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    A cool, dramatic, and better way to end the ori arch

    I think its safe to assume that this merlin arch is going to lead us to the end...we find this bloodstone, maybe an ancient helps us here and there, and bam ori are gone....
    i liked it in the replicator arch but doing it a second time is stupid and shows a lack of creativity...

    here is a better way to finish it(you listening joe!):

    We go searching for the merlin device but we can never find it. Turns out the ancients found him out and stopped him.

    The ori keep kicking our asses. We've managed to find some ancient technology that has helped us slow their advance but we just cant keep up with the sheer volume. It's not looking good. We managed to shut down the supergate but now they are just hyperdriving in. Uh oh!

    We get some intel that the ori are going to wipe out earth since a) we are like the head of the resistence and b)its a nice **** you to the ancients

    luckily we still have some drones left in antartica but things arent looking good....turns out the whole ori fleet is coming our way. We are basically going to have to make a last stand. Atlantis sent over some puddle jumpers and orion b/c it survived to help, we got tons of gould ships and the asgard have helped us by sending a good amount of ships. However, in the end we know its futile so we are evacuating or important people to atlantis.

    Suddenly, daniel dissapears. he finds himself looking at oma. She tells him that the ancients are aware of what is happening and that many want to be involved but there is not a majority of them who wish to do so. They had hoped we would have put up a better fight. She says that she is going to send him back with some knowledge that will help them.
    Bam! Daniel is sent back with some ancient knowledge on how to make cooler weapons and shields, etc. hopefully it will work..

    enter ori fleet.....vs our newly upgraded ships....huge space battle ensues (im we are taking like a good 15 minutes of VSFX) but we are still losing. we manged to take out a good number of ori ships but there is just too much. In fact the ori have managed to get some soldiers on the ground on earth causing havoc!

    uh oh! what do we do now! Suddenly, ascended beings realize they need to do something come down and help us whip out some ships.....and the ori on the ground.....but as they do this the ori appear! and suddenly its the ori vs ancients in a battle royale. the ensuing choas allows us to get the upper hand on 1 ori ship which we take over and turn against the others.... (as the ancients are fighting)

    then all of a sudden the ori ships stop fighting....and the ascended beings disseapar.....daniel again is beamed somewhere..its oma (w/merlin)...they tell him that the ori were too powerful and that the only way to really destory them was to sacrifice themselves collectively...and thats what are going to do...cue emotional goodbye...cue merlin saying but we left presents around so that you all may one day reach our level of enlightment...

    poof! daniel and everyone back on the dadelus.....daniel explains what happens...

    the end.

    build this up over a season and it creates a very dramatic ending without the need for a duex es machina
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    #2
    Yeah, right...
    Sounds to me like a reedition of the Anubis situation...
    But the ascended beings will surely feel concerned at one point... Let's hope they do not screw up once again and flee without helping...
    "Those who can make you believe absurdities can make you commit atrocities" Voltaire (1694-1778)

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      #3
      The idea is good... But needs to be built up with many twists and turns throughout several seasons... This way, they can still deal with other off-world situations, have stand-alone episodes, and contiue the main plot (Ori Invasion).

      Otherwise, we have another Angel S4...

      Mattathias

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        #4
        Yeah and the Dominion can battle the Federation to a standstill...wait..what series was this ? OH YEAH...STARGATE!

        You know what, i really do think merline device wont work becasue face it, they ARE all knwoing ancient, and I bet you , what you will see is a knock down drag out fight between Ancient and oris, talking about suns exploding and whole planet and civilization being destoyed.

        And in the end it will be up to SG1 and SG1 alone! To convice them that, they are hurting the very thing they want or want to protect. Then Lorien shows up and they all go to another galaxy...OH GAWD DAMN it... they better do it really well is all iw ill say...

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          #5
          Heres one even better...

          While we look for Merlin's weapon (Its gonna take awhile), we let our new friends

          Spoiler:
          The Lucian Alliance


          fight the Ori until they are completely wipe out, then we use Merlin's weapon to get rid of the Ori. Kill two birds with one stone.
          http://www.bentsynapse.net/images/zidane_dethstar.gif
          If only we have Zidane on Stargate.....
          **Mentally replace that deathstar with an Ori ship**

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            #6
            Originally posted by keppiezbt
            We go searching for the merlin device but we can never find it. Turns out the ancients found him out and stopped him.

