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    Here, I just wrote this today. The next part of my story.


    Part three of chapter two.
    “Mistress, we have multiple contacts closing fast on our location. They are not transmitting any IDF signals, however sensors are detecting energy spikes from each vessel as well as active sensor scans directed at this base. The vessels are approaching in pincer formation.” The T.O reported to Kokiara.

    “Then regulations direct us to consider them hostile and begin firing as soon as they are in range. Arm all weapons systems. Alert headquarters to this attack also inform any nearby vessels as to the situation. “ Kokiara commanded.

    The com officer typed at his consol for a few seconds. “Mistress, I am unable to transmit a strong enough signal to reach headquarters, the enemy appears to have brought along a group of subspace E.W vessels. The combined power of their interference is too much for our f.t.l transmitters. I shall attempt to break through the interference mistress. “ the com officer said as he continued working fervently.

    “Work quickly. Deploy half of the stealth bomber drones to take out the E.W vessels. With all the interference those ships are emitting our stealth drones will be even more difficult to detect using subspace sensors. Let us use their tactics to our advantage.“ Kokiara ordered.

    “Mistress, I believe a group from the aft side of the pincer has broken off from the main group, their trajectory shows them to be on an intercept course for Strom Runner. There are approximately 4 vessels. If I had to guess as to what class, I would say class 2 Raptors. “the T.O reported.

    “Acknowledged, dispatch 2 destroyers to take care of them.” Kokiara told him. Something troubled her, this attack style was familiar. A surprise attack with a flamboyant main assault, but along with it a secondary goal. Throw in a long range com blackout. She had seen it before.

    “They will be within weapons range in under a minute.” The T.O stated.

    Kokiara knew that the attackers must be Kaizokou, pirates, robbers and thieves. They must be after the new drive developed for use on the Storm Runner. Stealing what they could not devise themselves. In this case , a way out of the Houjin navies tightening grasp. An ancient warrior poem came to her mind.

    Why can’t they seem to get it?
    The same thing that I learned?
    That anything you accomplish
    Must be fought for and earned?


    Part four chapter two.
    Hioko sabashi watched the target outpost eight seem to become larger on the holographic view screen. Outpost eight had been built into a large asteroid which was almost solid nickel-iron. The base was reinforced with nano armor and force fields. Outpost eight was a solid fortress , his fleet would take devastating losses before breaking it, especially with his daughter commanding the defense out outpost eight. Fortunately, that was not the goal of this attack.

    The fleet knew that once the splinter group had acquired Storm Runner it was all ships fall back. Just a matter of acquiring that vessels technology now and then he and the other Kaizoku leaders could be safe from the Houjin navy.




    Gindoaw was feeling perturbed. Not only had he been called back because of upper echelon paranoia, but now no one was telling him anything. He could not get a clear signal through to outpost 8 and his sensors were not giving him any useful data. He rubbed his temples, he was getting a migraine. He tried to contact outpost 8 again. “This is Karkari Gindoaw calling outpost 8 please respond. What is going on? Can you hear me? “he transmitted.

    The response was in the form of a peppering of rapid fire auto-cannon rounds across his hull.

    “Surrender your vessel and prepare to be boarded Gindoaw.” he heard over his short range com.

    “Repeat message, who is this?” Gindoaw transmitted back.

    “Shutdown you drives and prepare to be boarded you Bakayarou!” was the reply.

    “How about no? ” Gindoaw said in return as he raised shields, kicked his drives into overtime and began random evasive maneuvers.

    “This is your last warning you ketsunoana. “ the mysterious voice said over the com again.

    Gindoaw sped away as fast as his little ship could go, but his sensor readings showed whatever ships were pursuing him seemed to be keeping up with Storm Runner.

    Storm Runner shuddered, sensors registered hundreds of impacts from explosive auto-cannon rounds, his shields were being drained. Storm Runner only carried a few blaster lasers and an X-ray laser cannon for shooting down asteroids, these were obviously warships pursuing him, he was no match for them. Warning lights came on, signaling his shields were losing integrity. He saw only one way out. He flipped the f.t.l drive activation switches, power hummed through the ship. Here go’s nothing.

    On board the Dawnblade….

    “Kortari, sensor readings of the Storm Runner show a major power level increase.” Jilkar stated.

