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    (More of "Interludes," see previous post for start and next post for end.)

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    Speaking of ship captains, high above on the Jupiter, Carter sits in her quarters going over a roster of crewmembers of the Mao Zedong, the Chinese-built sister-ship of her own ("Acts of Contrition"). Ever since she integrated the crews to reduce the polarization between Western and Chinese refugees, the other MBP-305 has lacked a real commander, and as such as remained stationed in permanent orbit around the Beta Site. But with recent Alliance offensives scoring success after success, the time has come for the refugees to really take the fight to the enemy, and for that she'll need every vessel at her disposal. And that requires a capable and trustworthy officer to command all her forces.

    Like Talbot on the ground, she also has a visitor, and when someone knocks to enter, she turns and shouts for her guest to come on in. The door slides open to reveal Colonel Via Sanders, last seen on the bridge of the DSC-304 Aurora during the Battle of Earth ("Star By Star"). Her uniform looks hastily ironed, but she is otherwise presentable, if somewhat restrained. Sam puts down her tablet and motions for her friend to be seated, thanking her for agreeing to come meet her. Via laughs coldly, pointing out that it's not as if she has anything else to do; she has no one to look after, no ship to oversee, and no purpose here. In a brief flashback, she remembers ordering her vessel to make a run against Vur'naa's cruiser just before entering hyperspace. And she remembers how her arrogance got the better of her when her shields failed and plasma ripped into the belly of her trusty starcraft, venting men and atmosphere alike into space.

    By all accounts, she should be dead, and had Colonel Sobol not had the nick-of-time intuition to have her and her some of her crew beamed over to the Phoenix, that would have been the end of it. And maybe it would have been better, so that she wouldn't be adding one extra person to all those who do nothing to keep fighting the enemy but still requires a portion of their scarce food and water resources every day. But Carter cuts her off, saying that she didn't ask Sanders here to listen to what she did wrong... after all, everyone made their share of mistakes that day, and what's done is done. Instead, she has a job offer for her, one she thinks Via and the survivors of the Aurora would like very, very much.

    Meanwhile, Lor'al is walking among the corpses of her former fleet commanders, their blood now soaking into the carpets of the General Assembly hall. Her warriors are hard at work clearing the chamber, and a te'kal watches from the entrance, his eyes betraying his confusion at the situation. Demanding an explanation, he orders Lor'al to explain this massacre. These were some of the best and brightest tacticians in the armada, and their deaths will certainly be a detriment to the upcoming assault on the infidel stronghold of Dakara. What was she thinking?

    In an instant, the scene shifts to a darkened room, in which the only light shines on the prone figure of Lor'al. And in the background, Anise approaches, asking ever-so-softly, "Yes, just what were you thinking?" The Tok'ra smiles, putting her arm around her host's shoulder, and says that these te'kal are such an annoyance, really. They keep interfering with everything she's trying to do, with the grand plan to conquer this galaxy. Perhaps, she suggests, it would be better to remove this impediment, making it so much easier to further the wishes of the Exarch. Slowly slipping back into the darkness, Anise shakes her head and suppresses a laugh; she may be the prisoner, but it's Lor'al that's trapped in here with her.

    And indeed, it seems that Anise's influence is growing far beyond what the Der'kal had originally estimated her to be capable of. As the te'kal continues to demand an answer, Lor'al slowly extracts a slim metal rod from within her robes, and, with an entirely blank look to her face, turns to face her superior and extends it into one of the aliens' double-bladed swords, last seen when Bra'tac was killed on Dakara ("Divided We Fall"). Then she begins to advance upon the te'kal, twirling the blade around in preparation to strike. And from the recesses of her mind, Anise watches, showing almost no emotion at all as she starts the process of turning the Der'kal's greatest mind into her own greatest weapon against them.

