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Old November 4th, 2009, 01:33 PM
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On the Legacy.
Ranger: He's lying. Open a com to G.T.
Lattimer: Yes sir.
Ranger: Hey, Gem.
G.T: What's up?
Ranger; Could you stay here for a while? I'm off to find Ras, whether he likes it or not.
G.T: Sure.
Ranger: Thanks.
The com cuts.
Ranger; take us to his last know position.
Lattimer; yes sir.
The Legacy goes to flash drive. We drop out over his ship.
Ranger: Hail the AI's.
Adams: Yes sir.
Ranger; Where is commander Rasunda?
AI: On the planet.
Ranger: Thank you. Lattimer, get us there.
Lattimer: Yes sir.
The Legacy cloaks and then jumps to hyperspace. We drop out over the planet.
Ranger: Beam me down.
Adams: yes sir.
I am beamed to the planet's surface. I hear very loud music playing.
Ranger; What are you doing? Tortureing beavers with sound?
I cloak and head out. I reach the beach and stare at Ras's crew just having a good time.
Ranger: This is about to end.
I walk to the center of the group, pull out my 9mm and fire one shot into the air. A bird falls to the ground. Every one stops what they were doing and look around. The music is turned off. I march up to Rasunda who is looking around and de-cloak in front of him. He almost punches me.
Ras: What? how did you..?
Ranger: Later! You lied! Your hyperdive barely has a scratch and you're throwing a party! This ends now! Lattimer, beam us up.
Lattimer: yes sir.
Everyone is beamed off the planet and onto the Legacy.
Ras: That's not fair! We were just starting to have a good time!
Ranger; I have a pool.
Ras raises an eyebrow.
Ras; Why did you come after us?
Ranger: I could tell you were lying, i didn't want to miss out on some beaver killing if that was what you were doing.
Ras just frowns.
Ranger; You didn't invite us to the party either.
Ras is starting to get annoyed.
Ranger: lattimer, beam me to the bridge and beam them into the cargo bay.
Lattimer; yes sir.
I am beamed to the bridge and they are beamed to the "cargo" bay. The "cargo" bay is actually where my pool is and it's huge. The loud music is turned back on and they start their party again. On the bridge. Every one is being bounced to the beat of the music. (the cargo bay isn't far from the bridge.)
Ranger; turn it down some Lattimer.
Lattimer: yes sir.
The music is turned down and the shaking stops. We return to our old location towing Ras's ship with us.

Note, I couldn't let you have all the fun Ras!
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Old November 4th, 2009, 01:41 PM
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Old November 4th, 2009, 02:44 PM
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NOTE;I got another idea. Ranger, you can still come.

