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What would the leading corporation in commercial space flight want with a bunch of nuclear weapons? The power and ability to get to Mars in seven days, the technology exists, the means to get there exists, to operate these powerful weapons, a team has been put together in order to achieve their goal of getting to Mars.
The Federal Government does not take well to losing a few dozen atomic weapons. Thus, they quickly put together their own prized expedition, when they fail to stop the private expedition. This new team has two objectives: the first, to bring back the team that is heading towards Mars and claim the prize that has been waiting for too long.
The race for the Prize is on. The Prize? A crashed Alien Ship, discovered five years before, by two astronauts lost in space.
Within hours of the private expedition landing on the barren planet, a large two-day dust storm ensues forcing the expedition inside the possibly hostile ship. Soon after the dust storm clears a large Alien armada arrives, the ancient enemy of the race that once occupied the ship now being explored by humankind.
Hoping to gain fame, and power commander Lang, who is willing to cross any line as long as it gain him a possible advantage, orders the ship to take off to face the armada. A space battle quickly begins. While the battle rages on, Caleb Kearns, a former sergeant in the Air Force who was released on dishonorable discharge, the one who originally discovered the hidden data about the Alien Ship, activates the Ships’ AI.
With the battle about to be lost, Commander Lang, orders the immediate retreat of the ship; leaving earth relatively defenseless.
With the ship now flying away at Faster than Light Travel, the military expedition makes itself known, by having the leading officer Jessica, toss an engagement ring to Caleb, stating, “Here’s your ring since you weren’t able to make it to our wedding”
Now two groups have to survive with limited supplies, while trying not to kill each other; they must find a way to work together against the a group of aliens that they know little about, while trying to discover how to operate a ship with the hope of one day being able to make it home and find out what happened.
What would the leading corporation in commercial space flight want with a bunch of nuclear weapons? The power and ability to get to Mars in seven days, the technology exists, the means to get there exists, to operate these powerful weapons, a team has been put together in order to achieve their goal of getting to Mars.
The Federal Government does not take well to losing a few dozen atomic weapons. Thus, they quickly put together their own prized expedition, when they fail to stop the private expedition. This new team has two objectives: the first, to bring back the team that is heading towards Mars and claim the prize that has been waiting for too long.
The race for the Prize is on. The Prize? A crashed Alien Ship, discovered five years before, by two astronauts lost in space.
Within hours of the private expedition landing on the barren planet, a large two-day dust storm ensues forcing the expedition inside the possibly hostile ship. Soon after the dust storm clears a large Alien armada arrives, the ancient enemy of the race that once occupied the ship now being explored by humankind.
Hoping to gain fame, and power commander Lang, who is willing to cross any line as long as it gain him a possible advantage, orders the ship to take off to face the armada. A space battle quickly begins. While the battle rages on, Caleb Kearns, a former sergeant in the Air Force who was released on dishonorable discharge, the one who originally discovered the hidden data about the Alien Ship, activates the Ships’ AI.
With the battle about to be lost, Commander Lang, orders the immediate retreat of the ship; leaving earth relatively defenseless.
With the ship now flying away at Faster than Light Travel, the military expedition makes itself known, by having the leading officer Jessica, toss an engagement ring to Caleb, stating, “Here’s your ring since you weren’t able to make it to our wedding”
Now two groups have to survive with limited supplies, while trying not to kill each other; they must find a way to work together against the a group of aliens that they know little about, while trying to discover how to operate a ship with the hope of one day being able to make it home and find out what happened.
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