    On his flagship, Vur'naa has finished his torture session with Mitchell for the day, and the Colonel has been thrown into a cell for a short rest. As he nurses his wounds and tries to find a spot to get some sleep, his memories flow to the forefront to continue his private torment; his F-302 spiraling out of control over Paris, the bone-breaking crash into a deserted alleyway, waking up to see Der'kal warriors loading him into a gunship, too weak to fight back, watching his fighter blasted into a thousand pieces as he was carried up into orbit, being forced to play witness to the hours-long bombardment of Earth... it was all too much.

    A clang sounds from down the hall, and Cameron is jolted back to full awareness despite his attempts to drift off. Sitting up and blinking to clear his vision, he watches two alien warriors march past, carrying a cursing female between them. The young woman thrashes within their grasp to no avail, and is finally tossed into a cell adjacent from Mitchell's own. The Der'kal raise the energy barrier and depart, ignoring her cries for revenge against them and their kind. After a few more moments of ranting, though, she finally seems to notice the person staring at her from across the corridor. And when she gasps upon realizing who it is, she leans forward eagerly, saying that it sure is nice to see a friendly face right after one's capture. When Mitchell, not quite sure who he's talking to, asks what she means, Major Rebbecca Eaton smiles back at him, sighing in joy and preparing to explain what his teammates have been doing for the past year in his absence.

    On the other end of the gargantuan vessel, Vur'naa is trying to contact the te'kal who was dispatched to be the Exarch's personal eyes and ears on Earth, but so far all his attempts have failed. He's beginning to suspect that something has gone wrong on the surface, but all communications to and from the ground are normal, with nothing out-of-the-ordinary indicating that there's been an accident of any kind. The one strange thing is that the ships due to depart for Dakara within the hour haven't so much as moved since their commanders shuttled down for a meeting with Lor'al herself, but the conference should have ended some time ago now. Trying to find a logical solution, Vur'naa asks how many ships in the armada have been upgraded with the beaming technology they obtained from the infidels, thinking that perhaps they simply transported up that way. But one of his subordinates informs him that only a dozen or so have, and the only one currently near Earth with that ability is their own. It's still possible that they ringed aboard their separate ships, but Vur'naa doesn't recall seeing matter-streams, either.

    Deciding to investigate this anomaly for himself, he orders his men to prepare to beam him down to their command center in Manhattan. Before he heads down, though, he pulls one of his men aside and says that as soon as he leaves, he wants his ship locked-down, with no one allowed on or off without his express permission. Something's definitely not right, and at the moment, he doesn't entirely trust anyone here... not even Lor'al.

    The invasion's commander herself, her robes somewhat blood-spattered, is already moving onto her next objective, seeming to have regained control of her faculties. Having realized that the massacre of her most-capable admirals has left her planned attack on Dakara without sufficient leadership, she is already recalling other esteemed strategists from around Der'kal space, and putting them in charge of various facets of her assault plan. She still plans to depart Earth orbit on schedule, though now she will be noticeably depleting their defenses here to offset her lack of skilled captains. But she remains sure of victory regardless, given the numerical and technological superiority she expects to have over the Free Jaffa fleet awaiting her. The element of surprise will likely give her the advantage of a crippling first strike, and it will just be a matter of time after that.

    Suddenly, Anise appears beside her, walking down the hallway with her. The other Der'kal moving about don't seem to notice her, implying that this exchange is only within the mind, but something is different; the Tok'ra is not confined to the dark chamber previously seen to represent Lor'al's thoughts, and is instead actively appearing at will, more evidence that her host's ability to confine and repress her is slipping more and more by the day. Asking why it's taken so long to get around to crushing the Jaffa at Dakara, Anise wonders if it's really even possible at this point, given how long they've had to entrench and build up defenses since the last attempt at conquering the planet ("United We Stand"/"Divided We Fall"). Lor'al, though, just ignores the apparition, clearly trying to reassert control over what she sees, but Anise doesn't vanish, despite the attempt. The two continue down the hallway, the former growing more frenzied while the latter continues to taunt her "captor."