*ranger beams down, but don't cloack. She sees me, in the middle of a conga lead*
Everyone;Caugis, caugis, caugis!(meeting)
*We make our way through several hundred meters*
Ranger;RASUNDA! What the hell are you doing?!
Oh! Ranger. Ehm, hi. I didn't expekt to se you here..
Ranger;I se that your hyperdrive is getting repaired. BY A CONGA LEAD!
Yeah, well my crew has been working hard, and all. And the Amateus needed a break. Plus, these conventions aren't that funny.
Ranger;I put my heart and sould into that meeting!
Well your welcome to stay. As is your crew. Just send the Legacy back on auto pilot.
Ranger;And what are we supposed to say?!
That some thing triggred the auto pilot and sent it away but you can come with us back on the Amateus.
Ranger;Now that's a plan!
*1 hour later. After the Legacy jumping, and Ranger and her crew getting ready for the party*
Don't you look beutiful!
Ranger;Thank you. And I've ordered my crew not to say "sir" and that stuff.
I did it when we got here.
*Some time later, we're on club Top Noch. Dancing, and drinking. The lights are blinking and every thing*
Cole;This is great! This is every thing you said the club was!
I know! And it looks the same way as it did the time we named it!
*The music is to loud, and we can no long speak to eachother*
*The day later, at 2PM*
*I'm on the beach. With a sun hat. Obviusli, I've fallen asleep there the night before*
Oh god. It's like deja vu.*I se that the crews are scattered over an area of the beach*
Ahaha, I se that I wasn't the only one.*A leuitenat come up to me*
Leuitenat Andersen;Sir, come over here, it's lunch. We're about a hundred that's goten up.
Ah, good not to be the only up. *I se my self in a mirror, and I notice some thing. I've been sun burned. And big time to. Some one also has tatued "commander PLAYER on my stumace*
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Old November 5th, 2009, 08:28 AM
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Earlier that night. I am standing on the beach away from the crowd obviously bored. Lattimer wanders up to me.
Lattimer: What's up?
Ranger: Not much.
Lattimer: Bored?
Ranger: Yeah.I'm thinking about calling Legacy back.
Lattimer: We don't have a radio.
Ranger: I um, adjusted a few things, i can call her back with my mind.
Lattimer: Sweet! We'll I'll see you later.
He walks off leaving me alone. A few minutes later Ras walks up to me carrying a drink.
Ras: Want some?
Ranger: If you know anything about me Ras, you know i don't drink and i don't cuss.
Ras: Right. Why aren't you back with the group.
Ranger: I don't feel good.
Ras: Are you okay?
Ranger: I don't know, it's just weird.
Ras: Last break coming back to haunt you?
I shake my head.
Ranger; Something else.
Several hours later. I am walking up the beach toward the group after taking a long walk. There are only lights in the distance. I suddenly drop to my knees, in a lot of pain.
Ranger: Oh i should have known! Legacy, i need you back here now!
Legacy: yes sir. should i use flash drive sir?
Ranger: yes just come!
Legacy: I cannot.
Ranger; Why?
Legacy: Beavers sir.
Ranger: Get done with them and get back.
Legacy: Yes sir.
Ranger: It's an old injury flair up, darn! I should have known when that beaver hit me! I..
I am interupted by a coughing fit.
Ranger: Wait! Legacy, contact the Trojan!
Legacy: yes sir, channel open sir.
Ranger: G.T?
Gem: Yeah, where are you?
Ranger; I'm not on the Legacy, i need your help.
Gem: With what?
Ranger: An old injury.
Gem: Is it....
Ranger: yes, i need you here now!
Gem; I'm coming, where are you?
I give the location of the planet, and the Trojan jumps to flash drive. They arrive a few seconds later. Lattimer comes runnning up to me.
Lattimer: There you are, we've... what's wrong?
Ranger: Long story, the Trojan is coming.
Lattimer: It's not...
Ranger: Yeah, it is.
Lattimer: Oh great!
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*The Trojan drops out of hyperspace as I have breakfust*
*A radio sparks to life*
Radio;This is the Trojan. We've heard that you've had a medical emergency.
What?Who?
Radio;Commander Ranger. And Rasunda, don't you know my voice? It's Gem.
Oh, haha. I'm sorry. But I'm..uh..I got a hang over from hell.
Gem;Oh. Would you like to stay?
Yes. I'll go to the Amateus. But I think that this hang over will last.*I beam up, and I'm the only one on the ship*
*I open a com to the Trojan*
Gem;Hi...RASUNDA! What the hell happened?!
Well, thank you Gem. And yes, that is several tatues that you se. And yeah, I know what I have in my gace to.
Gem;A mustach! Did they paint that on?! And what does it say on your face? Rasunda, the..
Yes, and you don't want to know what it says on the rest of me. I'lll just beam the crew up, but they won't be working, and lay in a course so that the convention can go on.
*We go to hyperspace and drops out 30 minutes later. Where C-Thor, And Dh sit and wait-*
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*The Trojan drops out of hyperspace as I have breakfust*
*A radio sparks to life*
Radio;This is the Trojan. We've heard that you've had a medical emergency.
What?Who?
Radio;Commander Ranger. And Rasunda, don't you know my voice? It's Gem.
Oh, haha. I'm sorry. But I'm..uh..I got a hang over from hell.
Gem;Oh. Would you like to stay?
Yes. I'll go to the Amateus. But I think that this hang over will last.*I beam up, and I'm the only one on the ship*
*I open a com to the Trojan*
Gem;Hi...RASUNDA! What the hell happened?!
Well, thank you Gem. And yes, that is several tatues that you se. And yeah, I know what I have in my gace to.
Gem;A mustach! Did they paint that on?! And what does it say on your face? Rasunda, the..
Yes, and you don't want to know what it says on the rest of me. I'lll just beam the crew up, but they won't be working, and lay in a course so that the convention can go on.
*We go to hyperspace and drops out 30 minutes later. Where C-Thor, And Dh sit and wait-*
NOTE: Ras me and DH are over Hellion with a fleet of 4 dozen HArrucian warships are battling the Hellion AI. we are still awaiting reiforcements of the Tau'rie armada if memory serves
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*The Amateus and the fleet is droping out of hyperspace. Cole and Gardner has returned, but also have a god damned hang over*
Open fire. Every avalible weapon.
Gardner;Fighters away! Weapons are firing, and shields has been brought online.
Good. Consentrate fire on the lead enemy ship. Shut down life suport on all decks. Exept for the bridge. Divert the power to shields and weapons.
*The Amateus's corridors goes black, and from the outside, the Amateus goes black*
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*in hyperspace to Hellion on my own*

