Originally posted by astrogeologist
no, i hadn't read it.
It's pretty good. I think, constructive crit time, my only issues is jack asking daniel's permission for choosing a new boss and that it was a great plot that coulda lasted 100 pages....it's ok as it is, just left me a little wanting at the end. you know, more would have been great
thanks for pointing it out astro, i love finding new fic
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