    In orbit, Mitchell and Eaton are still going over what the two of them have experienced since the fall of Earth, with Rebbecca outlining many of the successes the resistance movement here has had in setting back the Der'kal. Ironically, China is the most forceful in its retaliation, with almost half of the attacks against the alien occupation force coming from Chinese rebels. Of course, it's unlikely their actions will force the Der'kal into leaving the planet, but at least they get some small measure of vengeance by doing what they can to strike back at the enemy.

    More recently, though, they've shifted focus from insurgent-style attacks to intelligence-gathering missions. In fact, that is how Eaton came to be captured; she broke into a command center set up near London and hacked the central computer system there, and discovered a major plan was in the works to crush the Alliance's last outpost in this sector. In just under an hour, the Der'kal are going to launch a massive assault on Dakara, and their chances of success are almost guaranteed. But to do it, they'll be sapping ships from almost every major holding of theirs in the area, including Earth. In fact, the planet will be at its most-vulnerable since its sack what seems like a lifetime ago. If they could somehow get word to the Alliance, they might even be able to launch their own assault and capture it back.

    Mitchell opens his mouth to reply, but is interrupted by the sudden arrival of Der'kal warriors, who power down the cells' barriers and yank he and Eaton into the corridor. Apparently, Vur'naa has returned from the surface, and he is itching for another session of torture, this time with two subjects to entertain him. But Cameron has no intention of returning to the slab on which he has spent so many months in pain and suffering, and as soon as he sees a chance, he rams rips one arm free and slams his elbow up into his holder's face, knocking the alien soldier sideways. In an instant, he grabs the holstered plasma pistol and looses three shots into its head, dealing a quick and efficient death blow, then turns to face the second warrior... who has already positioned Rebbecca between himself and Cam's weapon.
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      (End of "Interludes," see previous two posts for start.)

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      Seeing that any shot could easily hit the young Major and not his intended target, Mitchell begins to lower the pistol, then thinks better of it and fires up into the ceiling until pieces crack off and fall, forcing the alien to toss Eaton aside and pummel the falling material. In the brief instant he's distracted, Mitchell manages to shoot the alien in the face, bringing him to the ground. Rebbecca rushes over and takes the second pistol, then grins at Cameron and motions to the doorway. Knowing they don't have much time, the two rush off.

      At the Beta Site, Carter is on the Jupiter overseeing a small construction project on the Mao Zedong when Daniel walks up behind her, asking what's up. When he looks out the window at the other 305, he smiles knowingly and tells Sam that she really is one of a kind.

      On the bridge of the Chinese-built ship itself, Via Sanders has entered, looking rested and ready for her new command. Many of the crew from her own ship have been transferred up, and as she slides into the captain's chair, she looks truly like herself once more. After a moment, a transmission comes in from the Jupiter, and she has it put through to see Carter and Jackson smiling at her from a few kilometers away. Thanking Sam for giving her this chance to make up for her mistake over Earth, Sanders asks what that "project" she was working on was. In answer, Carter mentions that they were just repairing the name plate for the Mao Zedong, and it looks fantastic, then suggests that Via take a look and see for herself. Confused but interested, the vessel's new captain stands and goes over to the bridge window, looking out at the side of her ship. And then she gasps, tears springing to her eyes when she sees the word AURORA emblazoned on the side of the battlecruiser. Speechless, she can only stumble back into her seat, amazed.

      Outside, a group of hyperspace windows are opening, ejecting the Apollo, Phoenix, and the rest of the refugee fleet back into realspace. Sam welcomes them back home from the Jupiter, asking how their trip to Pegasus was. Colonel Ellis explains that it was successful in far more ways than they ever imagined possible, and anxiously continues that, while there, Colonel Sobol decided to take a stop at M36-119, a former Janus outpost that SG-1 had visited while searching for Pandora's ultimate weapon ("Pandora's Box"). And while the entire world had indeed been destroyed, a sweep of the area over a month-long period finally revealed something floating within the shattered remains of the planet.