dh; Send a massage to Rasunda. Rasunda, this is commander Heart. Inow youve lost ships, but its not my fault, and just htink of how many mor ei have lost than you. i am sorry, hellion was the most well defended in the galaxy, so we coudltn of done anyhtign else. but do not threaten me..or else. you must understand my position. As i speak i am oign to retake hellion. on my own.


Watts; message sent sir.
Dh; You now its not too late for you two to get out of here, theres a hellion pod waiting.
Watts; Thanks sir, but with all the crew gone i think youd need us.
MArks; Yeah, weve pulled you outta some pretty hefty situations before.
Dh; Darn good point. ok drop us out, shields up.
Watts; Weapons?
Dh; Nope.
*the hyperion drops out and is fired by 40 out of the 230 left from which the HSS SHIPS DESTROYED. the shields hold well against the unbeatable firepower of the enmy ships.*
Dh; Now then, time to get rid of these AI.
*i press a few buttons on my armchair, and the ships stop firing and all the AI's drop dead*
Watts; What was that?!
Dh; Seeing as i am an hellion, i was able to access their coding and literally delete them form existence. Now, get our people here, and make sure those warships are secured.
Watts; Ai sir.




See, it was on the previous page, the battle for hellion is over.



*over hellion where everything has been retored, more hSS ships have been made and being made, and are ALL now up to the quality of the AI Hellion warships.


***NOTE: FROM NOW ON THEY WILL BE KNOWN AS HWS, it stands for Hellion War Ships. very strong, the adriani and harrucian ships are both on par, as all the ships are the same level*