    “Is it a weapon?!” Kortari asked worriedly.

    “I do not believe so, it is a similar energy reading given off when we power our f.t.l system.” Jilkar responded.

    “No! No no no no….your not going to escape you little worm! Charge the towing field emitter! We have to try and stop him! “ Kortari leapt forward towards the helm consol threw the posted officer over his shoulder and punched in a direct intercept course. He was going to stop Gindoaw from escaping…he was not going to escape and ruin Kortaris mission! This was his mission! He deserved this glory and would not be denied it by a whelp like Gindoaw!

    Dawnblade came up very close to Strom Runner, auto-cannons blazing, subspace towing field generators powering up. Storm Runners f.t.l drive kicked in the exact same moment that the Dawnblades field generator activated.

    Both vessels disappeared in a blaze of light.
    Last edited by Gormagon; 24 April 2012, 11:10 AM.
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      Originally posted by thekillman View Post
      just watched Battleship. dang that's an awesome movie
      Do NOT say anything about it as I wantto see it, it is released in America in May, Harbin has yet to get it, I might go to Hawaii to see it for all I know.

      Now, on the subject of armor for soldiers on a case by case basis; Are we talking full on power suit or something more akin to the Marines in Halo series ?

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        Originally posted by Princess Awinita View Post

        Now, on the subject of armor for soldiers on a case by case basis; Are we talking full on power suit or something more akin to the Marines in Halo series ?
        I think a full power suit or Halo suit would be a waste of resources, cost to effectiveness ratio you know. Take the Hammer drones, one of my favorite examples, the whole lot cost a guestimated 4 billion U.S dollars. In combat they lasted about 15 minutes. Now, this is a sad fact, but how many human marines could you have trained and equipped for 4 billion dollars? Or cruise missiles and auto-cannons built? The cost for the effectiveness is just not there.

        Unless you pull a Batman, one (Or a small group.) of specialists in really expensive gear. "This baby will stop a knife." Lucious. "Then why dident the army want them?" Bruce. "The government did not think a soldiers life was worth 300k." Lucious. Imagine equipping your entire army with 300k worth in gear when a slightly higher cal. of bullet would still go through the armor.

        My guys use the armor they have because the Houjin have perfected nano engineering mass production for cheap, and the materials are cheap. Carbon, Graphite, Boron.
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          Now why am I thinking Servitors ? Basically braindead or freshly killed soldiers remade into machines set to follow a set of orders, be it pilot a ship, defend an area, or act as boarding party. Servitors can fight without remorse or care for personal injury, however they are unreliable due to the fact they sometimes they cannot decern friend from enemy.

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            Do NOT say anything about it as I wantto see it, it is released in America in May, Harbin has yet to get it, I might go to Hawaii to see it for all I know.
            all i'm gonna say is: it was definitely worth the 10 bucks.

            it does seem to get quite a few negative reviews. i really don't know why.


            I think a full power suit or Halo suit would be a waste of resources, cost to effectiveness ratio you know. Take the Hammer drones, one of my favorite examples, the whole lot cost a guestimated 4 billion U.S dollars. In combat they lasted about 15 minutes. Now, this is a sad fact, but how many human marines could you have trained and equipped for 4 billion dollars? Or cruise missiles and auto-cannons built? The cost for the effectiveness is just not there
            if they did the kind of damage Iron Man did, they'd be worth every penny. but sadly, those drone sucked.


            Power armor works. But there are conditions attached to it. If you fail to meet the conditions, it's a hump of lead on your wallet, army, strategy and well, basically everything.

            My guys use the armor they have because the Houjin have perfected nano engineering mass production for cheap, and the materials are cheap. Carbon, Graphite, Boron.
            like i said before, Nano covers such a wide spectrum, has so many applications, implications and results, that i could fill a fleet with it. i EXTREMELY doubt any race of any tech level currently in SG would've "Mastered" it.

            Basically braindead or freshly killed soldiers remade into machines
            i kind of doubt the effectiveness of this.

            Servitors can fight without remorse or care for personal injury, however they are unreliable due to the fact they sometimes they cannot decern friend from enemy.
            i think the fact that they're dead is much more of a problem than descerning friend from foe, which you could even do with a bunch of IFF chips.