            The ori keep kicking our asses. We've managed to find some ancient technology that has helped us slow their advance but we just cant keep up with the sheer volume. It's not looking good.
            We get some intel that the ori are going to wipe out earth since a) we are like the head of the resistence and b)its a nice **** you to the ancients

            luckily we still have some drones left in antartica but things arent looking good....turns out the whole ori fleet is coming our way. We are basically going to have to make a last stand. Atlantis sent over some puddle jumpers and orion b/c it survived to help, we got tons of gould ships and the asgard have helped us by sending a good amount of ships. However, in the end we know its futile so we are evacuating or important people to atlantis.

            enter ori fleet.....vs our ships....huge space battle ensues (im we are taking like a good 15 minutes of VSFX) but we are still losing. we manged to take out a good number of ori ships but there is just too much. In fact the ori have managed to get some soldiers on the ground on earth causing havoc! The Soldiers & Ori Supersoldiers take out key posisions on Earth with the help of The Ori Ships.

            The Odyseus, Daedulus & Orion, outnumbered, outgunned & had the crap kicked out of them sacrifice themselves to take out the Ori Supergate/s but there are still Ori ships around.

            Cut to earth, militaries all around the globe are attacking & defending against the ori soldiers & supersoldiers but the Ori S&SS gain the uperhand, we're talking about whole guns blazing, explodions warground here.

            An Oracle (there are many know) with his/her legions of S&SS take control of the gateroom, Landry orders an evacuation & sets the self destruct, they run out of the mounatin, but Landry sees Carolyn Lam (his daughter) killed by the Oracle, he goes balastic & confronts the Oracle in handtohand combat. The Oracel agins the uperhand but then: BOOM! the mounatins explodes, CGI & VSFX masterpiece.

            SG1 (except Daniel & Vala, they're ori prisoners, sent back to ori Homeworld) retreet in a hail of bullets through the blurring remains of a stiil operation Supergate (it's two way ) in a Hat'ak ship with Brat'ac covering their rear. They make it to the ori galaxy when Bam! A defence satillite fires at them, they're about to be destroyed when Bra'tak emerges through the gate in another hat'ak ship & takes the shot for them, thus, the death of Brat'ak.

            SG1 land on a nearby planet filled with Ori Zealots & try to contatc earth or the asgard. Somehow, Thor arrives and beams them onboard & tells them earth is lost, Jack O'Neill, Hammond, the Lusian Alliance, the Asgard & the frre jaffa tried to make a last stand on Earth, Dakara, Chulak & other planets but they lost & where excecuted. The Milky Way is lost...

            Thor says he is probably the last asgard allive as the Ori simutainiously attacked their galaxy and it too was lost. He then says the Ori are planning to invade pegasis, the only other galaxy occupied by the Alterans that hasn't been taken. Teal'c Sam & Cam are shocked.

            Cut Forward ten years, Thor is dying due to genetic defects of cloning, only a new body can save him & they were destroyed in the Ori purge. Thor dies.
            Sg1 get a last communication with Atlantis by depleating Thor's ship's power supply. They're under heavy fire &.... the radio cuts out... ouch.

            Daniel & Vala are being tortured by Vala's oracle child (now a beautiful 25) to try & convert them to origin. Daniel folds, & is converted into a prior, who, in his last sane kind gesture before evil takes over, murders vala in a mercy killing...

            Evil Daniel his legions of soldiers go hunting for SG1, who are know the only un-origin humans left, with Atlantis & Pegasis being destroyed by the Ori.

            They find the planet SG1 is hiding on and lay wast to it, Cam dies saving teal'c & sam (who is now mysteriously pregnant with an oracle) by destroying the gate with an OriSupergun, thereby killing himself & evildanny.

            Months later, sam dies in childbirth & Teal'c looks after the oracle superbaby, who ISN'T rapidly aging. Thus ends Staragte SG1 & Stargate Arlantis, thereby starting Stargate: Origin.

            Stargate: Origin:

            A lone, black warrior with a oddly shapped golden symbol, burn't onto his forhead lies dying, he is surronded by his adopted child (age 23 with uncanny superabilities) named Jack, after an old friend, & Jack's wife, Kathryn who was resccued by the two from an Ori purge.

            The warrior dies, & Jack & Kathryn have to make it on their own in the harsh Ori controlled world, helping to mount a rebellion with the help of a mysterious townswomen named "Oma". What will happen next on Stargate:Origin? It's up to me to decide...



            Now that is an ending! & a new beginning! Amazing!

