And would dearly love some help.
I just finished writing the introduction to a story I had been writing for the last 10 or so years... About the last day on Earth and how the planet gets taken over..... Had done several versions of this including one version where the aliens came from Mars, Mars being a hollow shell that hid their giant ship.. And the aliens were humans.
Current story will maintain this only I took the Mars thing out. I need some comments so iif you guys can please download the file and have a read and post what you think. This is only the intro..
I just finished writing the introduction to a story I had been writing for the last 10 or so years... About the last day on Earth and how the planet gets taken over..... Had done several versions of this including one version where the aliens came from Mars, Mars being a hollow shell that hid their giant ship.. And the aliens were humans.
Current story will maintain this only I took the Mars thing out. I need some comments so iif you guys can please download the file and have a read and post what you think. This is only the intro..
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