Dh; How many HWS did we salvage form the battle, and how many have we made and are in production?
Marks; We salvaged 120 sir, we have already produced 50, and a couple hundre dmore are in production in the hellion shipyards, so they will not take long, a few days at most.
Dh; Send a message to the Adriani fleet, we require theire presence for just 2 days until we have that couple of hundred in space battle ready.
Watts; The message has been sent commander....Uhh..sir!?
Dh; What is it?
Watts; Im picking up a massive energy build up
Dh; From where?
Watts; Empty space!
Dh; what..? Shields up, 50 HWS to our position.
*50 hellion warships appear at our position extrmeely quickly*
Dh; whats going on?
Watts; Still not sure sir. Im getting all sorts of weird energy signatures. It seems to be some sort of travel techinque.
Dh; Hold on a sec, im checking the hellion database.
*through my mind i access the ships database core, searching for this abnormality in space, and i find something*
Dh; It correlates with an experimental drive ALL of the legonians tried, but it failed horribly and destroyed every ship that attempted to use it.
Watts; And whoever this is can use it? If the legonians coudltn perfect this technology and these..whatever they are have, we are in biiiig trouble.
Dh; Indeed.
Marks; We have a contact sir!
*the rupture in normal space shoots electricity all ways as its bright white light, and a ship comes out twice the size of the hyperion. It sits there*
Dh; Hail them.
Watts; No response sir!
Marks; Sir they have powered their shields and weapons.
Dh; Get the Adriani ships here! *50 adriani ships and 1 harrucian warship appears*
Watts; There firing!
*the ship opens fire with violet beams, which smash into the HWS, harrucian, and adriani ships shields, doing hevay damage to the ships it hit. it shot a lot of beams, at only 2 HWS, 2 adraini and the harrucian warship*
Watts; Shoudl i return fire sir?!
Dh; NO! Wait!
MArks; sir!
Watts; They have ceased fire. The harrucian warship shields are at 23%, the same as the adriani and HWS.
Dh; A warning shot...
Watts; They are leaing sir..
Dh; Pursuit course.
*the ship flees, and it come sout over terra infront of countless defense sattelites and ships undetected, and destroysa about 140 satellites out of 300, 56 304's out of 1200, and 8 ZEUS classes out of 40.*
*we droip out of temporal driv einfront of everybody else*
Dh; DAMMIT!! OPEN UP, EVERYTHING WE HAVE!
Watts; The ship is changing formation sir!
Marks; The rest of terran defenses are attacking along with us, and enemy shields are at 72%.
Dh; Whats it doing?
*a massive gaping hole appears in the ship, as it is seen building up an absolutely massive amount of energy inside*
Watts; Sir EVERY other terran empire ship just came! the amateus, balthamos, trojan, EVERYONE! all firing sir! we arent goign to bring its shields down in time!!!
DH; NOT AGAIN!!! NOOOO!!!!
Marks; Hundreds of ships have move din the way of the energy sir, but it snot gogin to be enouhg.
Dh; NO! order ALL ships to beam as many people off as they can and get the hell out of here, we arent stopping that thing!
*the ships do so, and beam up ONLY 300,000 people before the weapon fires. The energy shoots as a massive beam as it burries itself into the core of the planet, and the enemy ship looses all power, and it self destructs before the planet erupts, as all terran ships leave*
Watts; DAMMIT!! NONONONONONOOO!!!!!! FIND OUT WHO THE HELL THT WAS!! THEY JUST KILLED BILLIONS!
dh; MAjor i now your angyr we all are, but we need ot relocate the surviviors. ALL ships go to hellion, we will be safe there.
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*During the "doomsday weapon"*
Cole;They've fired some sort of weapon at New Terra! All ships are beaming up people and suplies!
Do the same! Have us do the same! Full power to shields! I want us to se the last ship leave!
*As the last ship leave, the planet explodes, and we're caught in it.*
Gardner;Shields are at 60% and falling quick!
Temporal drive! NOW!*We go to temporal space*
Gardner;Shields was down to 3%, lucky us that we got out.
Yeah. Drop us out.
*We drop out over Hellion. Where the remaining ships are*
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the Balthamos shoots out of hyperspace. through the veiw port a massive ship over 5 times the size of the Hellion can be seen. it is still only in sekeletal stage before the Balthamos opens up a TS tunnel and drops out of hyperspace same time as the other legacy commanders

Olsne : when sir...when?

C-Thor : not now, i will not ask for their assistance until this enemy is idnetified. not even the three Legonian races coul- *when this realisation hits him he freezes and pales*

CONTACT DH AND RAS NOW!!!

*they both appear on screen*

C-Thor : us three assumed only the legonians could have the advanced tech we seen today. i am afraid to say that it was indeed a legonian race we seen today. DH myself and Ras are the sole remaining survivors of the three races we utilise the tech of. but billions of years ago the HArrucians, the oldest of the legonians were young and while the Harrucians were at the caveman level of technological advancement another race their brothers were at the Ancient level of advancement. this race conquered one of the Harrucians eventual allies. so the HArrucians called on the Hellions and Adriani to assist the HArrucians and the Approni to rebel and over throw their older brothers. by this point the Harrucians, Hellions and Adriani had all reached Asgard level of advancement. the Approni were at Goa'uld by this time. they succeded after a 1000 year war and the brother race was never seen form again it was assumed by our brethren back then that their brother race had died off. but today we discovered they had not. the race that had attacked us i name as the Inthosians! the first Legonian brother.
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Over Hellion.

Gem: Not again. That's the Third time ( i think) that New Terra has been destoryed!

Ranger: I know.

Gem: I'm going to let off some steam by blowing up some Beavers. want to come?

