. This would repeat itself over and over for millennia, as you already know.”

    A Wraith hive lies on a planet’s surface, no activity occurring around it. Along the halls of the hive, Wraith warriors lie in stasis. Other hives are shown, one on another planet, then another. On one, a Keeper walks the halls of one hive.

    “Though the Wraith’s ‘food supply’ as they would call you is insufficient for them, they refuse to go into their stasis out of defense of their kind.”

    Ronon speaks up again. “They know we’d run over all of them in no time.”

    “Very correct.”

    The flashback ends.

    “The Wraith know they cannot go back into mass stasis until they are confident that their hives will not be harmed.” Kelzio stated.

    “No way that’s going to happen.” Ronon said.

    “I still wish to know why you are hostile to me.” Teyla said.

    “It is what you are that endangers your friends and loved ones. You carry the traits of a Wraith.” Kelzio stated.

    “Yeah, it was kind of weird when we first found out, but I got past that, and her abilities saved my neck a few times.” Sheppard told Kelzio.

    “Her ‘gift’ as she and other Athosians call it is a problem and will become a severe problem for you in the future. The Wraith can easily manipulate her. Elimination of this trait is in your best interest. This trait is distinctly Wraith and must be eliminated.” Kelzio stated, looking directly at Teyla.

    “Are you saying that my Wraith DNA should be destroyed?”

    ”I can eliminate it.”

    Teyla thinks for a moment.

    “Perhaps, if all the Wraith were defeated, but my people rely on me and others with this ability.” Teyla said. “I cannot give this up. I have accepted this as a part of me.”

    “Your choice.” Kelzio said.

    “Okay, now that that’s out of the way, are you going to show us how to defeat the Wraith?” Sheppard said.

    “McKay’s probably asking about ZPMs.” said Ford.

    “You do know that such technology in the wrong hands can create severe problems, as evidenced by the altered Wraith ship. Even with Atlantis at full power, it was outgunned by the Wraith ship.” Kelzio explained.

    “Yeah, we kept throwing everything we had at it, didn’t slow it down.”

    “From what I’ve been told, your ship, the Daedalus just stood there and took a full barrage from the hive during its first engagement. As for Atlantis, the city should have been able to destroy the single hive.”

    “You weren’t there. You don’t know what it was like fighting that thing.” Sheppard said.

    “Yes, I do. I know that your fighting efficiency was minimal. You should have been using the city’s additional defensive systems more appropriately. You were well within range of the hive to use more than just the ‘drone’ weapons, as you call them.”

    Sheppard looked at Kelzio with confusion.

    “You have to strike these beings with your ultimate force. They will go down if you do it right. Their technology is organically based. That in itself is their ultimate weakness.”

    The whole tone changed. Sheppard found himself flashing back to when he was on the Aurora with McKay when they learned about a weakness in Wraith technology that would have turned the tide completely in favor of the Lanteans.

    “The weakness in Wraith technology that was given to the captain of the Aurora, it was you.”

    Kelzio moved his hand toward Sheppard, pointing two of his forefingers out, gesturing that he was correct.


    --End Of Chapter 10

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    It is very great!!!

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    That was great but i now want more.
    If The Simpsons ever get on Stargate

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    I'm working on the next installment.

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