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              if they did the kind of damage Iron Man did, they'd be worth every penny. but sadly, those drone sucked.
              Yes, cost to effectiveness ratio.

              like i said before, Nano covers such a wide spectrum, has so many applications, implications and results, that i could fill a fleet with it. i EXTREMELY doubt any race of any tech level currently in SG would've "Mastered" it.
              I used the wrong term, I should have said they have mastered the cost to effectiveness ratio for the most part. When they first started out a nano armor suit was way to costly to use widely. Manufacturing techniques improved, and now to the Houjin, the commonly used nano materials are like what steel is to the Tau'ri but way stronger. I would put Houjin nano-armor at around 300,000+ MPA. Since our existing graphene has 130,000 MPA. Carbon steel 1090 has an ultimate tensile strength of 841 MPA. This is guestimate work of course..

              Power armor works. But there are conditions attached to it. If you fail to meet the conditions, it's a hump of lead on your wallet, army, strategy and well, basically everything.
              And the melted brass taste of defeat in your throat.
              Last edited by Gormagon; 24 April 2012, 12:48 PM.
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                I used the wrong term,
                that's one of the problems/challenges that Nano brings with it.

                EDIT:

                I'm a big fan of Crysis, and love the nanotech in the game. But i think we need some experimentation before we use it en-masse.

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                  I'm a big fan of Crysis, and love the nanotech in the game. But i think we need some experimentation before we use it en-masse.
                  What do you mean? What kind of experimentation? I hope your not getting ready to cut my guys legs off nano engineering is one of their majors and I have put a lot of time into designing them around nano-materials and tech...

                  http://gwvf.wikia.com/wiki/The_tale_...i.#Chapter_two.

                  http://gwvf.wikia.com/wiki/The_tale_of_Gindoaw_Hiati.<That one does not work but the first one does, what is going on?
                  Last edited by Gormagon; 24 April 2012, 02:02 PM.
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                    A note:

                    i don't think there's such a thing as a subspace towing field. Events such as Lost Tribe show that any ship can be "towed" if it's in the hyperspace field projected. The same effect can likely be achieved by a plasma barrage and close proximity to the target.


                    I have put a lot of time into designing them around nano-materials and tech..
                    that's good. But i have looked up enough on Nano to know that's it's a wide field, and Nano material and Nano material are two very different things. Nano does not automatically mean everything is super-strong etc.

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                      I think your ignoring my link questions....
                      Last edited by Gormagon; 25 April 2012, 03:55 AM.
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                        Testing

                        Yea it works. you forgot to include the dot in the link. you named the page:

                        The tale of Gindoaw Hiati.
                        Notice the dot at the end.
                        (there's no need to dot page titles)

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                          So no period required in a page title?
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                            Another note:

                            like said, the subspace "barrier" is a bad idea. Actual, physical isolation would work just fine. if you want some "home territory", make it a small star cluster (check on the BSG "star map" for a good example of what i mean) about 1000 lightyears above the galactic disk, in a region of extremely low stellar density. Earth's neighbour is 4 LYs away, for the Houjin i'd say 400.

                            the Hyperdrive thing can be solved in a similar way: Whereas previously the Houjin could only operate intra-solar hyperdrives, finally they managed to pull together the kind of technology and funding needed for a new generation of hyperdrives.
                            to the Houjin, it's not just a drive: it's an entire package ranging from the newest conduits, to the newest reactors and the newest drives. putting together the efforts of a decade, they build a completely new ship capable of crossing the distance.

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                              That is essentially what I am working with right now, physical isolation. I adjusted the story to crossing the void quickly instead of facing a subspace barrier. Storm Runner is essentially a hyperdrive built around a power core and a life support module.
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                                Storm Runner is essentially a hyperdrive built around a power core and a life support module.
                                one last thing:

                                it feels very weird that you assign japanese names to the most trivial of things, but give normal names to things like ships.

                                That is essentially what I am working with right now, physical isolation.
                                great!

                                given their extensive use of fusion, fuel would actually be pretty hard to find in a massive void, so it would have to be the first ship designed for an actual, long journey.

                                Anyway, yes i think it would prompt the creation of much of a local economy so they don't have to ship everything across massive distances

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