Ranger: No i've got to stay here.

Gem: Why?

Ranger: IOA.

Gem: I thought they got blown up?

Ranger: Most of them did, but not all of them.

Gem: Alright, have fun.

Ranger: sure.

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*after heairng the message i link my mind to the database and search the "Ithosians"*

Dh; He seems to be correct. They were thought to be extinct.
Watts; apparently not.
Dh; This means big trouble for us.
Marks; what have we done to them!?
Dh; Not you, us.
Watts; You mean you, ras and c-thor?
Dh; Yes. We are all Legonian, the last of our repective races on this plane. I want you monitoring the galaxy for ANY and i mean absolutely ANY energy signatures like the one that destroyed the planet. If they have more of those things out there, we need ot deal with them.
Watts; Holy shi-
Dh; Watch that language soldier.
Watts; Sorry commander. Theres thousands of signatures pouring into our galaxy from every direction.
Dh; Ships?
Watts; they seem to be sir. Our temporal sensors depict they are solid matter.
Dh; Pick a lone ship, take us there.
*in seconds we travel several hundred lightyears, and appear over the ship. The ship itself is silver and purple, about the size of a hiveship but didferent style. *

Dh; Shields up all weapons armed.
Watts; Shields up yes sir.
*the enemy ship fires everything after sending out a signal, and it fires purple energy bolts and beams, which pummel my shield, doing litel damage.*
Dh; Return fire major.
*the hyperion disables the ships shields in seconds with beams and cannons*
Dh; CEASE FIRE. are you picking up any lifeforms?
Watts; About 700 on the ship. all humanoid. oh and sir, the singal thye sent was picked up, we are about to get a whole buckejt load of company.
Dh; Beam some of the crew of into containment rooms and get us out of here.
*we finish off the ship which explodes in a magnificent purple and white explosions with some fire as we enter temporal drive, and another 10 shiips drop out as we leave*
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*The Amateus drops out over C-Thor*
C-Thor, I've arived. What is the situation?
C-Thor;Well, we'll have a heck of a time of battling this race.
Yeah. From the Adriani core, we've disovered that battling this race so much, made all of our races fleets weaker. And that's what made the Adriani, Haurrican and Hellions go under.
CThor;They will pay! THEY WILL PAY!
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The Trojan drops out over a Beaver world.

Gem: Open up on them!

hundreds of beams shoot out of the ship destorying all the Beaver cities on the planet.

Wells: They're gone sir.

Gem: Good, let's go to the next world.

Wells: Yes sir.

the Trojan goes back to flash drive.
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*The Amateus and it's personal fleet of 10 adriani ships and 4 zeus's is going thourgh hyperspace*
Cole;Sir, we're being hailed. By beavers.
What? Put it through.
Beaver commander;Rasunda. Of the adriani waship amateus.
Yes. What do you want?
BC;We have been attacked by a rase, probobly familiar to you. The Ithosians.
Why should I care? You slaughter my fellow humans every day.
BC;I am not. I am from a faction that oposses this war. We are a group which the beavers wich to destroy. But we have dedicated our selves to science. And we could destroy your ship with ease Rasunda.
Okay. But why are you telling me this?
BC;We wich to go into an alliance with you. Against out brothers and sisters, and against the Ithosians.
I'll be back. Scan this area for my ship in 1 day!
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the Balthamos spits out of hyperspace over a planet brown and scarred from what appears to have been a terrible war. a tear forms in his eye. he then decends to the planet and walks in a severely ruined city. a 12 second flash back shows it to have once been shining and more magnificent that Atlantis and the Timelord cities on Gallifrey combined.

the veiw goes back to a city that has almost everything blown up. what appears to be puddle jumps are broken in half on the ground and another flashback shows these to be the general populations cars. kids racing them around people walking on the street in clothes that boasted advanced civilistaion. the flash back ends and another starts as C-Thor carries on walking. it is a scene of happiness kids playing with hovering toys stun pistols pretending to be soldiers. the a violet beam slams down into the centre of the city and the kids look at it as a wave of red fire slams into the disintegrating them.