            Casualties:
            Laudry
            Carolyn Lam
            Asgard
            Earth
            Jaffa nation
            Atlantis
            Lucian Allaince
            Ascended Ancients
            Jack O'Neill
            Hammond
            Bra'tak
            Thor
            Vala
            Daniel
            Cameron
            Sam
            Teal'c

            Survivors:
            Jack Jnr (good Oracle)
            Kathryn (his wife)
            Oma- the mysterious townsperson, Ascended Alteran who helps them.
            The Ori...
            Last edited by The Prophet; 11 March 2006, 05:30 PM.

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              #7
              There are going to be complications. I doubt we'll get rid of the Ori so quickly! At most when we work the grail it'll probably get rid of some of the Ori before the Ancients decide to destroy the thing to save themselves... or at the very least shut it off. Then we'll still have some Ori floating around... severely depleted of resources and strength but still out there and now rather mad. This is just a theory obviously, but I greatly doubt that the writers would bring about an ending so similar to one we just witnessed... not to mention conveniently sooner than all others!

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                #8
                I bet Arthur, really an Ancient or possibly a FURLING?, and his knights return with the Sange Griel, (HolyGraille/Ancient weapon) after somehow being warned of the Ori's arrival, possibly by the sword being removed from the stone and they proceed to wail on the Oris ships and soldiers. The people who were killed in the battle have ascended and eventually will return to our realm. Oma and Merlin possibly persuade the Ascended to help out this time.
                Last edited by Antimatter Sam; 11 March 2006, 05:42 PM.

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                  #9
                  Why DO we have to defeat the Ori? Can't we just let them take over & dominate us? That would be great! Trying to defeat the Ori from within! Everthing is basicly destroyed so we have to become rebels who take out key posisions! Read My previous post for what I think should happen, with a little help at the start from keppiezbt! But a completly different ending! Ah-ha!

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                    #10
                    Originally posted by Antimatter Sam
                    I bet Arthur, really an Ancient or possibly a FURLING?, and his knights return with the Sange Griel, (HolyGraille/Ancient weapon) after somehow being warned of the Ori's arrival, possibly by the sword being removed from the stone and they proceed to wail on the Oris ships and soldiers. The people who were killed in the battle have ascended and eventually will return to our realm. Oma and Merlin possibly persuade the Ascended to help out this time.
                    I say arthur has been in stasis for the past 1,000 years or so. Spoiler: Pulling the sword from the stone activates his stasis chamber to open.

                    As for this season (10), they can't completly resolve the ori issue because there needs to be enough story line left for the new sg1 movie.
                    Janus: “What is it you called them?” Dr. Weir: “ZPM, Zero Point Module.” Janus: “Yes” Janus: “They're designed to operate in parallel, all three providing power to the city simultaneously.” Janus: “However, used in sequence, it may be possible to sustain the power for the needed time.”

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                      #11
                      How about Arthur's Knights are Ancient Superships? Arthur is in Stasis across the Universe and the sword being pulled activates the ships and he and the crews wake up and return to help Earth even things out.
                      http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/9...sigcopy9ie.jpg
                      The Alliance is born!!!!

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                        #12
                        Originally posted by deadman
                        How about Arthur's Knights are Ancient Superships? Arthur is in Stasis across the Universe and the sword being pulled activates the ships and he and the crews wake up and return to help Earth even things out.
                        Exactly Deadman! I just hope Arthur has some answers about the Ancients. The last thing I want to see is him slaying the Ori with his superships, only to die in the hands of Carter before he can tell us about the Ancients.
                        Janus: “What is it you called them?” Dr. Weir: “ZPM, Zero Point Module.” Janus: “Yes” Janus: “They're designed to operate in parallel, all three providing power to the city simultaneously.” Janus: “However, used in sequence, it may be possible to sustain the power for the needed time.”

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                          #13
                          Originally posted by keppiezbt
                          build this up over a season and it creates a very dramatic ending without the need for a duex es machina
                          sorry, the oma bits are exactly that, a deus ex machina.

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                            #14
                            i agree with The Prophet. why do we HAVE TO defeat the ori, i mean the end of the series would be great if they destroy earth and sg-1 is killed(or is transfered to atlantis)
                            the movie would be us defeating the ori from our only base left - atlantis
                            God must love stupid people because he made so many of them.

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                              #15
                              Originally posted by Auralis
                              sorry, the oma bits are exactly that, a deus ex machina.
                              well, lets be real...the way the writers wrote the ori w/o something big we cant defeat them..

                              it makes it more intesting then finding a weapon and winning....one two its over
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