      Turning to one of his crewmembers, he steps away to reveal a golden orb resting in the captain's chair, no worse for wear even after all it's been through; Pandora's Box. Carter has no idea what to say, but then, she's spared having to come up with something when another transmission comes in, this one from out of the system. It contains a complete readout of a Der'kal battle plan to attack Dakara... a plan that will involve pulling out over half the ships defending Earth. There's no way to tell who sent it, but Sam immediately orders it sent to Heliopolis for decryption. If it pans out, then this "gift" Ellis has brought may enable them to do something they've been waiting more than a year to commence with...

      And a few hours later, the mission begins. Colonel Taylor, in the Beta Site gate room, wishes his comrades good luck as the camera pulls out of the mountain, skimming down into the settlement where the refugees stand looking up to the skies in anticipation. The view keeps flashing upward, through the clouds and into orbit, where the refugee fleet is pulling into formation in preparation for the jump into hyperspace. F-302s are ending their patrols and returning to their hanger bays, their pilots ready for the coming conflict. But the camera keeps going, flying by them and past numerous planets, ships, battles, etc., all in a matter of seconds, crossing half the galaxy in an instant. Chulak, Dar Eshkalon, and the ruined Nueva are just a few of the vistas seen blurring by as the stars of the Orion Belt come into focus. And then, just as things begin to slow down, a flurry of asteroids, followed by a small red world, fill the screen, and after a moment, at last, Earth and its moon, surrounded by the waiting Der'kal armada.

      Humanity is coming home.

      ((To Be Continued...))
      Last edited by s09119; 05 April 2009, 10:58 AM.
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        excellent episode love seeing mitchell back and sanders shame about daedalus though cant wait for battle of earth and the use of pandoras box keep up the good work
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          i agree with the above post.

          i have to say i THINK i know how this battle will go out. s09 if yo could pm me and ill tell you how i think you'll make it run out. and crazy tom i wouldnt be surprised if you have the same idea i do.
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            OMG!
            Earth here we come!
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            My fan-fic, swedish outpost

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              Let me see... the best option right now would be to send Pandora's box to the FJN, and have it deployed by a cloaked ship in the midle of the der'kal armada onc eit exist hypespace, since settign it off in earth orbit is a Very Bad Idea.

              Then have the rag-tag fleet () assult earth, with the der'kal at half strenth, and a good chunk of their COs dead, they might be able to take it back.

              If they do, that means TheAlliacne would have a beache head behind th der'kal line of battle, and the added benefit of acess to the kowledge and industry to build Der'kal ships (if those ship yards don't self destruct).

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                part 2 part 2 part 2!
                im not impatient at all.
                so pandoras box.
                what i don't get is, yeah sure we can get earth back (not sure for how long before Der'kal want it back) but what about Dakara wouldn't it make more sense to go there and protect that, rather then take Earth back.
                I suppose at Earth we can beam up survivors and leave. or get some of the Der'kal ships being built. That'll be nice, a few Der'kal ships added to our fleet.

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                  Superb episode. I really loved the last line:

                  Humanity is coming home.
                  I am enthusiastically looking forward to Part 2.

                  but what about Dakara wouldn't it make more sense to go there and protect that, rather then take Earth back.
                  We already hold Dakara and if we take Earth even for a little while we take out a significant portion of the Der'Kal's shipbuilding resources and their forward command center.

                  Dr. Daedalus
                  God is the original transporter.

                  Acts 8:39b-40a: The Spirit of the Lord suddenly took Phillip away and the official did not see him again, but went on his way rejoicing. Philip, however, appeared at Azotus (an old city in ancient Israel) and traveled about.

                  He is also the author of love and justice:

                  Spoiler:
                  Romans 5:8: But God demonstrates his own love for us in this: while we were still sinners, Christ died for us.

                  John 14:6: Jesus (Christ) answered: I am the way and the truth and the life. No one comes to the Father except through me.

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                    Originally posted by Crazy Tom View Post
                    Let me see... the best option right now would be to send Pandora's box to the FJN, and have it deployed by a cloaked ship in the midle of the der'kal armada onc eit exist hypespace, since settign it off in earth orbit is a Very Bad Idea.