a view of the final batte over Legos. a huge war ship exact same as an Aurora only many times larger is lancing violet beams down onto the planet as it fires energy blobs at 3 Harrucian motherships 12 Harrucian battle cruisers, 7 Adriani Warbirds and 9 Hellion dreadnoughts (it looks like when Daddy was engaging 12 hives in "the Siege pt 3") the Harrucian ships pummel the shields of teh enemy more slowler as their weapons , although of higher yeild, take longer to recharge while the Adriani warbird , have a slightly lower yeild than that of the Hellion dreadnoughts, fire the fastest. the beams suddenly stop as explosions rock all over the surface of the planet and the three Legonian brother races cease fire shocked as tehir homeworld becomes devastated by the bombardment made by their older brother race. then tehy go back to fireing on it with a passion burning in them. soon the Inthosian war cruiser's shields go down and explosions blossom on the hull. it then cracks in half and the two peices float harmlessly. all but one Harrucian mother ship, one Hellion dreadnought and one Adriani Warbird cease fire. the three carry on to pulse plasma into the dead ships hull. it is soon nothing more than scraps the size of a 304 floating in orbit of the planet now.

in one of the Harrucian mother ships a man slams his fist down on teh ground as his unshielded capital city was targetted first.
in his mothership Commander Thor cries out saying taht they wno the war against the great opressors, but the price was greater than any of them could have imagined

on the planet the flash back ends and C-Thor is kneeling on the floor slamming his fists into the charred silver of the floor crying.

C-Thor : after all this time...the great war which went unnoticed by the lower species teh races we saved millenia ago but was watched by the advanced races of the universe, all of whom wept with us.

AFTER ALL THE UNNECESSARY DESTRUCTION

they came back. well i'm going to end it now. time to reveal the Legonian legacy and teh ship that will decimate the Inthosians once and for all

*C-Thor looks up his eyes burning with anger and passion*
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On the Legacy. I haven't been on the bridge.
Ranger: What happened?
Lattimer: A ship destroyed New Terra.
Ranger: Again?
Lattimer; Gem wants to talk to you.
Ranger: Put her on.
Gem: Not again! That's the third time that New Terra has been destroyed!
Ranger: I know.
Gem: I going to let off some steam by blowing up some beavers. Want to come?
Ranger: I would like to, but i can't.
Gem: Why?
Ranger: IOA.
Gem: I thought they got killed.
Ranger; Most of them, not all of them.
Gem: Okay, have fun.
Ranger: Yeah, blast beavers!
Gem: Will do.
The Trojan jumps to hyperspace.
Lattimer: What happend to you?
Ranger: When?
Lattimer: On the planet.
Ranger: Oh. I got hit one day about five years ago, except at that time i was fighting Duterians. This one Duterian got a lucky shot, he almost killed me. It created a small hole in my left lung. Every now and then it'll widen up. When I'm here it's normally not a problem, but else where if i let it go. It'll get bad.
Lattimer; I get it now. What's the deal with the IOA?
Ranger: I don't know yet, I'll find out when they get here.
Several hours later.
Ranger: WHAT?!
IOA rep.: You are physically unable to take part in this war any more.
Ranger: Oh try me!
IOA rep.: You will no longer be part of this war.
Ranger; Oh yes i will!
IOA rep.: No you won't.
I shake my head.
Ranger: I will be part of this war.
IOA rep.: Haven't you read the rules? If you are medically over ruled, you can no longer take part in a war.
Ranger: Who medically over ruled me?
My doctor walks in.
Ranger: I'm going to personally shove you out the nearest air lock! No wait, i can do better. Legacy.
Leggy: Sir?
Ranger: Take out 50% of this room's atmosphere.
Leggy: Yes sir.
IOA: You can't do this!
Ranger; Watch me!
In under ten seconds 50% of this room's atmosphere is gone and the IOA reps are having a hard time breathing. I'm fine because i'm used to conditions like this.
IOA: How....Dare....You!
Ranger: Vent another twenty percent.
Leggy: Yes sir.
The Air is very thin. A few IOA reps pass out. I'm haveing a little trouble breathing now.
Ranger: This is only a fraction of what i could do. This ship is linked to my mind, I could put her on auto pilot and patrol the galaxy. Bring the Atmosphere back to normal levels.
Leggy: Yes sir.
Soon all the IOA reps are up and about, they aren't happy with me at all. I'm packing.
Lattimer; Where are you going?
Ranger: Pegasus.
Lattimer: Why?
Ranger: IOA, I'm being forced to leave this war.


Note, IOA did this, i'll be back though.
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*On the Bridge of the Amateus, in hyperspace*
The IOA did what?!
Colonel;Sir, don't get angry now. Remember that time on the Enterprise? I don't think that you would like to shoot your bridge apart.
Okay. But why?
Colonel;She had a medical condition.
So the IOA took a very good commander out of service?!
Colonel;Yes. And I have to go now. Hellion command out.
*The com cuts*
Switch to flash drive. I want to get to Hellion.
*Moments later we drop out over Hellion^*
*I beam down where the IOA sits*
IOA;Haha, Rasunda, how did you find out?
Please, I would know if one of you took a bite to eat. Now, why the hell did you fire Commander Ranger?!
IOA;She wasn't breathing well.
And she didn't prove that when you all whent down, and she stood.
IOA;It does not mather.
*I get enough, and I take up my pistol, and fires a shot at a statues head. Making it fall of*
I think that all of you have read my files?
IOA;Yes. We read every ones files.
Then I guess that you read about the incident on the Enterprise. As I recall, I almost blew a hole on the bridge!
*All of the IOA swallows*
*I use my powers to raise them inte trhe air*
IOA;How dare you!
I dare alot of things. Non of you can fire me. Cause then I would take all Adriani ships, and you would loose the war if you lost 400 ships.
IOA;...-.-
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*On the Bridge of the Amateus, in hyperspace*
The IOA did what?!
Colonel;Sir, don't get angry now. Remember that time on the Enterprise? I don't think that you would like to shoot your bridge apart.
Okay. But why?
Colonel;She had a medical condition.
So the IOA took a very good commander out of service?!
Colonel;Yes. And I have to go now. Hellion command out.
*The com cuts*
Switch to flash drive. I want to get to Hellion.
*Moments later we drop out over Hellion^*
*I beam down where the IOA sits*
IOA;Haha, Rasunda, how did you find out?
Please, I would know if one of you took a bite to eat. Now, why the hell did you fire Commander Ranger?!
IOA;She wasn't breathing well.
And she didn't prove that when you all whent down, and she stood.
IOA;It does not mather.
*I get enough, and I take up my pistol, and fires a shot at a statues head. Making it fall of*
I think that all of you have read my files?
IOA;Yes. We read every ones files.
Then I guess that you read about the incident on the Enterprise. As I recall, I almost blew a hole on the bridge!
*All of the IOA swallows*
*I use my powers to raise them inte trhe air*
IOA;How dare you!
I dare alot of things. Non of you can fire me. Cause then I would take all Adriani ships, and you would loose the war if you lost 400 ships.
IOA;...-.-
suddenly the IOA fall to the ground

C-thor : Rasunda, we're leaving, time to reignite the Legonian's true power

Ras : huh?

C-Thor : DH will meet us at a set of co-ordinates we need the ascended Legonians to speed something up. and only we three can contact them
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On the Trojan.

Gem: THEY DID WHAT??!!

Wells: Yes sir they did.

Gem: take us to Hellion.

Wells: I don't think....

Gem: If you don't i will take you to the nearest air lock and let you out with the rest of the garbage!

Wells: Yes sir!

the Trojan goes to flash drive and a few minutes later drops out over Hellion.

Gem: Beam me down.

Wells: Yes sir.

does so and the IOA are once again confronted by an angry commander.

Gem: Why?

IOA Rep: She had a medical condition.

Gem: And how would you know that?

IOA Rep: We have our sources.

i just glare at them.

IOA Rep : And one other thing, you have to be authorized to visit her.

i pick up a chair and throw it against the wall. i then walk over to the IOA Rep.

Gem: That'll be you next time!

the IOA Rep pales, ovbously understanding the threat.

Gem: Wells, beam me back.

i'm beamed up still glareing at the IOA.

Gem: Take us to the nearest Beaver world.

Wells: Yes sir.
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