                    Then have the rag-tag fleet () assult earth, with the der'kal at half strenth, and a good chunk of their COs dead, they might be able to take it back.

                    If they do, that means TheAlliacne would have a beache head behind th der'kal line of battle, and the added benefit of acess to the kowledge and industry to build Der'kal ships (if those ship yards don't self destruct).
                    o.O i expected our ideas similar no exactly the same.... get out of my head!
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                      Originally posted by Commander Thor View Post
                      o.O i expected our ideas similar no exactly the same.... get out of my head!
                      Oh my! My spelling's atrotious!

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                        Originally posted by Dr. Daedalus View Post
                        We already hold Dakara and if we take Earth even for a little while we take out a significant portion of the Der'Kal's shipbuilding resources and their forward command center.

                        Dr. Daedalus
                        i know we still hold Dakara but what if it falls to the Der'kal? surely it'd be better to keep one planet instead of loosing a planet to get another thats already been devastated.
                        And when we get earth we'd get some Der'kal ships, only in construction but still we can finish them. Unless they self-destruct.
                        But i doubt the Der'kal would have self-destructs on things because they'd never expect anyone to get earth back so theres no need.

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                          Originally posted by Crazy Tom View Post
                          Oh my! My spelling's atrotious!
                          huh?
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                            Originally posted by Dodgified View Post
                            i know we still hold Dakara but what if it falls to the Der'kal? surely it'd be better to keep one planet instead of loosing a planet to get another thats already been devastated.
                            That logic hinges on the requirement that the human leaders (particularly Sam Carter) are making decisions that are based on strategy and not just emotion.

                            What does Carter know about Earth? The only thing she knows is that there are some survivors and that there is a fleet in orbit--a portion (of unknown size) of which will soon be departing. She also doesn't know that What's-Her-Name is unstable and that the top military minds stationed at Earth are now dead.

                            Will they undertake any intelligence gathering before setting off for what could, for all they know, be an ambush?

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                              Originally posted by Dodgified View Post
                              i know we still hold Dakara but what if it falls to the Der'kal? surely it'd be better to keep one planet instead of loosing a planet to get another thats already been devastated.
                              And when we get earth we'd get some Der'kal ships, only in construction but still we can finish them. Unless they self-destruct.
                              But i doubt the Der'kal would have self-destructs on things because they'd never expect anyone to get earth back so theres no need.
                              Two points:

                              Number 1. If we retake Earth the Der'Kal will be forced to abandon their assault on Dakara and attempt to take Earth back.

                              Number 2. If we retake Earth and successfully defend it we can then send Pandora's box to the Free Jaffa on Dakara and let them make mincemeat of the Der'Kal attack force.

                              Dr. Daedalus
                              God is the original transporter.

                              Acts 8:39b-40a: The Spirit of the Lord suddenly took Phillip away and the official did not see him again, but went on his way rejoicing. Philip, however, appeared at Azotus (an old city in ancient Israel) and traveled about.

                              He is also the author of love and justice:

                              Spoiler:
                              Romans 5:8: But God demonstrates his own love for us in this: while we were still sinners, Christ died for us.

                              John 14:6: Jesus (Christ) answered: I am the way and the truth and the life. No one comes to the Father except through me.

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                                Originally posted by Jeffala View Post
                                That logic hinges on the requirement that the human leaders (particularly Sam Carter) are making decisions that are based on strategy and not just emotion.

                                What does Carter know about Earth? The only thing she knows is that there are some survivors and that there is a fleet in orbit--a portion (of unknown size) of which will soon be departing. She also doesn't know that What's-Her-Name is unstable and that the top military minds stationed at Earth are now dead.

                                Will they undertake any intelligence gathering before setting off for what could, for all they know, be an ambush?
                                i suppose emotions trumped strategy right now. Lor'al by the way.
                                Why do they trust a message they got, it doesn't make sense. they should send a ship to have a look, drop out a jumper at the edge of the system and let it fly in cloaked, im not sure if the Der'kal can detect cloaked jumpers but its less likely than cloaked cargo ships.

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